Aaj ke is daur me ai dost ye manjar kyo he???

by dharmendra on April 20, 2005, 06:42:17 AM
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aaj ke daur me ai dost ye manzar kyuu hai
zakhm har sar pe har ik haath me patthar kyuu hai


jab haqiiqat hai ke har zarre me tuu rahataa hai
phir zamiin par kahii masjid kahii mandir kyuu hai


apanaa anjaam to maaluum hai sab ko phir bhii
apanii nazaro me har insaan sikandar kyuu hai


zindagii jiine ke qaabil hii nahii ab "Dharam"
varnaa har aankh me ashko kaa samandar kyuu hai
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«Reply #1 on: February 14, 2010, 11:52:26 PM »
Wah wah Dharmedra ji,fatastic creation,bahut hi acha likha aapne.hats off.keep writting.excellent
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malli
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«Reply #2 on: February 15, 2010, 02:47:06 AM »
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aaj ke daur me ai dost ye manzar kyuu hai
zakhm har sar pe har ik haath me patthar kyuu hai

Bahut accha likha hai aapne Dharam ji Welcome to Yoindia
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #3 on: February 15, 2010, 07:43:45 AM »
Badi daarshanik tathay purn rachna hai aapki Dharmendraji... Applause Applause Applause

Zindagi se tu yu maayoos na ho mere humsafar
Mann ka dard dhone ko hai ye ashko k samandar

Sab kuchh Jaan kar anjaan bana hai aaj insaan
Apni he kartooton se wo ho raha hai pareshaan

Apni swarth siddhi k liye banaay ye mandir-masjid
Aaj khuda ko bhi bech raha manta apne ko sikandar

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«Reply #4 on: February 15, 2010, 08:03:24 AM »
Wah Koyal ji aapne bhi kamal ke lines likhi.bahut khoob.
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«Reply #5 on: February 15, 2010, 09:56:40 AM »
Quote from: dharmendra on April 20, 2005, 06:42:17 AM


Plz Mention N.M When It's Not Your Creation..

Good Sharing!! Thumbs UP
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #6 on: February 15, 2010, 10:05:14 AM »
Good one Dharmendra Ji
Nice response Koyal Ji
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #7 on: February 15, 2010, 10:16:32 AM »
Thanks Madhu-di for always inspiring words.....

Quote from: madhuwesh on February 15, 2010, 08:03:24 AM
Wah Koyal ji aapne bhi kamal ke lines likhi.bahut khoob.
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«Reply #8 on: February 15, 2010, 10:19:03 AM »
Thanks A LOT rAJESHJI......


Quote from: Rajesh Harish on February 15, 2010, 10:05:14 AM
Good one Dharmendra Ji
Nice response Koyal Ji
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #9 on: February 15, 2010, 10:36:51 AM »
aapka shukriya Aakaashji....


Quote from: @kaash on February 15, 2010, 10:06:37 AM
nice sharing Dharmendra ji aur Koyal ji acha likha hai aapne
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«Reply #10 on: December 25, 2012, 04:57:04 PM »
Quote from: dharmendra on April 20, 2005, 06:42:17 AM

Dear Dharmendra, As your posted ghazal was related with a ghazal, i have posted so got opportunity to view it. Really very nice and balanced ghazal. please review the first line of MAKHTA, a small word appears to be missing.After all worth praising ghazal.
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