A Breath...:Shayri-E-Dard

A Breath...

by Amanush... on February 27, 2005, 06:42:07 PM

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Amanush...

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A breath…

You made the ears to the pages of my heart
while I fixed the shade of your look,
it was then that I understood:
it would have been the last time

" Perhaps it is better like this”
a sentence of circumstance
that it is not suitable
to your manner of speaking
I know what you try to hide
I know that it is not what you want

Castles of papers that collapse
to the whistling wind
and that hisses through the cracks
of my weeping eyes
The smoke of a cigarette to break
the dense attenuate air of tears
and distant thoughts

Yes! It was yesterday that
I knew how to take a breath…

Amanush...

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dolly

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A Breath...

«Reply #1 on: February 27, 2005, 06:52:30 PM »

Wow WOW WOW.... Usual Smile

Really touching words ...


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HumTum

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A Breath...

«Reply #2 on: February 27, 2005, 07:02:50 PM »

nice going buddy keep it up .........


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sharmaarunkumar

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A Breath...

«Reply #3 on: February 27, 2005, 07:55:35 PM »

wow! What a wonderful poetry!!! Very Nice!! Amanush ji!!! Usual Smile


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fakharenaveed

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A Breath...

«Reply #4 on: February 27, 2005, 09:48:42 PM »

AMANUSH WELCOME TO YOINDIA

BUHAT ACHA LIKHA HAI


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Amanush...

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Thanks...

«Reply #5 on: February 28, 2005, 11:43:29 AM »

@ Dolly ji...Thanks itne saare Wow ke liye...

@ HumTum ji... Thanks for liking and for encouragement...

@ Sharma ji...Thanks for appreciating...

@ Faree ji... Pasand karne ke liye bahout shukriya...and thanks
for the nice welcome...

See you soon...

Amanush...

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