बरसते देखा

by sapana on June 24, 2009, 12:39:09 AM
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तेरी आंखोसे महोबतके रंग बरसते देखा,

मेरे दिलको तेरी नझरोसे पिघलते देखा,

कभी तो अपने सीनेसे लगाकर देख,

मेंने तो तेरी बाहोमे मुझे मरते देखा.

हर बार एक ही सवालका अलग जवाब,

मेंने तेरा बार बार जवाब बदलते देखा.

अभी रूठे और अभी मान गये हो तुम,

मौसमक़ी तरह मैने तुमको बदलते देखा.

तेरे नामसे सोना,तेरे नामसे जगना,

सपनाको हमने तेरा नाम जपते देखा.

सपना
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«Reply #1 on: June 24, 2009, 12:57:24 AM »
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Wow Sapana very beautiful creation,bahut acha likhti hai aap. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: June 24, 2009, 02:03:16 AM »
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Thanks Madhuveshji. Usual Smile
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thanks Kaashji icon_salut
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«Reply #4 on: June 24, 2009, 07:58:21 PM »
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bahoot achcha likha sapna
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Thanks Bekararji hello
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«Reply #6 on: June 25, 2009, 12:34:32 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Sapana Ji
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Thanks Talatji Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2009, 03:33:39 PM »
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Sapana Ji.. Behad Mohabbat Bhare aur Khubsoorat Alfaaaz Kaagaz Par Utaare hain aapne.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob.. Applause Applause


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