Aaj Fir_____________Baadal

by baadal102 on January 28, 2009, 05:09:59 AM
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Mil ke aaj barso baad un se aisa laga,
Jaise koi apna nahi ek ajnabi se main mila,

Chehre pe na koi khushi thi or na hi koi gum,
Na koi phool or na hi koi khat aaj mila,

Sirf kuch baate suni ansuni se kahi unhone,
Na lage gale or na hi koi haunsala mila,

Chup chap dikhaye jakhm ke nissan jism ke,
Lakin ruh pe uski koi jakhm hume nahi mila,

Kuch hichkichahat kuch sehma hua wo dikha,
Wo hasna wo muskurana wo ruthna kuch nahi mila,

Sunai bas kuch majboorion ki daastan hume,
Na wo pyar na wo tapis na hi kuch aur hi mila,

Ho gaye wo ruksat kuch jhoote wade ker ke,
Aaj fir Baadal ko intzaar ke siwa kuch nahi mila,

Aaj fir Baadal ko intzaar ke siwa kuch nahi mila...........





Baadal
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abdulqadeer
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«Reply #1 on: January 28, 2009, 05:45:14 AM »
Wah Wah Bahoth Qoob Janab Ghazal Ka Maqta Jaan lewa hai Janab !!Maza agaya Bhai !!
Allah Apko Khush rakhe !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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cara
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«Reply #2 on: January 28, 2009, 06:18:21 AM »
bahut hi badiya likha hai baadal ji.......

aaj barson baad ,mujhse bichra mera yaar mila,
chehre se toh khush lagaa,par aankhon se udaas mila.

mujhse judaa hone ka dukh,usne zahir toh nahin kiya,
par mera saath na pane ka,chahera uska bayan kiya.

mujhse fir se milne ke wada toh na karke gaya,
lekin najaane kyun aisa lagta hai,intezaar karne ko,kahekar gaya.

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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #3 on: January 28, 2009, 01:14:08 PM »
Kya baat hain wah..... Clapping Smiley

Maine janta hu tune kya dekha hoga
Woh mile tujhe teri aisi kismat kaha badal
Tune aaj phir aaeena dekha hoga

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«Reply #4 on: January 28, 2009, 02:39:42 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause
Baadal jii bahut khoob likha hai aapne...  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #5 on: January 28, 2009, 03:08:33 PM »
waah .. bahut acche ... very nice .. Badaal.

keep posting.
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«Reply #6 on: January 28, 2009, 03:11:09 PM »
Bohat Bohat Achche Baadal Bhai, Nice One,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.
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