A Breath...

by Amanush... on February 27, 2005, 06:42:07 PM
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Amanush...
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A breath…

You made the ears to the pages of my heart
while I fixed the shade of your look,
it was then that I understood:
it would have been the last time

" Perhaps it is better like this”
a sentence of circumstance
that it is not suitable
to your manner of speaking
I know what you try to hide
I know that it is not what you want

Castles of papers that collapse
to the whistling wind  
and that hisses through the cracks
of  my weeping eyes
The smoke of a cigarette to break
the dense attenuate air of tears
and distant thoughts
 
Yes! It was yesterday that
I knew how to take a  breath…

Amanush...

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dolly
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«Reply #1 on: February 27, 2005, 06:52:30 PM »
Wow WOW WOW.... Usual Smile  Usual Smile

Really touching words ...
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HumTum
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«Reply #2 on: February 27, 2005, 07:02:50 PM »
nice going buddy keep it up .........
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #3 on: February 27, 2005, 07:55:35 PM »
wow! What a wonderful poetry!!! Very Nice!! Amanush ji!!! Usual Smile
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #4 on: February 27, 2005, 09:48:42 PM »
AMANUSH WELCOME TO YOINDIA

BUHAT ACHA LIKHA HAI
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Amanush...
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«Reply #5 on: February 28, 2005, 11:43:29 AM »
@ Dolly ji...Thanks itne saare Wow ke liye...

 @ HumTum ji... Thanks for liking and for encouragement...

 @ Sharma ji...Thanks for appreciating...

 @ Faree ji... Pasand karne ke liye bahout shukriya...and thanks
for the nice welcome...

See you soon...

Amanush...

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