रुखसार पे तुम अपने

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रुखसार पे तुम अपने तिल क्यों बना रहे हो,
क्या क़त्ल पहले कम किये हैं जो और करने जा रहे हो.

यह क्या बिन बादल के बिजली कहाँ से चमकी,
क्यों बिजलियाँ गिराकर मुझको लुभा रहे हो.

ऐ फलक बिजलियाँ चमकाकर यूं मुझको न डराओ,
दो बिजलियों की चमक से परेशान हो रहा हूँ.

देखो तो आसमान में काली घटा क्यों छाई,
शायद वो जुल्फें फैलाकर गेसू सुखा रहे हैं.

यह क्या चमन में एक फूल भी नहीं है,
शायद फूल साथ उनके मस्ती मना रहे हैं.

   Composed by D K Saxena " Betaab"
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«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2013, 04:48:24 PM »
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रुखसार पे तुम अपने तिल क्यों बना रहे हो,
क्या क़त्ल पहले कम किये हैं जो और करने जा रहे हो.

यह क्या बिन बादल के बिजली कहाँ से चमकी,
क्यों बिजलियाँ गिराकर मुझको लुभा रहे हो.

ऐ फलक बिजलियाँ चमकाकर यूं मुझको न डराओ,
दो बिजलियों की चमक से परेशान हो रहा हूँ.

देखो तो आसमान में काली घटा क्यों छाई,
शायद वो जुल्फें फैलाकर गेसू सुखा रहे हैं.

यह क्या चमन में एक फूल भी नहीं है,
शायद फूल साथ उनके मस्ती मना रहे हैं.

   Composed by D K Saxena " Betaab"

very good creation brother.
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