aa jaao ki toot na jaaye... jeevan ki yea lakirein..

by Akant on August 18, 2004, 08:19:32 AM
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«Reply #30 on: August 26, 2004, 04:15:44 PM »


nice one pooaja.........

Ab To Zabt-E-Gham Ne Pathher Ker Dia Warna Pooja
Dekhta Koi Ke Dil Ke Zakhm Jab Aankhon Main They.

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«Reply #31 on: August 26, 2004, 04:17:51 PM »
wah nice....

Dil ka dard ankho se ab jubaan per aa gaya hai
khair mere khuda ab, ghayal deewana mahfil mai aa gaya hai
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mateen govindvi
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«Reply #32 on: August 27, 2004, 05:56:50 AM »
Quote from: "samnoj"
kafan se dhakaa hu phir bhi ye dil bekraar hai
mujhe abhi mat dafnana dosto mujhe saki ka intezaar hai


tujhe marne ki tamanna hogi mujhe aur bhi jina hai
ky tere mai khane ki botal khatm ho gayee, mujhe abhi aur bhi peena hai
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Akant
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hi
«Reply #33 on: August 27, 2004, 07:34:53 AM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Thanks Akant.

kaise kahu ki roshani nahi, jab jalati hu rat din
kaise kahu ki wo juda hai,
jab ki uski yaad tarpati hai rat din
muddat hui usse gai hui, uski arjoo ajj bhi hai
jiti hu is kadar ki mai,
wo jinda hai mujme ajj bhi
aor mai, jaise ki jinda laash koi hai


pooja ji

thanks for replying me..
aapne bahut badhiya aur soch samajh ke javab likha..
pasand aaya..

likhati rahiye...

Akant...
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Akant
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hi
«Reply #34 on: August 27, 2004, 07:36:18 AM »
waheed ji, pooja ji aur govind ji,

aap sabko ek baar phir se dhanyvaad kerta hoon..
aap sab bahut achchha likhate hain..



Akant...
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Tosha
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«Reply #35 on: August 27, 2004, 07:39:20 AM »
hey cool...!!! all u ppl r just superb..!!!
wow!
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Akant
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hi
«Reply #36 on: August 27, 2004, 07:58:40 AM »
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hey cool...!!! all you ppl r just superb..!!!
wow!


Hey Tosha,

welcome and thanks

Akant...
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«Reply #37 on: August 27, 2004, 08:59:00 AM »
saaki pe ilzaam na aaye, gar tujh tak jaam na aaye
saaki pila dil khol kar aaj, aaj mahboob ki mujhe yaad naaaye
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«Reply #38 on: August 27, 2004, 09:00:45 AM »
tere dil pe kitna hai boj
bohat achha likha sanmoj
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«Reply #39 on: August 27, 2004, 09:01:44 AM »
sher ho ya cheeta
thanx nishita
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mateen govindvi
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«Reply #40 on: August 27, 2004, 11:37:26 AM »
Quote from: "samnoj"
saaki pe ilzaam na aaye, gar tujh tak jaam na aaye
saaki pila dil khol kar aaj, aaj mahboob ki mujhe yaad naaaye


saaki agar dil khol ke pilaa de tujhko
kahin aisa na ho ki usko hi mahboob samajh baithe
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Tosha
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«Reply #41 on: August 27, 2004, 01:58:42 PM »
Koi waada koi gum to nahi
aakh phir bhi humari nam to nahi
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mateen govindvi
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«Reply #42 on: August 28, 2004, 06:34:52 AM »
good tosha
per bahut mehnat lagi padne me
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Tosha
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«Reply #43 on: August 28, 2004, 07:32:03 AM »
Thanx maneet..!

Baat aise to nahi ko boli na jaye
par sare aam ye gath kholi na jaye
preeti rishte ke trazoo pe to li na jaye
chaaw to rah bain bhi milte hai
bas manzil pe hi nahi
kyo na phir dooph he arram se dho le jaye
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«Reply #44 on: August 28, 2004, 07:51:51 AM »




            Thanx Akant..................




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