aa jaao ki toot na jaaye... jeevan ki yea lakirein..

by Akant on August 18, 2004, 08:19:32 AM

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Akant

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kitana dard hota hai,
jab kisi ko dekhta hoon,
kaise batau main,
kya kya sochta hoon...

aksar chala aata hoon,
jheel ke kinaare,
aas lagaye takta hoon,
kisi ke sahaare...

vo nahi hai,phir bhi
usi ka entjaar kerta hoon
kitani sadiya gujar dee
ek jhalak ko bekrar rahta hoon

aa jao ki toot na jaaye
jeevan ki yea lakirein,
shayad phir dekhane ko mile
meri kuchh tasveerein..

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Akant...


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nishita

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aa jaao ki toot na jaaye... jeevan ki yea lakirein..

«Reply #1 on: August 18, 2004, 09:19:30 AM »

nice akant bohat achhe


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Akant

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«Reply #2 on: August 19, 2004, 09:32:24 AM »

Nishita ji,

Thank you... yah rachana maine Eden Garden ke park mein baith ker likhi thi..
aapko achchhi lagi...ek sukun mila..

shubhkamnao sahit,

Akant...


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mateen govindvi

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aa jaao ki toot na jaaye... jeevan ki yea lakirein..

«Reply #3 on: August 19, 2004, 10:55:54 AM »

bahut khoob akant


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Deewana29

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aa jaao ki toot na jaaye... jeevan ki yea lakirein..

«Reply #4 on: August 19, 2004, 12:11:40 PM »

Shaam Hote Hi Chiragon Ko Bujha Deta Hoon
Yeh Dil Hi Kaafi Hai Teri Yaad Main Jalne Ke Liye
Kabhi jeel ke kinare Kabhi phoolo ke kinare
Aap ka zikar karte hai.....phoolo ko sawarne ke liye!


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Deewana29

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aa jaao ki toot na jaaye... jeevan ki yea lakirein..

«Reply #5 on: August 19, 2004, 12:12:15 PM »

Zindagi ek phool hai aur mohabbat us ka shehed
Pyar Ek Dariya Hai, Aur Mehmoob uski sarhad


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Akant

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«Reply #6 on: August 23, 2004, 06:45:44 AM »

Quote from: "mateen govindvi"

bahut khoob akant

Thanks Govind ji,

aapko pasand aayi rachana.. mujhe achchha laga..
aate rahieyga...

Akant...


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Akant

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«Reply #7 on: August 23, 2004, 06:47:43 AM »

Quote from: "Deewana29"

Shaam Hote Hi Chiragon Ko Bujha Deta Hoon
Yeh Dil Hi Kaafi Hai Teri Yaad Main Jalne Ke Liye
Kabhi jeel ke kinare Kabhi phoolo ke kinare
Aap ka zikar karte hai.....phoolo ko sawarne ke liye!

Deewana ji,

bahut achchha sher aapne yaha pesh kiya hai..
mujhe bahut pasand aaya...
chaar line mein aapne bahut kuchh kah diya hai..

likhate rahiye..

Akant...


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Akant

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«Reply #8 on: August 23, 2004, 12:17:36 PM »

Quote from: "Deewana29"

Zindagi ek phool hai aur mohabbat us ka shehed
Pyar Ek Dariya Hai, Aur Mehmoob uski sarhad

wah wah bahut khub...

zindagi ko jitana define kerte hain utana hi ulajh jaate hain
esliye kahate hain ki jindagi undefined hai..

pyar ki koi ek paribhasha nahi hai
pyar ko shabdo ke dayare mein rakha nahi ja sakata

Akant...


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Pooja

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aa jaao ki toot na jaaye... jeevan ki yea lakirein..

«Reply #9 on: August 23, 2004, 03:37:27 PM »

aik zindagi mili bhee to kherat ki tarha
aya mosam-e-bahar gya barsat ki tarha
dekhy jahan log bahoot magar
mila na hum ko koi fakt unki tarha


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waheed_rose2004

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aa jaao ki toot na jaaye... jeevan ki yea lakirein..

«Reply #10 on: August 23, 2004, 03:53:00 PM »

nice one pooja,......really bahot accha likha aap ne...

Is Zabt Ke Haathon Ji Bhar Ke Ro Bhi Na Sake Hum Ai Tauba
Aankhon Mein Jo Aansu Bhar Aayepalkon Se Dhalak Ker Beh Na Sake


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Pooja

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aa jaao ki toot na jaaye... jeevan ki yea lakirein..

«Reply #11 on: August 23, 2004, 03:55:30 PM »

nice waheed


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waheed_rose2004

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aa jaao ki toot na jaaye... jeevan ki yea lakirein..

«Reply #12 on: August 23, 2004, 04:01:02 PM »

thanx pooja...


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nishita

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aa jaao ki toot na jaaye... jeevan ki yea lakirein..

«Reply #13 on: August 23, 2004, 06:51:51 PM »

nice both


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Pooja

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aa jaao ki toot na jaaye... jeevan ki yea lakirein..

«Reply #14 on: August 24, 2004, 12:44:12 AM »

saanse thi mai jiski, wo sanase ab nahi hai
jinda hu mai, magar ab wo nahi hai
phir bhi hardam wo mere sath hai
ajj bhi meri jindagi aor meri saanse bas ussi ke naam hai