रफतार

by sapana on January 01, 2010, 06:01:58 AM
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अभी तक सांसोकी रफतार क्यु है?
तूट गया सब,जिनेका एहसास क्यु है?

सब आये और एक एक करके चले गये,
तेरा आना सबसे मुख्तलीफ क्यु है?

बन बन के बात बिग़ड ही जाती है मेरी,
या रब इसमे मेरा ही कसूर क्यु है?

मरती हुं मै शबो रोज तेरी यादमे जाना,
येह जानके भी तु इतना बेखबर क्यु है?

हझारो सपने तूटते देखे है मैने फिरभी,
एक और सपना देखनेकी जुर्रत क्यु है?

सपना
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riyaz106
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«Reply #1 on: January 01, 2010, 06:42:17 AM »
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Bahut achhi ghazal hai Sapna Ji. Keep it up. Thanks for sharing.
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«Reply #2 on: January 01, 2010, 07:17:43 AM »
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Very nice and beautiful creation Sapna ji. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #3 on: January 01, 2010, 08:54:05 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Sapna ji
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«Reply #4 on: January 01, 2010, 09:23:47 PM »
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आभार राजेशजी,मधुवेशजी रियाझजी hello
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«Reply #5 on: January 02, 2010, 11:23:02 AM »
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Bahut Sundar Likha Hai Sapna Ji Aapne
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«Reply #6 on: January 02, 2010, 03:27:46 PM »
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आभार रीशि..
सपना
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«Reply #7 on: January 02, 2010, 03:30:22 PM »
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Waah Sapna ji .. Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #8 on: January 02, 2010, 03:34:15 PM »
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आभार सोफीः)
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«Reply #9 on: January 02, 2010, 08:13:06 PM »
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Ati Utam Sapana Ji
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«Reply #10 on: January 02, 2010, 09:00:39 PM »
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humdum shukriya
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«Reply #11 on: January 03, 2010, 07:18:05 AM »
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Thanks shihab..
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«Reply #12 on: January 03, 2010, 08:31:22 AM »
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अभी तक सांसोकी रफतार क्यु है?
तूट गया सब,जिनेका एहसास क्यु है?

सब आये और एक एक करके चले गये,
तेरा आना सबसे मुख्तलीफ क्यु है?

बन बन के बात बिग़ड ही जाती है मेरी,
या रब इसमे मेरा ही कसूर क्यु है?

मरती हुं मै शबो रोज तेरी यादमे जाना,
येह जानके भी तु इतना बेखबर क्यु है?

हझारो सपने तूटते देखे है मैने फिरभी,
एक और सपना देखनेकी जुर्रत क्यु है?

सपना


bahut khoob sapna ji  Applause
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«Reply #13 on: January 03, 2010, 03:59:04 PM »
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शुक्रिया बादलजी hello
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«Reply #14 on: January 15, 2010, 01:00:22 PM »
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शुक्रिया काशजी..
सपना
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