aa hi jaaTaa hai,..............

by laaiba on January 30, 2013, 08:55:56 AM
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haalaa.t ke dhaare par behnaa aa hi jaataa hai,
tanhaayi  ke san.g  bhi rehnaa aa hi jaataa hai

pehley pehal to jeeNaa mushkil lagta hai leikin
lougoN ki baaton ko yun sehnaa aa hi jaataa hai

jub dil k houNton pe taaley ho  maslahat key toh
bin boule aankhon ko sab kehnaa aa hi jaataa hai

lamhaa.t  juudaayi  waaley  bas jaaye dil men toh
tab bhee dh men tanha bhi rehnaa aa hi jaataa hai

jab dooriyaN darmiyan hon to dil k kaaghaz par,....
lafzon men har baa.t  ko kehnaa aa hi  jaataa hai,
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«Reply #1 on: January 30, 2013, 09:01:48 AM »
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Laaibaa Sahibaa Aadaab!



Mashaa Allaah kia khoob gazal kahi hai jee aapne... behad umdaa
khayaalaat ko kalam baNd kiya hai... Usual Smile


Behad khoobsurat ashaar rahe sabhi... is umdaa kalaam par humari
hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Aise hi khoob kalaamoN se bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...


Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: January 30, 2013, 09:03:49 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: January 30, 2013, 09:09:19 AM »
waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: January 30, 2013, 10:05:20 AM »
 icon_flower icon_flower Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley very nice g
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«Reply #5 on: January 30, 2013, 10:20:55 AM »
Quote from: laaiba on January 30, 2013, 08:55:56 AM

haalaa.t ke dhaare par behnaa aa hi jaataa hai,
tanhaayi  ke san.g  bhi rehnaa aa hi jaataa hai

pehley pehal to jeeNaa mushkil lagta hai leikin
lougoN ki baaton ko yun sehnaa aa hi jaataa hai

jub dil k houNton pe taaley ho  maslahat key toh
bin boule aankhon ko sab kehnaa aa hi jaataa hai

lamhaa.t  juudaayi  waaley  bas jaaye dil men toh
tab bhee dh men tanha bhi rehnaa aa hi jaataa hai

jab dooriyaN darmiyan hon to dil k kaaghaz par,....
lafzon men har baa.t  ko kehnaa aa hi  jaataa hai,

ati sundar ...
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«Reply #6 on: January 30, 2013, 10:54:31 AM »
wah wah
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«Reply #7 on: January 30, 2013, 11:12:28 AM »
waaaaaaaaaaaah Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: January 30, 2013, 12:04:02 PM »
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Laaiba jee really a beautiful composition. congrats to you
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«Reply #9 on: January 30, 2013, 12:55:33 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: January 30, 2013, 01:44:27 PM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 30, 2013, 09:01:48 AM
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Laaibaa Sahibaa Aadaab!



Mashaa Allaah kia khoob gazal kahi hai jee aapne... behad umdaa
khayaalaat ko kalam baNd kiya hai... Usual Smile


Behad khoobsurat ashaar rahe sabhi... is umdaa kalaam par humari
hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Aise hi khoob kalaamoN se bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...


Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
bohat bohat shukria aapkaa parwaz ji,..............
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«Reply #11 on: January 30, 2013, 01:44:52 PM »
Quote from: anmolarora on January 30, 2013, 09:03:49 AM
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thnx,.....................
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«Reply #12 on: January 30, 2013, 01:45:33 PM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on January 30, 2013, 09:09:19 AM
waah waah bahut khoob
bohatt bohat shukria saini ji aapkaa,...........
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«Reply #13 on: January 30, 2013, 01:46:02 PM »
Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on January 30, 2013, 10:05:20 AM
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thnx ji,.................
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«Reply #14 on: January 30, 2013, 03:45:06 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob.. bade hi khoobsurat andaaz me aapne is rachna ko pesh kiya hai.. bahut khoob likha hai aapne Laaiba ji.....!!!
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