^^Aaine se Fareb^^ (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on January 20, 2007, 07:39:47 PM
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आईने से आज हमने कुछ इस तरह दगा करी,
अपनी सूरत देख कर भी जैसे अनदेखी करी…

आँख का काजल जब कभी बिखरा हुआ लगा,
आँख मे अपनी हमने झूठी शोखी भरी…

जलता हुआ सा लगता है दिल का वीरान मंज़र,
शोलों की देखिए आज यह कैसी आँधी चली…

चैन है ना करार है, कोई राहत ही नहीं,
आज फिर से उलझने और बैचानियाँ बढ़ी…

गुम-सुम है बाग का हरेक कोना कोना यूँ,
खिले बिना मुरझा गयी हो जैसे कोई कली…

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Aaine se aaj humne kuch is tarah daga kari,
Apni soorat dekh kar bhi jaise andekhi kari…

Aankh ka kaajal jab kabhi bikhra hua laga,
Aankh mey apni humne jhoothi shokhi bhari…

Jaltaa hua saa lagta hai dil ka viraan manzar,
Sholon ki dekhiye aaj yeh kaisi aandhi chali…

Chain hai naa karaar hai, koi raahat hi nahin,
Aaj Phir sey uljhaney aur baichaini badhii…

Gumsum hai baag ka har ek konaa konaa yun,
Khiley bina murjha gayi ho jaise koii kalii…
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #1 on: January 20, 2007, 07:54:57 PM »
Waah...raat ke sannaate me accha likha hai....Gud One....!!!

Woh Raat ke Sannaate me jaise Aaina mera toot gaya......
Pal bhar ki thi Khushi aisi ki Saath unse Zindagi bhar ka Choot gaya.....

Chala tha roshan galion me......
Par Anjaam jaise mera koi loot gaya......

Woh raat ke Sannaate me jaise Aaina mera toot gaya......

Aane ko thi jab Raat Chandani.......
Tab Aatish unke Aangan me humse najaane kyu rooth gaya.....

Pal bhar ki thi Khushi aisi ki Saath unse Zindagi bhar ka Choot gaya.....


Woh raat ke Sannaate me jaise Aaina mera toot gaya.......!!!!!!!!!!
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #2 on: January 21, 2007, 05:26:59 AM »
bohaat hi jayaada khoobsurat....  reply karne ki koshish karta hu...!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: February 12, 2007, 04:35:31 PM »
Aaine bas ab ek naam sa lagta hai
Kamare mai latka ek saman sa lagta hai

Kabhi ghanto kiya karati thi isse baatein
Dekh lu jo ajj isse, ek ahsaan sa lagta hai

Her raaz janta hai yah tera aor mera
Teri ek purani pahchan sa lagta hai

Aaine bas ab ek naam sa lagta hai
Kamare mai latka ek saman sa lagta hai
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Talat
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«Reply #4 on: February 12, 2007, 04:44:43 PM »
Shikha, Gaurav and Pooja....bohot hi achcha likha hai aap logon ne !! Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: February 12, 2007, 05:00:48 PM »
shukaria TALAT JI
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Shikha12
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«Reply #6 on: February 13, 2007, 04:55:16 AM »
Thanks a lot Gaurav, Jeet, Pooja di and Talat...

Gaurav... Bahut hi pyaara likha hai... Koii jawaab nahin hai mere paas... Usual Smile

Pooja di... Humesha ki tarah ek baar phir kamaal ka likha hai aapne... Usual Smile Bahut aasaani sey ek Gehrii baat keh di aapne..
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rockindia
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«Reply #7 on: February 13, 2007, 08:04:34 AM »
sabne bhaut accha likha ha
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ranjana
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«Reply #8 on: February 13, 2007, 09:36:23 AM »
wah !! bahut khoob sabne bahut hi khubusrat aur sach likha hai ..too good...

ek koshish meri bhi ...


dil ke aaeine par kabhi yun bhi nazar rakhana
aankh mein ho agar aansu toh lab par hansi rakhana

sirf dikhaane se nahi dikhte hain dil ke ghaav
aaeina hai yah lafaz in par apni dil ki baat likhana

yahan  log har baat ka bana dete hain afsaana
dil hai tera aaiena tu  apne dil ki baat par yakeen rakhana

hai bahut mushkil apne dil ki manzil ko paana
par har baar raha mein nayi umeed se tu har kadam rakhana !!
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rockindia
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«Reply #9 on: February 13, 2007, 09:52:56 AM »
bhaut khoob ranjna ji
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #10 on: February 13, 2007, 11:30:11 AM »
bahut khoob ...shikha jiji..badnaam..pooja sis n ranjana jee
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