aa hi jaaTaa hai,..............

by laaiba on January 30, 2013, 08:55:56 AM
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«Reply #15 on: January 30, 2013, 04:01:24 PM »
Matle se maqte tak..
kya baat hai..behad umda ehsaas piroye hai aapne is ghazal me laaiba jee.
maqta...bahut bahut umda..dil khush ho gaya
bas aise hi likhte rahiye..
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«Reply #16 on: January 30, 2013, 04:14:34 PM »
bahut khooob, laiba ji. congrats.
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BANSI DHAMEJA
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«Reply #17 on: January 30, 2013, 04:40:34 PM »
Laiba ji Bahut khoob
Jab taareef-e-qabil gazal parhne ko mile to
Taarref karne ka man men aa hi  jata hai
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«Reply #18 on: January 30, 2013, 05:33:34 PM »

haalaa.t ke dhaare par behnaa aa hi jaataa hai,
tanhaayi  ke san.g  bhi rehnaa aa hi jaataa hai

pehley pehal to jeeNaa mushkil lagta hai leikin
lougoN ki baaton ko yun sehnaa aa hi jaataa hai

jub dil k houNton pe taaley ho  maslahat key toh
bin boule aankhon ko sab kehnaa aa hi jaataa hai

lamhaa.t  juudaayi  waaley  bas jaaye dil men toh
tab bhee dh men tanha bhi rehnaa aa hi jaataa hai

jab dooriyaN darmiyan hon to dil k kaaghaz par,....
lafzon men har baa.t  ko kehnaa aa hi  jaataa hai,

bahot khoob
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«Reply #19 on: January 30, 2013, 07:35:24 PM »

haalaa.t ke dhaare par behnaa aa hi jaataa hai,
tanhaayi  ke san.g  bhi rehnaa aa hi jaataa hai

pehley pehal to jeeNaa mushkil lagta hai leikin
lougoN ki baaton ko yun sehnaa aa hi jaataa hai

jub dil k houNton pe taaley ho  maslahat key toh
bin boule aankhon ko sab kehnaa aa hi jaataa hai

lamhaa.t  juudaayi  waaley  bas jaaye dil men toh
tab bhee dh men tanha bhi rehnaa aa hi jaataa hai

jab dooriyaN darmiyan hon to dil k kaaghaz par,....
lafzon men har baa.t  ko kehnaa aa hi  jaataa hai,

very nice liabaa ji
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laaiba
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«Reply #20 on: January 31, 2013, 11:01:27 AM »
ati sundar ...
bohat shukria suman ,.............
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laaiba
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«Reply #21 on: January 31, 2013, 11:02:05 AM »
wah wah
bohat shukria aapkaa,........
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laaiba
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«Reply #22 on: January 31, 2013, 04:37:38 PM »
waaaaaaaaaaaah Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bohat shukria vimmi aapkaa,.............
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