मोह्हबत तो ना भर सके तेरे दिल में

by satay on April 25, 2012, 03:58:52 AM
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मोह्हबत तो ना भर सके तेरे दिल में

मगर नफरत में इतनी भर दूंगा

चाहत को मेरी ना भुला पाओगी तुम
 
तेरी नजरो में खुद को कैद कर लूँगा....BY SPT

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Mohhabat to na bhar sake tere dil mein

Magar nafrat mein itni bhar doonga
 
Chahat ko meri na bhula paaogi tum

Teri nazro mein khud ko kaid kar loonga.....BY SPT
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«Reply #1 on: April 25, 2012, 04:15:20 AM »
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Bhai sahab.
Aapki lines me ak ajeeb si mukhalafat jhalak rahi h.
Ak taraf to aap kah rahe h ki nafrat bhar dunga or ak taraf....
Oh ha yaad aaya nafrat bhi to dil se hi ki jaati h.
M hi galat hu sorry.


Bhut achchi kosis h.
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«Reply #2 on: April 25, 2012, 04:18:03 AM »
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Vaise ek baat kahu.."Meine to bas vo likha jo kuch likahaya unhone.."
Bahut shukriya apka wave
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«Reply #3 on: April 25, 2012, 04:22:28 AM »
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Vaise ek baat kahu.."Meine to bas vo likha jo kuch likahaya unhone.."
Bahut shukriya apka wave

kisne likhaya h aesa.
Wese agar aap last ki line me loonga ki jagah dunga hi kar de to jyada achcha lagega.
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«Reply #4 on: April 25, 2012, 04:24:29 AM »
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sahi kha..but likhte time shayad mein kuch aur soch rha tha..thanks for ur suggestion.  Is it SO!
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«Reply #5 on: April 25, 2012, 05:59:07 AM »
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gud one....
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«Reply #6 on: April 25, 2012, 08:07:34 AM »
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