Aaj ka din -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

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«Reply #15 on: April 01, 2010, 08:55:29 PM »

THanx


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Re: Aaj ka din

«Reply #16 on: April 01, 2010, 09:04:44 PM »

Jaadu hai aapke shabdon me bhi....!!!

jaane kya sochke aapne humein shabdon ka khiladi bana diya,
shabdon k daayre me hi fasi hai zindagi hamaari,
humne to ishaaro hi ishaaro me daasntaan bayaan kar dia,
fir bhi jaane q ruswa humein kehti hai ye dost hamari...

Quote from: neelgold on April 01, 2010, 08:38:56 PM

Shabdon se aap khelte hai aur ilzaam hume dete ho...
Itni bi rusvahi achi nahi "Kapil ji"
Houle se , Deere se Haal-E-Dil byan Khud hi kaar dete ho...
Hume to Ishare ki bi jarorat nahi "Kapil Ji"


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«Reply #17 on: April 01, 2010, 09:55:49 PM »


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«Reply #18 on: April 02, 2010, 09:43:04 AM »

Kapil Dost,

Main kayi kavitaein parrta rehta hoon aur kayi likta bhi hoon...bahaut kam aisi hoti hai jo ankh nam kar de...Apne toh bas rula hi dia...Apka title hi bahaut gum se bharA HAI..hmm main aur kya kahoun sivae iske... Applause

Toooooo Good! Applause

Ek shaer yaad ata hai mujhe Faraz Saab ka;

Ungliyan aj bhi issi soch main gum hai Faraz,
Usne kaise naye haath ko thama hoga...

Bas itna kahunga, ab zindagi main khush rehna seekh lijiye...Ap kahenge khud apne kalam main ghum dalta hai aur mujhe kehta hai khush raho, well hum bhi koshish karte hai muskurane ki..Muskurate rahiye...


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«Reply #19 on: April 02, 2010, 09:46:51 AM »

very nice poem. klaskar ji. icon_flower


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«Reply #20 on: April 02, 2010, 12:28:37 PM »

Thanx a lot Suresh Ji...!!!

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on April 02, 2010, 09:46:51 AM

very nice poem. klaskar ji. icon_flower


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«Reply #21 on: April 02, 2010, 06:55:07 PM »

Rahim bhai,

Mera maksad aapko rulana nahi tha. Maafi chahunga dost. Main to bas chahta tha ki aapko meri kahani samajh aaye bas isi iraade se maine title description diya tha.

Bahut achcha laga jaanke ki apko hamari kavita pasand aayi. Bilkul sahi kaha aapne zindagi ki gaadi kisi k liye ruki nahi rehti. Chalne ka naam hi zindagi hai. Muskurate rahiye. Usual Smile

Aur Faraz Sahab ka sher bahut pyaara hai. Too good. Clapping Smiley

Quote from: -Rahim- on April 02, 2010, 09:43:04 AM

Toooooo Good! Applause

Ek shaer yaad ata hai mujhe Faraz Saab ka;

Ungliyan aj bhi issi soch main gum hai Faraz,
Usne kaise naye haath ko thama hoga...


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«Reply #22 on: April 03, 2010, 10:26:23 AM »

Arey apki kavita itni achi hai ke bas main kya kahoun...Tooo Good! Applause

Aur haan, main samaj sakta hoon ke dard kitna hota hai usse khone ka..


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«Reply #23 on: April 03, 2010, 09:25:31 PM »

Ek baar firse aapka bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai mere dard ko samajhne k liye aur meri kavita ko pasand karne k liye....!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on April 03, 2010, 10:26:23 AM

Arey apki kavita itni achi hai ke bas main kya kahoun...Tooo Good! Applause

Aur haan, main samaj sakta hoon ke dard kitna hota hai usse khone ka..


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«Reply #24 on: August 19, 2010, 04:11:07 AM »

kapil ji......thnx a lot k aapne ye thread ki link di....

warna hum ek achchi poem padhne se reh jate....

itni saadgi se itna gehra dard bata dena...sach me...neel ji ne sahi kaha hai...aap shabdon k khiladi hain......

hum to aapke fan hote ja rahe hain...jitna padhte hain bas kuch alag hi andaaz milta hai....

mastam post......is situation pe jarur kuch likhna hai...will try ji....


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«Reply #25 on: August 19, 2010, 05:27:55 AM »

Aaj ka din...

dikha ne ke liye uparwale tera bahot bahot sukriya... Usual Smile


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«Reply #26 on: August 19, 2010, 05:36:00 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji... yahan aur kuch nahi kehna chahunga main...!!!

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Re: Aaj ka din

«Reply #27 on: August 19, 2010, 05:36:45 AM »

Rancho ji... ye din dekhna to nahi chaahta tha par dekhna pada... Usual Smile

Quote from: Rancho-D-Idiot on August 19, 2010, 05:27:55 AM

Aaj ka din...

dikha ne ke liye uparwale tera bahot bahot sukriya... Usual Smile


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«Reply #28 on: August 19, 2010, 05:39:50 AM »

kyon kapil ji aisa kya ho gaya hai aapki zindagi me jo aap yeh din dekhana nahi chahte the... Huh?


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Re: Aaj ka din

«Reply #29 on: August 19, 2010, 05:43:11 AM »

kuch nahi... main yunhi bola.... Usual Smile

Quote from: Rancho-D-Idiot on August 19, 2010, 05:39:50 AM

kyon kapil ji aisa kya ho gaya hai aapki zindagi me jo aap yeh din dekhana nahi chahte the... Huh?


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