समझ लेना के वो हूँ मे bekarar

by bekarar on January 19, 2011, 09:24:04 PM
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purani post pe kisi shayar ki ek line mili "samajh lena ki wo mai hun" isi ko adhar bana kar likhi hai.....aapki nazar...

कभी जो डब-डबा जाए,
नमी आखों मे रह जाए,
रहे भीगी तेरी पलकें
चाह के भी नही छलके
उसे फिर ाश्क़ ना कहना
समझ लेना के वो हूँ मे....

कोई फूल मुरझाया,
कोई टूटा हुआ पत्ता,
हवाओं मे जो लहराए
तेरे आँगन मे बह आए,
तेरे आगोश मे आके,
आँचल से लिपट जाए,
उसे फिर फूल ना कहना
समझ लेना के वो हूँ मे

आँखों ही मे कट जाए,
रात और नींद ना आए
जो कोइ ख्वाब अच्छा सा,
नींदों से जगा जाए
उसे फिर ख्वाब ना कहना,
समझ लेना के वो हूँ मे..

कोई नगमा पुराना सा,
तुम्हे माजी मे ले जाए,
कोई पहचाना सा चेहरा,
ज़हन मे ताज़ा हो जाए,
उसे फिर याद ना कहना,
समझ लेना के वो हूँ मे
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«Reply #1 on: January 21, 2011, 06:45:12 PM »
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Bahut Khub Bekarar Ji U Hi Likhte Rahiye Aur Khush Rahiye



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«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2011, 10:32:41 AM »
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aahhhaaaaaaaaa bekaraar ji bht khubbb ...bht hi pyaar bhari rachna hai ye aapki.......

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«Reply #3 on: January 22, 2011, 12:58:53 PM »
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Bahut Khub Bekarar Ji U Hi Likhte Rahiye Aur Khush Rahiye



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rishi ji, bahoot shukriya
aapke comment padhkar bahoot khushi hui...
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aahhhaaaaaaaaa bekaraar ji bht khubbb ...bht hi pyaar bhari rachna hai ye aapki.......



bahhhooot shukrira KDK ji ..aapki kalam bhi kuch alfaaz ugalti to panne ki shobha badh jaati... Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: January 22, 2011, 03:18:02 PM »
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bahhhooot shukrira KDK ji ..aapki kalam bhi kuch alfaaz ugalti to panne ki shobha badh jaati... Usual Smile

ye lijiye bekaraar ji....
ugal gai hamari kalam aapke andaaaz me kuch....kahiye kaisa laga...

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayri-for-khumar-e-ishq/samjh-lena-k-wo-main-huna%80brvbar-t61234.0.html;new#new
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«Reply #5 on: January 23, 2011, 04:05:49 AM »
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Very Impressive ... Good Expression ... Very Nice Poetry .. !

Tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... ! Applause Applause Applause Applause

aise hi likhte rahen aur aate rahen aage bhi ... ! kush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !
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«Reply #6 on: January 23, 2011, 06:01:01 AM »
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ye lijiye bekaraar ji....
ugal gai hamari kalam aapke andaaaz me kuch....kahiye kaisa laga...

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayri-for-khumar-e-ishq/samjh-lena-k-wo-main-huna%80brvbar-t61234.0.html;new#new


aapka likha jawab maine padha...bahoot hi behtreen likha aapne  Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: January 23, 2011, 06:02:49 AM »
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Very Impressive ... Good Expression ... Very Nice Poetry .. !

Tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... ! Applause Applause Applause Applause

aise hi likhte rahen aur aate rahen aage bhi ... ! kush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !


shukriya anshumali ji,

aapki har daad har dua ke liye dil ke har kone se shukriya..
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«Reply #8 on: January 23, 2011, 07:35:26 AM »
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Behad Khubsoorat Khayaalat Hain Sanjeev Bhai.. Samajh lena Ki wo main Hoon.. Is Ek Mukhde Par aapne Behad Hi Khubsoorat Lafz Likhe hain.. Dil se daad Kubool karen.. Applause Applause

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«Reply #9 on: January 23, 2011, 08:08:37 AM »
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behad khoobsurat khayal bekarar ji........
bht bht khoob....
samajh lena ki wo main hu.....
kya baat kahi hai....
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«Reply #10 on: January 23, 2011, 09:12:03 AM »
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Behad Khubsoorat Khayaalat Hain Sanjeev Bhai.. Samajh lena Ki wo main Hoon.. Is Ek Mukhde Par aapne Behad Hi Khubsoorat Lafz Likhe hain.. Dil se daad Kubool karen.. Applause Applause

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Apki har daad sar aankhon par vicky bhai...khushi hui aapki comment padh-kar...kyunki khumaar ke baadshah to aap hain hum to yun hi kabhi bhule bhatke chale aate hain yahan  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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behad khoobsurat khayal bekarar ji........
bht bht khoob....
samajh lena ki wo main hu.....
kya baat kahi hai....

bahoot shukriya aapko ye koshish bhi pasand aai...manzil-e-ishq ji
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«Reply #12 on: January 23, 2011, 09:52:41 AM »
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ati sunder kavita hai aapki Bekaraar ji......mujhe bahut pasand aayi...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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