मिल जाओ कभी

by vimmi singh on October 07, 2012, 05:36:15 PM
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 1022 times)
vimmi singh
Guest
Reply with quote
ना दिन ढले कभी
ना दिल रोये कभी
तेरे आस पास में
ना रात जगे कभी
रात हो भी तो हो
चांदनी रात हो
पास आओ तो हो
बरसात झिमी झिमी

मेरी सुबहों में तुम 
शामों में हो तुम
पूस की धूप सी
मेरी राहों  में तुम
पास हो जब दूर  हो
और  पास आओ कभी
सुबह  की किरणों में
मुझे मिल जाओ कभी
ना दिन ढले कभी
ना दिल रोये कभी
Logged
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 115
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #1 on: October 07, 2012, 06:27:47 PM »
Reply with quote
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar Vimmi ji....!!!
Logged
MANOJ6568
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 31
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
42 days, 19 hours and 59 minutes.

Astrologer & Shayer

Posts: 12017
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile
«Reply #2 on: October 07, 2012, 06:30:15 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: vimmi singh on October 07, 2012, 05:36:15 PM
ना दिन ढले कभी
ना दिल रोये कभी
तेरे आस पास में
ना रात जगे कभी
रात हो भी तो हो
चांदनी रात हो
पास आओ तो हो
बरसात झिमी झिमी

मेरी सुबहों में तुम  
शामों में हो तुम
पूस की धूप सी
मेरी राहों  में तुम
पास हो जब दूर  हो
और  पास आओ कभी
सुबह  की किरणों में
मुझे मिल जाओ कभी
ना दिन ढले कभी
ना दिल रोये कभी
nice
jab tak gum nahi Hota hai pass
khushi ka tabtak nahi hota ehsaas
Logged
vimmi singh
Guest
«Reply #3 on: October 07, 2012, 06:31:44 PM »
Reply with quote
bahut bahut shukriya Hriday ji......... Usual Smile
Logged
vimmi singh
Guest
«Reply #4 on: October 07, 2012, 06:33:09 PM »
Reply with quote
thank you very much Manoj ji.......Usual Smile
sahi kaha aapne......
Logged
sksaini4
Ustaad ae Shayari
*****

Rau: 853
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
112 days, 8 hours and 51 minutes.
Posts: 36414
Member Since: Apr 2011


View Profile
«Reply #5 on: October 08, 2012, 01:19:54 AM »
Reply with quote
bahut hee sunder
Logged
gaytri gupta
Guest
«Reply #6 on: October 08, 2012, 01:52:45 AM »
Reply with quote
nice...
Logged
aqsh
Guest
«Reply #7 on: October 08, 2012, 05:42:43 AM »
Reply with quote
very very nice...
Logged
vimmi singh
Guest
«Reply #8 on: October 08, 2012, 01:35:29 PM »
Reply with quote
thank you soooo much saini sir...... Usual Smile
Logged
vimmi singh
Guest
«Reply #9 on: October 08, 2012, 01:36:42 PM »
Reply with quote
shukriya Gaytri ji.......... Usual Smile
Logged
vimmi singh
Guest
«Reply #10 on: October 08, 2012, 01:37:29 PM »
Reply with quote
shukriya aqsh ji....... Usual Smile
Logged
suman59
Guest
«Reply #11 on: October 08, 2012, 01:47:06 PM »
Reply with quote
vimmi jee ati sunder peshkash. daad  Applause Applause Applause
Logged
vimmi singh
Guest
«Reply #12 on: October 08, 2012, 01:51:39 PM »
Reply with quote
bahut bahut shukriya aapka Suman ji.......Usual Smile
Logged
suman59
Guest
«Reply #13 on: October 08, 2012, 01:55:47 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: vimmi singh on October 08, 2012, 01:51:39 PM
bahut bahut shukriya aapka Suman ji.......Usual Smile

after reading your lovely creation... once again I wanted to say waaah.. keep writing. you write very very good. Usual Smile
Logged
nandbahu
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 122
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
20 days, 4 hours and 11 minutes.
Posts: 14553
Member Since: Sep 2011


View Profile
«Reply #14 on: October 08, 2012, 02:06:48 PM »
Reply with quote
bahut khoob vimmi ji
Logged
Pages: [1] 2  All
ReplyPrint
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq > Topic: मिल जाओ कभी
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
December 25, 2024, 07:24:56 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
Shayri
by mkv
[December 22, 2024, 05:36:15 PM]
मोहब्बत लिखने की ,,,saah...
by saahill
[December 19, 2024, 08:27:42 AM]
तुम्हारे ख़्वाब ,,,,, sa...
by saahill
[December 17, 2024, 08:39:55 AM]
सुना था मोहब्बत ,,,, saa...
by saahill
[December 15, 2024, 06:04:49 AM]
साजिश नहीं ,,,, saahill
by saahill
[December 13, 2024, 06:54:09 AM]
zikar tumhara ,,,, saahil...
by saahill
[December 10, 2024, 08:23:12 AM]
khamosh ,,,, saahill
by saahill
[December 10, 2024, 08:22:15 AM]
Hyderabadi language
by Arif Uddin
[December 03, 2024, 07:06:48 PM]
parhezz ,,,, saahill
by saahill
[November 26, 2024, 08:47:05 AM]
mulaqaat nhi ho rahi,,,, ...
by saahill
[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.102 seconds with 24 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8509 Real Poets and poetry admirer