aaj khud ko tanha paaya.................................

by waheed_rose2004 on May 20, 2005, 05:23:58 PM
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dekha  jo aaine mein aaj  khud  ko  phir se tanha  paaya
dard had  bad  gaya abhi tak woh marham nahin lagane aaya
mere  ashkon  ko  dekh kar  aashman  mein taare bhi khamosh the
dekha  jo  chand ko to usko bhi  apne saath rota  hua  paaya.........
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«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2005, 05:33:12 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
dekha  jo aaine mein aaj  khud  ko  phir se tanha  paaya
dard had  bad  gaya abhi tak woh marham nahin lagane aaya
mere  ashkon  ko  dekh kar  aashman  mein taare bhi khamosh the
dekha  jo  chand ko to usko bhi  apne saath rota  hua  paaya.........


sachhe dost ki to yahi nishani hoti hai,..

dost kaisa bhi ho usse aapnio dosti pani hoti hai,...

bus do dosto me ek batt anjani hoti hai,..

k sabse alag har dost ki kahani hoti hai,....
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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2005, 05:40:25 PM »
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dekha  jo aaine mein aaj  khud  ko  phir se tanha  paaya
dard had  bad  gaya abhi tak woh marham nahin lagane aaya
mere  ashkon  ko  dekh kar  aashman  mein taare bhi khamosh the
dekha  jo  chand ko to usko bhi  apne saath rota  hua  paaya.........


wah wah waheed!!!!!

 :D
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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2005, 10:54:51 PM »
Wah! Bohat khoob Waheed & Tushar..........
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«Reply #4 on: May 21, 2005, 10:49:48 AM »
bahot khoo waheed ji.....

yunhi likhtre rahiye.....
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«Reply #5 on: May 21, 2005, 12:24:03 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
dekha  jo aaine mein aaj  khud  ko  phir se tanha  paaya
dard had  bad  gaya abhi tak woh marham nahin lagane aaya
mere  ashkon  ko  dekh kar  aashman  mein taare bhi khamosh the
dekha  jo  chand ko to usko bhi  apne saath rota  hua  paaya.........


wah waheed,bohat dino baad entry maari hai,very nice.

bohat khoob tushar.
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«Reply #6 on: May 21, 2005, 12:27:25 PM »
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dekha  jo aaine mein aaj  khud  ko  phir se tanha  paaya
dard had  bad  gaya abhi tak woh marham nahin lagane aaya
mere  ashkon  ko  dekh kar  aashman  mein taare bhi khamosh the
dekha  jo  chand ko to usko bhi  apne saath rota  hua  paaya.........


wah waheed,bohat dino baad entry maari hai,very nice.

bohat khoob tushar.


thX nidhi ji,......

meherbani
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«Reply #7 on: June 24, 2005, 04:38:32 PM »
thanxxxxxxxxx  meena........nidhi.............aryan........aman. .......very  nice  tushar..................
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«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2005, 11:56:37 AM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
dekha  jo aaine mein aaj  khud  ko  phir se tanha  paaya
dard had  bad  gaya abhi tak woh marham nahin lagane aaya
mere  ashkon  ko  dekh kar  aashman  mein taare bhi khamosh the
dekha  jo  chand ko to usko bhi  apne saath rota  hua  paaya.........




Kya baat hai waheed saahab
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«Reply #9 on: June 25, 2005, 12:13:41 PM »
bahut ache waheed n tushaar

ghum ger mila aapka to hum kabil bane jine ke
warna tanha-e-zindagi se hum to nirash ho chale the
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«Reply #10 on: June 25, 2005, 12:15:39 PM »
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bahut ache waheed n tushaar

ghum ger mila aapka to hum kabil bane jine ke
warna tanha-e-zindagi se hum to nirash ho chale the



You too gr8 samnoj
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«Reply #11 on: June 25, 2005, 12:34:03 PM »
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bahut ache waheed n tushaar

ghum ger mila aapka to hum kabil bane jine ke
warna tanha-e-zindagi se hum to nirash ho chale the



You too gr8 samnoj


thanx rohit
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«Reply #12 on: June 25, 2005, 01:03:43 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
dekha  jo aaine mein aaj  khud  ko  phir se tanha  paaya
dard had  bad  gaya abhi tak woh marham nahin lagane aaya
mere  ashkon  ko  dekh kar  aashman  mein taare bhi khamosh the
dekha  jo  chand ko to usko bhi  apne saath rota  hua  paaya.........


wah waheed bahi kya baat hai .............     bohot khoob .........  bohot hi acha likha hai aapne
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«Reply #13 on: June 25, 2005, 05:27:45 PM »
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dekha  jo aaine mein aaj  khud  ko  phir se tanha  paaya
dard had  bad  gaya abhi tak woh marham nahin lagane aaya
mere  ashkon  ko  dekh kar  aashman  mein taare bhi khamosh the
dekha  jo  chand ko to usko bhi  apne saath rota  hua  paaya.........


wah waheed bahi kya baat hai .............     bohot khoob .........  bohot hi acha likha hai aapne


bahot  bahot shukriya  ..........hussain bhai..............  tongue3
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