Aa jate hain aasoo.....(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on April 08, 2009, 12:23:50 PM
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Ho kisi bhi aakh me, hain to magar aasoo
Aaj meri to kal teri, aakho me hoge yahi aasoo

Woh kitna pareshaan hain, use ab hosh hi kaha
Rone ki baat pe hase, aur hasi pe aa jate hai aasoo

Har waqt dua hain, hath peele ho betiyo ke
Aur jab hoti hain betiyaan vidah, q aa jate hain aasoo

Koi bhar pet ro raha hain, ke lazzat me kami thi
Aur kisi ki bhookh ne, aakho me la diye aasoo

Kisi ko gam hain judaiee ka, to kisi ko dard-e-bewafaiee
Aur kisi ne itni mohabbat payee, khushi se nikal pade aasoo

Kaisi namaz teri kaisa tera sajda kaisi teri ibadat
Jo aaye na khauf-e-khuda se GHAYEL, kabhi teri aakh me aasoo

-Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #1 on: April 08, 2009, 12:40:17 PM »
Bahut khoob sajid ji  Applause Applause

Bigdi kismat ko banane ke liye
Minnate bahut ki usse manane ke liye

Dard ka sagar sama gaya meri aankhon mein
Aur mai reh gayi ashq bahane ke liye..
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«Reply #2 on: April 08, 2009, 01:55:42 PM »
Waah Waah waah, Subhan Allah, Subhan Allah, Suhan Allah, Kya Khoob Likha Hai sajid Bhai Aapne,.
Har Ashaar mashallah, Bohat Bade Ishaare Deta hai,.

Subhan Allah, Jitni Bhi tareef kjaroon Kam Hai is Kalaam ki, Allah Aapke Kalaam Ko mehfooz Rakhein,.

Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.
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«Reply #3 on: April 08, 2009, 10:20:18 PM »
very nice,mere ghayel,
aap ke dil mein garibo ke liye feeling hai,
mindblwing.madhu
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«Reply #4 on: April 08, 2009, 10:51:57 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob ek ek line kamal ki rachi hai apne Sajid!! Good creation!!
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«Reply #5 on: April 09, 2009, 06:16:46 AM »
Mindblowing .. Sajid Ji kya baat hai.. very Nice creation...
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«Reply #6 on: April 09, 2009, 07:36:50 AM »
Quote from: Roja on April 08, 2009, 12:40:17 PM
Bahut khoob sajid ji  Applause Applause

Bigdi kismat ko banane ke liye
Minnate bahut ki usse manane ke liye

Dard ka sagar sama gaya meri aankhon mein
Aur mai reh gayi ashq bahane ke liye..

Bohat shukriyaan Roja meri tareef aur in khoobsurat shero ke liye....
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«Reply #7 on: April 09, 2009, 06:03:54 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on April 08, 2009, 01:55:42 PM
Waah Waah waah, Subhan Allah, Subhan Allah, Suhan Allah, Kya Khoob Likha Hai sajid Bhai Aapne,.
Har Ashaar mashallah, Bohat Bade Ishaare Deta hai,.

Subhan Allah, Jitni Bhi tareef kjaroon Kam Hai is Kalaam ki, Allah Aapke Kalaam Ko mehfooz Rakhein,.

Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.

Thank You Azeem for alwayssssss giving encouragement to Yoindian, i know there are soem Yoindians who dont bother to give their comments on my thread, y they do that is a mystry. But its fine those who give are the best of the best not because they give comment on my post but because they love poetry regardless the fact who has written it.

My comments were not for those Yoindians who have miss my work, i myself do miss many beautiful work. But my comments are for those people who never participate in any post even after reading it. And the funny part is they expect everyone to read their work and comment on that.

-Ghayel-
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«Reply #8 on: April 10, 2009, 10:47:13 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 09, 2009, 06:03:54 PM
Thank You Azeem for alwayssssss giving encouragement to Yoindian, i know there are soem Yoindians who dont bother to give their comments on my thread, y they do that is a mystry. But its fine those who give are the best of the best not because they give comment on my post but because they love poetry regardless the fact who has written it.

My comments were not for those Yoindians who have miss my work, i myself do miss many beautiful work. But my comments are for those people who never participate in any post even after reading it. And the funny part is they expect everyone to read their work and comment on that.

-Ghayel-



Jab Shayari Achchi Ho, Dil Par zaroor Asar Kar Jaati Hai,.
Aur Dushman Ko Bhi Shayari, Daad Dene Par Majboor Kar Jaati Hai,.

Hume Aur Bhi, Umeedein hain Aapse, Sajid Bhai, Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.

Thank U,./

Azeem,.
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«Reply #9 on: April 13, 2009, 07:28:53 AM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on April 08, 2009, 10:20:18 PM
very nice,mere ghayel,
aap ke dil mein garibo ke liye feeling hai,
mindblwing.madhu

Thank u sweetheart for ur time and comment, aur dear kabhi hum bhi bohat gareeb the waqt aur halaat ke sath ladhte ladhte badi mehnat ke baad aaj kuch kabil huye hain, par kasam khuda ki aadat ke aaj bhi gareeb hain...
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«Reply #10 on: April 13, 2009, 08:11:59 AM »
Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne dost

Heere ki parah to jhoree hi jaane
Baaki to bas bhavren aur parwaane
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«Reply #11 on: April 14, 2009, 09:12:41 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on April 08, 2009, 10:51:57 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob ek ek line kamal ki rachi hai apne Sajid!! Good creation!!

Thank you so much Pooja for giving your time and comment....
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«Reply #12 on: April 17, 2009, 06:00:44 AM »
Quote from: Sophi on April 09, 2009, 06:16:46 AM
Mindblowing .. Sajid Ji kya baat hai.. very Nice creation...

Thank You so much Sophi for ur time and comment.....
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Aryaan
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«Reply #13 on: April 19, 2009, 12:10:24 AM »
Bohat khoob Sajid...
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«Reply #14 on: April 22, 2009, 03:23:02 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on April 10, 2009, 10:47:13 AM
Jab Shayari Achchi Ho, Dil Par zaroor Asar Kar Jaati Hai,.
Aur Dushman Ko Bhi Shayari, Daad Dene Par Majboor Kar Jaati Hai,.

Hume Aur Bhi, Umeedein hain Aapse, Sajid Bhai, Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.

Thank U,./

Azeem,.

Bas Azeem apne is Gunah_gaar bhai se kabhi naraz mat hona, khuda duniya me jitni zillat de mujhe manzoor hain par apne is Pyare bhai ki nafrat kabhi na de "AAMEEN"
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