वो बात दिल की दिल में दबा कर चले गए

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ग़ज़ल
मात्रा : 221  2121 1221 212
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वो बात दिल की दिल में दबा कर चले गए
कुछ इस तरीक-ए-राज़ छुपाकर चले गए

ख़ामोश से रहे उनके होंठ भी मगर
वो ज़िंदगी का दर्द सुनाकर चले गए

माथे को चूमकर के वो चलते रहे मगर
भीगे लबों से आज जलाकर चले गए

दो चार आंसुओं को गिराया ज़रूर था
दिल पर पड़े वो छाले दिखाकर चले गए

फिर लौट कर न आएगी यह रात "आरज़ू"
है आखरी यह रात बताकर चले गए

आरज़ू-ए-अर्जुन  
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«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2016, 04:54:14 PM »
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ग़ज़ल
मात्रा : 221  2121 1221 212
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वो बात दिल की दिल में दबा कर चले गए
कुछ इस तरीक-ए-राज़ छुपाकर चले गए

ख़ामोश से रहे उनके होंठ भी मगर
वो ज़िंदगी का दर्द सुनाकर चले गए

माथे को चूमकर के वो चलते रहे मगर
भीगे लबों से आज जलाकर चले गए

दो चार आंसुओं को गिराया ज़रूर था
दिल पर पड़े वो छाले दिखाकर चले गए

फिर लौट कर न आएगी यह रात "आरज़ू"
है आखरी यह रात बताकर चले गए

आरज़ू-ए-अर्जुन 


with rau nice poem ,sir
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«Reply #2 on: July 15, 2016, 07:06:58 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: July 16, 2016, 06:31:30 AM »
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Very good arjun saab, pasand aaya  Thumbs UP, I think there is one typing mistake :

आज जलाकर - > आग लगाकर

भीगे लबों से आज जलाकर चले गए
should be
भीगे लबों से आग लगाकर चले गए
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Quote from: khhanabadosh on July 16, 2016, 06:31:30 AM
Very good arjun saab, pasand aaya  Thumbs UP, I think there is one typing mistake :

आज जलाकर - > आग लगाकर



भीगे लबों से आज जलाकर चले गए
should be
भीगे लबों से आग लगाकर चले गए

Bahut Shukriya khanabadosh sahib....
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Kya baat hai siddiqui sahib...  Aap mujhe daad de rahe hai...  Aap plz meri galtiyon ko jyada pakad k bataya kare..

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