~Aaj ki Raat... ~ (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on June 12, 2007, 11:23:50 AM

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paani

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~Aaj ki Raat... ~~~~

«Reply #1 on: June 12, 2007, 11:41:00 AM »

Nice one shikha


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Shikha12

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~Aaj ki Raat... ~~~~

«Reply #2 on: June 12, 2007, 11:42:57 AM »

Thanks a lot Paani...
Atleast some one liked it... Mujhe laga bas aise hi likh diya... Usual Smile


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Rajbir

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~Aaj ki Raat... ~~~~

«Reply #3 on: June 12, 2007, 12:21:34 PM »

Shikha

Bahut acha likha hai !

I have told u number of times...don't underestimate your talent :D

Tum aise he likhti raho :wink:


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NETRAPAL

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Re: ~Bas Aaj ki Raat... ~~~~

«Reply #4 on: June 12, 2007, 12:26:49 PM »

Quote from: "Shikha12"

POETRY DELETED BY SHIKHA…
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bhoot khoob shikha ji

gheere ho jindgee ke andhere me tum
kitne haseen pal the wo chamate ashiyane me the jab
kya tufaan ayaa tha wo, tabah ham huye the or tum

kuch pal ka andhera hai baadlo ka ye to
barsne se roshane-zindgee mee aajaoge fir tum

hamne bhee dekhe the andhere jindgee ke kabhi
roshnee jab ayee zindgee me to khade najar aye fir tum

netra.....


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Pooja

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~Aaj ki Raat... ~~~~

«Reply #5 on: June 12, 2007, 03:20:31 PM »

Wah wah wah shikha, kaya baat hai!!!

Auki her rachna apne app main ek kamal hoti, zindagi ki suchaio ko itne simple words mai app likhati hai ki her ek line dil ko chu jaati hai!!

Wah kaya likha hai:

Aapke liye phir muskurayeinge labb,
Bas Aaj ki raat aansu bahaane do…

Good job dear!!


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deepika_divya

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~Aaj ki Raat... ~~~~

«Reply #6 on: June 13, 2007, 04:03:33 AM »

Shikha Di.. its really a good poetry by u...well expressed... keep Writing..

Divya


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punam

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~Aaj ki Raat... ~~~~

«Reply #7 on: June 13, 2007, 09:15:41 AM »

bahot khub shikha di...aik se barke aik sab ne likha... choti si kosish main bhi ki hoon...

Aaj behejane de ansoo tere aur nahi main tujhe rulaunga
yeh pal kehe raha hai mujhse aur laut ke kabhi nahi aayega

jeena hai toh iss pal ko jee lo baad me nahi toh pachtayega..
pal me badal jaati hai zindagi yeh pal laut ke phir nahi aayega..


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Shikha12

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~Aaj ki Raat... ~~~~

«Reply #8 on: June 13, 2007, 01:05:39 PM »

Quote from: "Rajbir"

Shikha

Bahut acha likha hai !

I have told u number of times...don't underestimate your talent :D

Tum aise he likhti raho :wink:

Thanks a lot...

Aap log aise hi padhte raho, hum likh likh kar bore karte raheinge... :D


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Shikha12

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«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2007, 01:07:12 PM »

Quote from: "NETRAPAL"

Beautiful reply Netra.... Usual Smile

Thanks a lot... Usual Smile

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Shikha12

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~Aaj ki Raat... ~~~~

«Reply #10 on: June 13, 2007, 01:46:31 PM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

Pooja di.. Thanks a lottttt...

Aapne padh liya... Usual Smile

wohi bahut tha...
Bewajah sharminda naa karein... :D

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Shikha12

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~Aaj ki Raat... ~~~~

«Reply #11 on: June 13, 2007, 02:50:30 PM »

Quote from: "deepika_divya"

Shikha Di.. its really a good poetry by u...well expressed... keep Writing..

Divya

Thanks a lot Divya... Usual Smile


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Shikha12

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~Aaj ki Raat... ~~~~

«Reply #12 on: June 13, 2007, 02:55:16 PM »

Quote from: "punam"

Bahut Pyaari koshish hai Punam...

"POETRY DELETED BY SHIKHA... " :D


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Rajbir

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~Aaj ki Raat... ~~~~

«Reply #13 on: June 13, 2007, 09:11:12 PM »

Shikha, Pooja, Punam, Netra

Too good once again ! =D>

Kabhi main bhi koshish karoonga likhne ki Puzzled !


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punam

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~Aaj ki Raat... ~~~~

«Reply #14 on: June 14, 2007, 11:23:25 AM »

Thanx sikha di.... and PB ji aap ko bhi...
karo karo kosish pehele bike pe se toh utro...


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