Aaj ka din:Shayri-E-Dard

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Mujhe kisi se pyaar hua tha kabhi. Paaglo ki tarah mohabbat karta tha usse. Sab kuch chhod k usse milne jaata tha uske shahar. Par kismat apni, hamari mohabbat anjaam tak nahi pahuch paai. Aur uski shaadi kisi aur se ho gayi. Ye kavita maine us din likha tha jab mera pyaar kisi aur ka pyaar banke mere shahar aayi thi. Hamesha se hi chaha tha ki wo mere paas aaye meri hoke. Par kismat ko kuch aur hi manzoor tha.

Aaj aai hai wo mere shahar kisi aur ki dulhan banke...

kal ki hi baat hai main milne jaata tha tujhse pagal banke,
kal ki hi baat hai lauta hoon tere shahar se main ghayal banke,
jab tune muskurake mujhse apni sagayi ki baat kahi, socha maine
jaane q bajta raha hoon itne saalo se tere paon ka payal banke...

sikh liya tha jeena maine bhulake tere yaadon ko aur tujhe,
aaj tere yaadon k dard ne aake chheda fir ek baar mujhe,
jane q tere aane ki aahat se bechain ho gaya hoon fir ek baar,
tu aaj meri nahi hai, fir bhi satati hai mujhe q yaadgar banke...

haan aaj hi wo din hai jab tu aane waali hai mere shahar mein,
haan aaj hi wo din hai jis ka intzar kai saalon se tha is dil mein,
par kaise samjhaayen tujhe hum ki na chaha tha tujhe is roop me,
kal tak meri mohabbat thi tu, aaj aai hai kisi aur ki dulhan banke...


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rayees abdullah

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Re: Aaj ka din

«Reply #1 on: March 31, 2010, 12:58:43 PM »

good work klaskar


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Re: Aaj ka din

«Reply #2 on: March 31, 2010, 02:08:18 PM »

Thanx a lot Rayees bhai...!!!

Quote from: rayees abdullah on March 31, 2010, 12:58:43 PM

good work klaskar


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Re: Aaj ka din

«Reply #3 on: March 31, 2010, 04:47:46 PM »

Achhi poem likhi hai Kapil ji. Nice creation.


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: Aaj ka din

«Reply #4 on: March 31, 2010, 07:21:03 PM »

gud poem kalaskar ji


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Re: Aaj ka din

«Reply #5 on: March 31, 2010, 09:24:46 PM »

Bahut bahut khoob Kapil ji,bahut hi dard aur khoobsurti se likha aapne. icon_thumleft


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Re: Aaj ka din

«Reply #6 on: April 01, 2010, 12:37:10 AM »

No words Sir...... simply SUprb

U knoe muze kuch jaida bolna nahi aata bus mere kum words ko hi jaida samzna

seriously No wrds......Vry vll writtn....kmal hai


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Re: Aaj ka din

«Reply #7 on: April 01, 2010, 09:26:07 AM »

Aapne hamari kavita pasand kiya iske liye main aapka shukraguzaar hoon... bahut bhaut shukriya Riyaz ji...!!!

Quote from: riyaz106 on March 31, 2010, 04:47:46 PM

Achhi poem likhi hai Kapil ji. Nice creation.


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Re: Aaj ka din

«Reply #8 on: April 01, 2010, 09:26:50 AM »

Thanx a lot KA ji...!!!

Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on March 31, 2010, 07:21:03 PM

gud poem kalaskar ji


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Re: Aaj ka din

«Reply #9 on: April 01, 2010, 09:28:33 AM »

Shukriya Madhu ji. Agar mere dard bhare ehsaas aap tak pahuch saken to isse jyada khushi mere liye aur kya ho sakti hai. Bahut bahut shukriya aapka Madhu ji.

Quote from: madhuwesh on March 31, 2010, 09:24:46 PM

Bahut bahut khoob Kapil ji,bahut hi dard aur khoobsurti se likha aapne. icon_thumleft


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Re: Aaj ka din

«Reply #10 on: April 01, 2010, 09:31:00 AM »

Bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji. Mujhe jaanke bahut achcha laga ki aapko hamari kavita pasand aayi. Aapko aur kuch kehne ki jarurat hi nahi hai. Aapka "Kmal Hai" kehna hi saari taarifon se badhke hai. Thanx a lot Neel ji. Thank u so much.

Quote from: neelgold on April 01, 2010, 12:37:10 AM

No words Sir...... simply SUprb

U knoe muze kuch jaida bolna nahi aata bus mere kum words ko hi jaida samzna

seriously No wrds......Vry vll writtn....kmal hai


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Re: Aaj ka din

«Reply #11 on: April 01, 2010, 07:54:08 PM »

ARee !!!!!!!! relly ....Sahi main maine voh Dil se bola tha aur app ne sahi pakda....

ur jst supreb ... tht;s it ...
Thnx 4 ur undrstanding!!!!!!!

Quote from: klaskar on April 01, 2010, 09:31:00 AM


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Re: Aaj ka din

«Reply #12 on: April 01, 2010, 08:24:58 PM »

Thanx a lot Neel ji... many many thanx... bahut jyada taarif karti hain aap hamari... itni tarif ki aadat nahi humein... Usual Smile

Dil ki baatein dil tak pahuch hi jaati hain,
Kuch kehne ki jarurat nahi hoti,
Doston k liye ishaara hi kaafi hota hai,
Shabdon ki jarurat nahi hoti...

Quote from: neelgold on April 01, 2010, 07:54:08 PM

ARee !!!!!!!! relly ....Sahi main maine voh Dil se bola tha aur app ne sahi pakda....

ur jst supreb ... tht;s it ...
Thnx 4 ur undrstanding!!!!!!!


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Re: Aaj ka din

«Reply #13 on: April 01, 2010, 08:38:56 PM »

Shabdon se aap khelte hai aur ilzaam hume dete ho...
Itni bi rusvahi achi nahi "Kapil ji"
Houle se , Deere se Haal-E-Dil byan Khud hi kaar dete ho...
Hume to Ishare ki bi jarorat nahi "Kapil Ji"

Quote from: klaskar on April 01, 2010, 08:24:58 PM

Thanx a lot Neel ji... many many thanx... bahut jyada taarif karti hain aap hamari... itni tarif ki aadat nahi humein... Usual Smile

Dil ki baatein dil tak pahuch hi jaati hain,
Kuch kehne ki jarurat nahi hoti,
Doston k liye ishaara hi kaafi hota hai,
Shabdon ki jarurat nahi hoti...


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Re: Aaj ka din

«Reply #14 on: April 01, 2010, 08:50:51 PM »

Bahut bahut khoob Neel ji.aapne bhi kamaal ke likha hai.


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