Aa bhii jaao

by apnaa_koi on May 03, 2005, 02:39:12 AM
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Yeh sher muji bohata achaa lagtha hai, is mein Maasuumiate hai.. bollaa pan hai... and of course it's very well written.. soorcha aap saab key kidmat mein pesh kerthi houn....

Always Anjli  


Aa bhii jaao
Aa bhii jaao kii zindagii kam hai
Tum nahii.n ho to har Khushii kam hai

Vaadaa kar ke ye kaun aayaa nahii.n
Shahar me.n aaj raushanii kam hai

Jaane kyaa ho gayaa hai mausam ko
Dhuup ziyaadaa hai chaa.Ndanii kam hai

Aa_iinaa dekh kar Khayaal aayaa
Aaj kal un kii dostii kam hai

Tere dam se hii mai.n mukammal huu.N
Bin tere terii 'Yamini' kam hai

Author... Yamini Das...
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«Reply #1 on: May 03, 2005, 03:05:02 AM »
realy..............nice choice thanx for shareing it with us..............................



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«Reply #2 on: May 03, 2005, 04:38:11 AM »
nice one anjali,u have a brilliant choice..........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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nice_off_me
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«Reply #3 on: May 03, 2005, 06:11:35 AM »
thanx anjali jee for sharing with us really nice post likhte rehna.......
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Aryaan
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«Reply #4 on: May 03, 2005, 04:08:55 PM »
Nice One Apnaa_koi...........................
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pandit
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«Reply #5 on: May 03, 2005, 04:23:52 PM »
wah apna koi,
apni zindagi ki hai tere naam,
siwa tere yaado ke nahi hai koi kaam,
buss kaam hai to ek ye hi ki,
karta hoo yaad tujhko subah o shaam,
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apnaa_koi
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«Reply #6 on: May 03, 2005, 05:17:23 PM »
Thanks Faree... Nidhi... nice_off_me... Aryaan...

Pandit Ji apka licka aksher achaa laga

Always Anjli
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Amanush...
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«Reply #7 on: May 03, 2005, 06:31:44 PM »
Aa bhii jaao

Aa bhii jaao kii zindagii kam hai
Tum nahii.n ho to har Khushii kam hai

Vaadaa kar ke ye kaun aayaa nahii.n
Shahar me.n aaj raushanii kam hai

Jaane kyaa ho gayaa hai mausam ko
Dhuup ziyaadaa hai chaa.Ndanii kam hai

Aa_iinaa dekh kar Khayaal aayaa
Aaj kal un kii dostii kam hai

Tere dam se hii mai.n mukammal huu.N
Bin tere terii 'Yamini' kam hai


A very nice sharing...Anjli ji !

Amanush...
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apnaa_koi
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«Reply #8 on: May 03, 2005, 06:57:38 PM »
Shkaria Amanush... Always Anjli
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Meena
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«Reply #9 on: May 04, 2005, 03:41:45 PM »
Quote from: "apnaa_koi"
Yeh sher muji bohata achaa lagtha hai, is mein Maasuumiate hai.. bollaa pan hai... and of course it's very well written.. soorcha aap saab key kidmat mein pesh kerthi houn....

Always Anjli  


[you]Aa bhii jaao [/you]
Aa bhii jaao kii zindagii kam hai
Tum nahii.n ho to har Khushii kam hai

Vaadaa kar ke ye kaun aayaa nahii.n
Shahar me.n aaj raushanii kam hai

Jaane kyaa ho gayaa hai mausam ko
Dhuup ziyaadaa hai chaa.Ndanii kam hai

Aa_iinaa dekh kar Khayaal aayaa
Aaj kal un kii dostii kam hai

Tere dam se hii mai.n mukammal huu.N
Bin tere terii 'Yamini' kam hai

Author... Yamini Das...


wow really nice!!!!!!!!! bohot pyara hai!!

 :D
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apnaa_koi
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«Reply #10 on: May 06, 2005, 01:53:11 AM »
Thanks Meena....

Always Anjli
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #11 on: May 06, 2005, 02:15:36 AM »
Janu is tarah aa jao mairi bahoon mai
Chand chup gaya ho jaisa sawan ki ghataon mai
Kantai to bohat thai par hum na rukai sanam
Phool jo tum nai bichah dia zindagai ki rahoon mai
Hum to nahi kehtai kai bhool gai tumhain
Ek ek gawahi hoti hai dharkan ki sadaoon mai
Anai ki tamanna hai tumharai dil ki qaid mai
Aub dum ghutnaioklaga hai in azad fizaoon mai
Aa kaiokmairi zindagi ko rungee kar gai
Bekhair gai ho rung jaisai titly hawaoon mai
Aisa hai saat jaisai kai saya ho tum maira
Sooraj ki tapish sai tum ko chupaon mai
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