Aa bhi jaao lautkar tum...

by -Kashish- on June 02, 2009, 12:29:10 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 07, 2009, 01:06:27 PM »
Bohat Khoob Kashish Ji, Mashallah, Bohat Achcha Likha Hai,.
Yunhi LIkhte Rahiye,.
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«Reply #16 on: June 14, 2009, 02:13:26 PM »
Itni mohabbat karte hain tumse sanam
Badhta jaa raha hai tum bin mera gham
Ab aa bhi jaao laut kar tum
Kho na jaaye kahin phir hum...

Tere sang milkar jo khwab dekhe
Ek-ek kar sab bikhar gaye
Aaine jaisa tha wajood unka shayad
Toot kar chur-chur ho gaye
Ab aa bhi jaao laut kar tum
Kho na jaaye kahin phir hum...

Is dil ko sau baaton se behlaya humne
kyun jhooti har baat hai sacchi nahin lagti
Sab kuch hote hue bhi kuch soona hai
Tumhare bina yeh duniya acchi nahin lagti
Ab aa bhi jaao laut kar tum
Kho na jaaye kahin phir hum...



Diya786 ji..aap na Shayri e dard acha likhte hai Na Shayri e Ishq...Koi lafz aise hote nahi Na sher aisa hota hai..Jise baar baar parha jaaye.
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«Reply #17 on: June 14, 2009, 02:21:57 PM »
Bahoot Khoob Kashish.. Bahoot dard bari rachna pesh ki hai.. Gud work swetz
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«Reply #18 on: June 16, 2009, 10:29:05 AM »
Bohot Khoob Kashish
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«Reply #19 on: July 07, 2009, 10:57:06 PM »
Good work Kashish ji!
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