*Aaj Maru Ya Kal Maru?*

by Roja on August 05, 2007, 12:14:10 PM
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मोहताज़े कफ़न का बायस मै आज मरू या कल मरू..
फिरदौसी दफ़न का बायस मै आज मरू या कल मरू..

राख मैं सूरज जलने दो मत कुरेदो चाँद की चिंगारी
शोला-ए-बदन का बायस मै आज मरू या कल मरू..

दुनिया का हवा पे क़ब्ज़ा है दम लेते ही जान रोती है
बर्बादे चमन का बायस मै आज मरू या कल मरू..

जो तुझको नही वो मेरा ग़म जो मुझको नही वो तेरा ग़म
इसी ग़म के चलन का बायस मै आज मरू या कल मरू..

दो रोज़ ख़ुशी से जो बीते ना मालूम था हारे या जीते
ग़ुरबत मैं वतन का बायस मै आज मरू या कल मरू..

होनी की निगाहों मैं "रोज़ा" है मौत की दावत बेगानी
आफ़त मे गगन का बायस मै आज मरू या कल मरू...


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Mohtaaje kafan ka baayas mai aaj maru ya kal maru..
Firdousi dafan ka baayas mai aaj maru ya kal maru..

Raakh main sooraj jalne do mat kuredo chand ki chingari
Shola-e-badan ka baayas mai aaj maru ya kal maru..

Dunia ka hawa pe kabja hai dam lete hi jaan roti hai
Barbade chaman ka baayas mai aaj maru ya kal maru..

Jo tujhko nahi wo mera gam jo mujhko nahi wo tera gam
Issi gam ke chalan ka baayas mai aaj maru ya kal maru..

Do roj khushi se jo beete na maloom tha hare ya jeete
Gurbat main watan ka baayas mai aaj maru ya kal maru..

Honi ki nigahon main "Roja" hai maut ki dawat begani
Aafat may gagan ka baayas mai aaj maru ya kal maru...
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«Reply #1 on: August 05, 2007, 12:54:16 PM »
BAHOT KHOOB ROJAJI....
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Manav Mehra
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«Reply #2 on: August 05, 2007, 02:04:41 PM »
jab aapki post ki heading pardi toh bohaat hi attractive and impressive lagi.. aur jab poem padi toh mafh kijiye jayada samjh nahi aayi.. urdu mein hath kamzor hai. aapse ek gujarish hai, agar

baayas,Firdousi and Gurbat ka hindi meaning bata dein, toh  poem ko achhe se samjh paunga.

btw, aapki poem ki theme marvellous hai !


Manav
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Roja
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«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2007, 12:19:16 AM »
Quote from: "khwaish"
BAHOT KHOOB ROJAJI....


Thanks khwaish ji
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Roja
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«Reply #4 on: August 06, 2007, 12:35:14 AM »
Quote from: "Manav Mehra"
jab aapki post ki heading pardi toh bohaat hi attractive and impressive lagi.. aur jab poem padi toh mafh kijiye jayada samjh nahi aayi.. urdu mein hath kamzor hai. aapse ek gujarish hai, agar

baayas,Firdousi and Gurbat ka hindi meaning bata dein, toh  poem ko achhe se samjh paunga.

btw, aapki poem ki theme marvellous hai !


Manav


Baayas : confusion

Firdousi : Paradise

Gurbat :  Qurbani
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #5 on: August 06, 2007, 07:17:19 AM »
behad umda likha hai roja.. padkar bahoot acha laga.. well expressed..

Divya
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Roja
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«Reply #6 on: August 06, 2007, 03:00:59 PM »
Quote from: "deepika_divya"
behad umda likha hai roja.. padkar bahoot acha laga.. well expressed..

Divya


Thank you very much Divya
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Sahiba Zehra
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«Reply #7 on: August 06, 2007, 04:09:33 PM »
Roja G
mujhe to ye pata tha ki Gurbat = Gareebi
Firdosi = Jannat sae related ie. Jannati
Bayaas= apne sahi kaha Usual Smile

Huh?? :D :D :D
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Roja
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«Reply #8 on: August 07, 2007, 02:02:17 AM »
Quote from: "Sahiba Zehra"
Roja G
mujhe to ye pata tha ki Gurbat = Gareebi
Firdosi = Jannat sae related ie. Jannati
Bayaas= apne sahi kaha Usual Smile

Huh?? :D :D :D


Aapne samaj liya... shukhriya
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Manav Mehra
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«Reply #9 on: August 07, 2007, 04:39:00 AM »
thanks for explaining, ur poem is now more clear to me and its fantastic. will try to write here soon,,, keep up ur spirits

Manav
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