---- /// Aaj bhi meri maa roti hai /// ---- -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #15 on: April 23, 2010, 02:24:25 PM »

Aapki is nazm ne jaane kitni yaadon ko aankhon main laa diya, Kapil Ji..."Aaj bhi meri Maa roti hai"...Bohot bohot khoob....!!

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Re: ---- /// Aaj bhi meri maa roti hai /// ---- Klaskar

«Reply #16 on: April 23, 2010, 02:30:48 PM »

Talat ji main tahe dil se aapka shukriya adaa karta hoon ki aapne apne kimti waqt me se kuch waqt nikaal k meri kavita ko diya... kisi beti ki peeda main nahi samajh sakta ... fir bhi ek chhoti si koshish ki hai... aapne pasand kiya jaanke bahut achcha laga... bahut bahut shukriya Talat ji...!!!

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Aapki is nazm ne jaane kitni yaadon ko aankhon main laa diya, Kapil Ji..."Aaj bhi meri Maa roti hai"...Bohot bohot khoob....!!

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«Reply #17 on: April 25, 2010, 02:39:31 PM »

Lafzon Mein kehna Mushkil Hoga kapil Ji ke Aapki yeh Nazm Sach Maayne Mein Dil Ko Kitna Chuuti Hai..Itni Simplicity se aapne woh baatein likhi Hai Jo Ek ladki Ki Zindagi Ko darshaati Hai..Bahut Hi gehre Aur Haqeeqat Se Juudi Hui Baatein Likhi hai Aapne..

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«Reply #18 on: April 26, 2010, 11:48:32 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish ji... aapne apne kimti waqt me se hamari kavita ko thoda sa waqt diya aur ise saraha ... bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish ji...!!!

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«Reply #19 on: April 26, 2010, 12:59:24 PM »

Wah wah wah kya baat hai Kapil-ji bahoot he dil ko chhune wali kavita hai aapki....Jeevan ki sachayeion se judi hui ek dard bhari rachna....pal pal Maa ko yaad dilati....rulati rulati rulati.... tearyeyed

keep it up...Kapil-ji
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Maa

Maa ek sukhad ahsaas hai,

Jo apne main hi kuch khas hai,

Jab jab dukh padta khud par,

“ MAA” naam aata jubaan par,

Maa ki gode main swarg lagta hai,

Har maa main rab basata hai,

Maa kaa saaya rahane se,

Bade bhi bcche lagate hain,

Lekin bin maa ke bcche bhi ,

Asamay he Budhe ban jaate hai,

Maa ka pyaar jeewant rakhta hai umer bhar,

Bin maa ke kaat hi nahi pati ek bhi pal,

Aaj phir mann bhar aaya hai kyonki,

MAA ka pyaar phir yaad aaya.

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Quote from: klaskar on April 22, 2010, 06:16:07 PM

Darasal main kuch aur likhne ki koshish kar raha tha kuch aur hi ban gaya. Jo main likhna chah raha tha agar wo ban paaya to baad me pesh karunga. Is kavita me maine us ladki k baare me likha hai jisne apne janam se hi apni maa ko rote dekha hai aur aaj tak ro rahi hai uski maa...

jis din main is duniya me aayi,
roti hui aankhen thi meri maa ki,
ghum k nahi wo khsuhi k the aansun,
aankhen tab nam thi meri maa ki,
us din se roti hai meri maa,
aaj bhi nam aankhen hain uski,

bachpan me mujhe chalna sikhaya,
maa ne hi maa kehna sikhaya,
mujhe agar kabhi chot lag jaati,
tab meri maa ki aankh bhar aati,
dard se tab meri maa roti thi,
aaj bhi nam aankhen hain uski,

jab padhne ko college jaana tha,
aur rehne mujhe hostel jaana tha,
maa ki gili aankhon ne mujhko,
us roz bhi rokna chaha tha,
us din meri maa royi thi,
aaj bhi nam aankhen hain uski,

jis din main bani thi dulhan,
tha mujhko duje ghar jaana,
saath apni maa ka chhodke,
tha ek naye ghar ko apnana,
us din meri maa royi thi,
aaj bhi nam aankhen hain uski,

sochti hoon kabhi kabhi main,
kya uska aansu se hai naata,
aaj main usse dur hoon itna,
tab bhi meri maa roti hai,
janam se mere roti rahi hain,
aaj bhi aankhen nam hain uski,

aaj main tere paas nahi hoon,
maa pochhle aaj aansu tu apne,
ek roz mujhe bhi to hai maa banna,
par chahti nahi hoon main yu rona,
ye baat sun k maa fir royi thi,
aaj bhi aankhen nam hain uski...


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«Reply #20 on: April 26, 2010, 01:10:30 PM »

wah bahoth qoob kapil sahab .. kya kahene ..kya ahesas diya hai alfas ko jawab nahi .. mubarak baad apko is taqleeq ke liye .. khush rahen hamesha ..

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«Reply #21 on: April 26, 2010, 02:13:44 PM »

bahut bahut shukriya Koyal ji... koshish ki hai kuch shabdon me ek ladki k dard ko pesh karne ki... bahut achcha laga jaan k ki aapko hamari kavita pasand aayi.... tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon main aapka Koyal ji... bahut bahut shukriya...!!!

aapne bhi bahut khoobsurat poem share kiya hain...!!!

Quote from: KOYAL46 on April 26, 2010, 12:59:24 PM

keep it up...Kapil-ji
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«Reply #22 on: April 26, 2010, 02:16:46 PM »

Quote from: klaskar on April 26, 2010, 11:48:32 AM

bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish ji... aapne apne kimti waqt me se hamari kavita ko thoda sa waqt diya aur ise saraha ... bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish ji...!!!

Klaskar Ji,Agar Itni Pyaari kavita Ko Waqt Na Diya Jaye To Phir Kisse Diya Jaaye..

Aapki Likhi Kavita Ti hi Itni Khoobsurat Ke Nazrein Khud Bhar Khud Yahan Jam Gayi

Phir se, Bahut Hi Acha Likha Hai Aapne..


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«Reply #23 on: April 26, 2010, 02:59:08 PM »

bahut bhaut shukriya Qadeer ji...!!!

Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 26, 2010, 01:10:30 PM

wah bahoth qoob kapil sahab .. kya kahene ..kya ahesas diya hai alfas ko jawab nahi .. mubarak baad apko is taqleeq ke liye .. khush rahen hamesha ..

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«Reply #24 on: April 26, 2010, 03:00:12 PM »

bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish ji...!!!

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«Reply #25 on: August 20, 2010, 04:58:04 AM »

HAR LINE ME MAA KI AANKHEIN YAAD AA RAHI THI KAPIL.....
WO FEELINGS JISE HUM SAMJHKAR BHI KAI BAR NAHIN SAMJHTE..DEKH KAR ANDEKHA KAR DEE HAIN..AAJ UNN FEELINGS PE GARV MEHSUS HUA...
PEHLE JAB MOM ROTI THI MAIN KEHTI THI KYA MAMMMA JAB DEKHO ROTE HO HAR BAT ME..BE BRAVE AISE NAHINKARTE....
AAJ WAHI FEELINGS MUJHE SUKUN DETI HAI......

YE POEM JARUR UNKO SUNAUNGI...APNI AWAZ ME RECORD KARKE.....SACH UNHE BHT ACHCHA LAGEGA....

THNX KAPIL ..JO MAIN MOM KOHAMESHA KEHNA CHAHTI THI NA KEH PAI AAJ SHAYD KEH DUNGI.....


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«Reply #26 on: August 20, 2010, 10:01:50 AM »

shukriya Kasak ji.... mere liye isse jyaada khushi ki baat aur kya ho sakti hai ki meri kavita aapse wo kehelwa rahi hai jo aap barson se nahi keh paayi... meri kavita ki izzat itni jyaada badhaane ke liye main aapka shukriya kin shabdon me adaa karun samajh nahi paa raha hoon...

aap mujhe batana jarur ki aapki mummy ko ye poem kaisi lagi... maine nahi sunaya ab tak apni maa ko... !!!


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