aa jaao ki toot na jaaye... jeevan ki yea lakirein..

by Akant on August 18, 2004, 08:19:32 AM

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mateen govindvi

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«Reply #15 on: August 24, 2004, 04:37:34 AM »

dil ki baat labo par la kar ab tak hum dukh sahte hai
hum ne suna tha is dharti par dil wake bhi rahte hai

bit gaya sawan ka mahina, mausam ne nazre badli
lekin in pyasi aankho me ab tak aansu bahte hai

ek hamen aawara kahna koi bada ilzaam nahi
dunya wale dilwalo ko aur bahut kuch kahte hai


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Akant

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«Reply #16 on: August 24, 2004, 11:21:51 AM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

aik zindagi mili bhee to kherat ki tarha
aya mosam-e-bahar gya barsat ki tarha
dekhy jahan log bahoot magar
mila na hum ko koi fakt unki tarha

Pooja ji,

bahut khub sher aapne pesh kiya hai..
aapki pahali do line to gazab ki hai...

aik zindagi mili bhee to kherat ki tarha
aya mosam-e-bahar gya barsat ki tarha

esi tarah likhate rahiye...

Akant...


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Akant

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thanks

«Reply #17 on: August 24, 2004, 11:24:43 AM »

waheed_rose2004" ji

bahut khub..kya sher aapne likha hai..!!!!!!

Is Zabt Ke Haathon Ji Bhar Ke Ro Bhi Na Sake Hum Ai Tauba
Aankhon Mein Jo Aansu Bhar Aayepalkon Se Dhalak Ker Beh Na Sake[/b]

lajvaab..sher hai..

Akant...


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Akant

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thanks

«Reply #18 on: August 24, 2004, 11:29:00 AM »

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Nishita ji i am agree with you...

pooja ji again bahut khubsurat prastuti...

saanse thi mai jiski, wo sanase ab nahi hai
jinda hu mai, magar ab wo nahi hai
phir bhi hardam wo mere sath hai
ajj bhi meri jindagi aor meri saanse bas ussi ke naam hai

Akant...


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thanks

«Reply #19 on: August 24, 2004, 11:31:50 AM »

Govind ji,

dil ki baat labo par la kar ab tak hum dukh sahte hai
hum ne suna tha is dharti par dil wake bhi rahte hai

bit gaya sawan ka mahina, mausam ne nazre badli
lekin in pyasi aankho me ab tak aansu bahte hai

ek hamen aawara kahna koi bada ilzaam nahi
dunya wale dilwalo ko aur bahut kuch kahte hai

aapki es shayri ki jitani bhi tareef kerunga kam hi hogi..
sachchi ek dilwaale ko aapne bahut khubi se bayaan kiya hai

daad kabul kijiye...

Akant...


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Pooja

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aa jaao ki toot na jaaye... jeevan ki yea lakirein..

«Reply #20 on: August 24, 2004, 02:45:56 PM »

Thanks Akant and Waheed.

ayegy mosam, jayegy moasam
humko bahoot rulayegy mosam
har saans ki bas yahi fariyaad hogi
bas aor nahi, yah to meri ab anteem saans hogi.


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waheed_rose2004

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aa jaao ki toot na jaaye... jeevan ki yea lakirein..

«Reply #21 on: August 24, 2004, 04:52:52 PM »

bahot khoob likha pooja....mateen..............aknat

Baadalon se salaam leta hoon ,
wakt ke haath thaam leta hoon,
maut ruk jaati hai pal bhar ke liye ,
jab mein hathon per tera naam leta hoon.


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Pooja

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aa jaao ki toot na jaaye... jeevan ki yea lakirein..

«Reply #22 on: August 24, 2004, 04:58:37 PM »

wah bahoot khoob


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waheed_rose2004

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aa jaao ki toot na jaaye... jeevan ki yea lakirein..

«Reply #23 on: August 25, 2004, 07:39:03 AM »

thanx pooja.......


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mateen govindvi

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aa jaao ki toot na jaaye... jeevan ki yea lakirein..

«Reply #24 on: August 25, 2004, 07:40:50 AM »

thanx wahid


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Akant

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«Reply #25 on: August 26, 2004, 08:24:51 AM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

Thanks Akant and Waheed.

ayegy mosam, jayegy moasam
humko bahoot rulayegy mosam
har saans ki bas yahi fariyaad hogi
bas aor nahi, yah to meri ab anteem saans hogi.

Pooja ji,

welcome and thanks again.. for writting such a touchable sher

Akant...


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«Reply #26 on: August 26, 2004, 08:26:23 AM »

Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"

bahot khoob likha pooja....mateen..............aknat

Baadalon se salaam leta hoon ,
wakt ke haath thaam leta hoon,
maut ruk jaati hai pal bhar ke liye ,
jab mein hathon per tera naam leta hoon.

Waheed ji,

bahut pyara sher phir aapne likha hai... bahut khub..
likhate rahiye...

Akant...


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aa jaao ki toot na jaaye... jeevan ki yea lakirein..

«Reply #27 on: August 26, 2004, 10:35:04 AM »

kafan se dhakaa hu phir bhi ye dil bekraar hai
mujhe abhi mat dafnana dosto mujhe saki ka intezaar hai


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«Reply #28 on: August 26, 2004, 12:00:36 PM »

Quote from: "samnoj"

kafan se dhakaa hu phir bhi ye dil bekraar hai
mujhe abhi mat dafnana dosto mujhe saki ka intezaar hai

wah waah samnoj ji,

bahut khub..likha hai aapne...

ek sher arz hai...

jita hoon es kadar ke ghume jindagi nahi
jalata hua diya hoon magar roshny nahi
vo muddate huyi hain kisi se juda huye
lekin yea dil ki aag hai jo abhi tak bujhi nahi

Akant...


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Pooja

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aa jaao ki toot na jaaye... jeevan ki yea lakirein..

«Reply #29 on: August 26, 2004, 03:42:40 PM »

Thanks Akant.

kaise kahu ki roshani nahi, jab jalati hu rat din
kaise kahu ki wo juda hai,
jab ki uski yaad tarpati hai rat din
muddat hui usse gai hui, uski arjoo ajj bhi hai
jiti hu is kadar ki mai,
wo jinda hai mujme ajj bhi
aor mai, jaise ki jinda laash koi hai