नाम अधृत हो जाने को

by ADHRUT on January 26, 2013, 05:10:18 PM
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रूह मांगती है इक नया लिहाफ
बनके जिश्म तेरे पास आने को
दिल ये मांगता है इक और मौका
बनके बादल तुझपे बरस जाने को

अतीत की सिल्वटों में दफन है राज़ कई
मचलता हूँ मगर नगमा कोई तुझे सुनाने को
इक पल को मुझे भी तू सोच कभी
तरसता हूँ तेरे ख्यालो से महक जाने को

कोई पल जो ज़ेहन में हो तो तुम भी गुनगुनाओ
साज़ बैठे है कई बस छेड़े जाने को
है लम्हा मानो थम सा गया अभी
तुम्हे सुनने को सुनते जाने को

हवाओं में कोई गीत घुला हुआ सा है
बह रहा है दूर निकल जाने को
भागता रहा था बहोत दूर खुद से
खुद ही को भूल जाने को

तुम बिन ख्वाब कुछ कच्चे पक्के से लगते है
की ज़िन्दगी राह टकती है तेरे लौट आने को
सुनो तुम अब लौट आओ की ज़िन्दगी
राह टकती है मुकम्मल हो जाने को
नाम "अधृत" हो जाने को
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«Reply #1 on: January 26, 2013, 05:15:08 PM »
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waaaah... laajawaab kriti... very very nice.......
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«Reply #2 on: January 26, 2013, 05:20:47 PM »
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 happy3 जी शुक्रिया आपका.. यु ही प्रोत्साहित करते रहिये हमे लिखने की आकांक्षा होती रहेगी..
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«Reply #3 on: January 26, 2013, 05:39:01 PM »
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bahut khoob janaab...
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«Reply #4 on: January 26, 2013, 07:22:31 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: January 27, 2013, 06:08:36 AM »
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wah wah bahut khoob Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: January 27, 2013, 08:40:31 AM »
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waah waah bahut hee khoobsoorat
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«Reply #7 on: January 27, 2013, 09:53:18 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #8 on: January 28, 2013, 10:08:42 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #10 on: January 28, 2013, 08:31:21 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: January 29, 2013, 06:43:49 PM »
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Aadaab Janab!


Kia baat hai behad dilfareb aur kafi gehre ahsaas O khayaal
bayaaN kiye hai janab.. waqai dil ko chhute hai aapke yeH
ahsaas O khayaal.. Usual Smile

is khoobsurat aur dilkash kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad
O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabad rahiye... Usual Smile

khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   
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