मैं चाँद को आँगन में उतार आयी...

by mixie on March 26, 2014, 04:29:34 AM
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मैं चाँद को आँगन में उतार आयी
तुम्हारे बग़ैर इक उम्र गुज़ार आयी

तारे थे एक दूसरे के इतने क़रीब
कल रात तुम्हारी याद बेशुमार आयी

कुछ तो बाकी है दरमियां अपने
लौट के क्यूँ ये नज़र बार-बार आयी

ज़रा सी आह्ट हुई लगा कि तुम आये
मैं इतने में ही खुद को सँवार आयी

सोचा तुम्हे तो खिज़ा में भी 'मीना'
लगने लगा यूँ कि बहार आयी ...

main chaand ko aangan mein utaar aayee
tumhare baghair ik umr guzaar aayee

taare the ek doosre ke itne qareeb
kal raat tumhari yaad beshumaar aayee

kuchh to baki hai darmiyaan apne
laut ke kyun ye nazar baar-baar aayee

zara si aahat hui laga ki tum aaye
main itne mein hi khud ko sanwaar aayee

sochha tumhe to khiza mein bhi 'meena'
lagne laga yun ki bahaar aayee ...
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«Reply #1 on: March 26, 2014, 08:35:10 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 26, 2014, 08:37:27 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob.....

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«Reply #3 on: March 26, 2014, 08:42:43 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: March 26, 2014, 01:10:08 PM »
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मैं चाँद को आँगन में उतार आयी
तुम्हारे बग़ैर इक उम्र गुज़ार आयी

तारे थे एक दूसरे के इतने क़रीब
कल रात तुम्हारी याद बेशुमार आयी

कुछ तो बाकी है दरमियां अपने
लौट के क्यूँ ये नज़र बार-बार आयी

ज़रा सी आह्ट हुई लगा कि तुम आये
मैं इतने में ही खुद को सँवार आयी

सोचा तुम्हे तो खिज़ा में भी 'मीना'
लगने लगा यूँ कि बहार आयी ...

main chaand ko aangan mein utaar aayee
tumhare baghair ik umr guzaar aayee

taare the ek doosre ke itne qareeb
kal raat tumhari yaad beshumaar aayee

kuchh to baki hai darmiyaan apne
laut ke kyun ye nazar baar-baar aayee

zara si aahat hui laga ki tum aaye
main itne mein hi khud ko sanwaar aayee

sochha tumhe to khiza mein bhi 'meena'
lagne laga yun ki bahaar aayee ...



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«Reply #5 on: March 26, 2014, 02:17:50 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahut bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: March 26, 2014, 02:25:16 PM »
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bahut khub.....
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«Reply #7 on: March 26, 2014, 03:25:56 PM »
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main chaand ko aangan mein utaar aayee
tumhare baghair ik umr guzaar aayee

taare the ek doosre ke itne qareeb
kal raat tumhari yaad beshumaar aayee

kuchh to baki hai darmiyaan apne
laut ke kyun ye nazar baar-baar aayee

zara si aahat hui laga ki tum aaye
main itne mein hi khud ko sanwaar aayee

sochha tumhe to khiza mein bhi 'meena'
lagne laga yun ki bahaar aayee ...

wonderful meena jee its beautifully

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Ek RAU ke haqdaar ghazal

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«Reply #8 on: March 26, 2014, 04:40:45 PM »
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aap sabka tah-e-dil se shukriya
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«Reply #9 on: March 26, 2014, 06:09:54 PM »
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bahut khooooooob.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: March 26, 2014, 06:53:36 PM »
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बहुत ख़ूब मीना जी। वाह!
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«Reply #11 on: March 27, 2014, 02:24:52 AM »
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मैं चाँद को आँगन में उतार आयी
तुम्हारे बग़ैर इक उम्र गुज़ार आयी

तारे थे एक दूसरे के इतने क़रीब
कल रात तुम्हारी याद बेशुमार आयी

कुछ तो बाकी है दरमियां अपने
लौट के क्यूँ ये नज़र बार-बार आयी

ज़रा सी आह्ट हुई लगा कि तुम आये
मैं इतने में ही खुद को सँवार आयी

सोचा तुम्हे तो खिज़ा में भी 'मीना'
लगने लगा यूँ कि बहार आयी ...

main chaand ko aangan mein utaar aayee
tumhare baghair ik umr guzaar aayee

taare the ek doosre ke itne qareeb
kal raat tumhari yaad beshumaar aayee

kuchh to baki hai darmiyaan apne
laut ke kyun ye nazar baar-baar aayee

zara si aahat hui laga ki tum aaye
main itne mein hi khud ko sanwaar aayee

sochha tumhe to khiza mein bhi 'meena'
lagne laga yun ki bahaar aayee ...

वाह वाह,,,,,,,,,,,,
बेहतरीन.....
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«Reply #12 on: March 27, 2014, 02:28:17 AM »
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Bohat Hi Khub Likha Hai Aap Ne!! Wah Wah!

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«Reply #13 on: March 27, 2014, 06:51:41 PM »
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Awesome Mixie... too lovely
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«Reply #14 on: March 27, 2014, 08:45:13 PM »
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kya baat hai... bahut khoooooooob... dheron daaaaaaaaaad qubool kare...
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