मेरी जिंदगी में आती तो कुछ और बात होती

by satay on April 16, 2012, 03:51:31 AM
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मेरी जिंदगी में आती तो कुछ और बात होती

मेरे दिल से दिल मिलाती तो कुछ और बात होती

हमसफ़र बनाना है किसी ना किसी को एक दिन

अगर तुम्हे हमसफ़र बनाता तो कुछ और बात होती.....BY SPT

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Meri  zindgi mein aati to kuch aur baat hoti

Mere dil se dil milati to kuch aur baat hoti

Hamsafar banana hai kisi na kisi ko ek din

Agar tumhe hamsafar banaata to kuch aur baat hoti.....BY SPT
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«Reply #1 on: April 16, 2012, 05:21:13 AM »
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It's good but seems that first two lines are quite similar to a hindi song, correct me if wrong
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«Reply #2 on: April 16, 2012, 05:32:23 AM »
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Yes you are right.
First two lines form movie 'KANYADAAN'..Last night i was listing this song..and then I add 2 lines ..I like it
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«Reply #3 on: April 16, 2012, 06:12:53 AM »
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Bhut achche.
Par aap esko or extend bhi kr sakte the.
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«Reply #4 on: April 16, 2012, 06:59:49 AM »
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ok..bataye kis tarah extend kare ise..
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«Reply #6 on: April 16, 2012, 07:58:43 PM »
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