मैं हवा हूँ , तुम्हें छूता हूँ, दहक उठता हूँ !

by abdbundeli on October 14, 2014, 09:49:35 AM
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Friends! I wrote this quatrain, some time during the latter 1960s; but strangely, it's reverberating in my memory for almost an hour! Hence, i'm feeling , I should share it with you all! And, it's here:-

Tum mahaz aag ho; haan, aur kuchh naheen ho tum!
Main hawaa huun, tumhain chhuutaa hun, dahak uthtaa huun!
Par, yeh kyaa baat hai, mujhko abhee maaluum naheen;
Khak hotaa naheen, albattaa mahak uthtaa huun!!

तुम महज़ आग हो ; हाँ, और कुछ नहीं हो तुम !
मैं हवा हूँ , तुम्हें छूता हूँ, दहक  उठता हूँ !
पर, यह क्या बात है, मुझको अभी मालूम नहीं ;
ख़ाक होता नहीं, अलबत्ता महक  उठता हूँ !!

                              - Ram Prakash Garg / abd bundeli
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