Aaj Mein Bita Kal Dhoondhte Hein.

by Rajnish.raaj on August 18, 2014, 01:43:52 PM
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Sukun Ke Ab Do Pal Dhoondhte Hain,
Aaj Mein Bita Kal Dhoondhte Hein.

TootTe Bikharte Chand Tinkon Mein,
Apne Sapnon Ka Mahal Dhoondhte Hein.

Tere Sath Guzre Wo Masoom Lamhein,
Aa Sath Use Kahin Chal Dhoondhte Hein.

Chaya Hai Gubar Jhoot Aur Nafrat Ka,
Kahin Door Chahat Ki Ghazal Dhoondhte Hein.

Kya Kho Diya Hum Ne Aur Kya Pana Hai,
Guzre Waqt Mein Is Sawal Ka Hal Dhoondhte Hein.
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«Reply #1 on: August 18, 2014, 01:47:23 PM »
Sukun Ke Ab Do Pal Dhoondhte Hain,
Aaj Mein Bita Kal Dhoondhte Hein.

TootTe Bikharte Chand Tinkon Mein,
Apne Sapnon Ka Mahal Dhoondhte Hein.

Tere Sath Guzre Wo Masoom Lamhein,
Aa Sath Use Kahin Chal Dhoondhte Hein.

Chaya Hai Gubar Jhoot Aur Nafrat Ka,
Kahin Door Chahat Ki Ghazal Dhoondhte Hein.

Kya Kho Diya Hum Ne Aur Kya Pana Hai,
Guzre Waqt Mein Is Sawal Ka Hal Dhoondhte Hein.
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«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2014, 05:13:23 PM »
Quote from: Rajnish.raaj on August 18, 2014, 01:43:52 PM
Sukun Ke Ab Do Pal Dhoondhte Hain,
Aaj Mein Bita Kal Dhoondhte Hein.

TootTe Bikharte Chand Tinkon Mein,
Apne Sapnon Ka Mahal Dhoondhte Hein.

Tere Sath Guzre Wo Masoom Lamhein,
Aa Sath Use Kahin Chal Dhoondhte Hein.

Chaya Hai Gubar Jhoot Aur Nafrat Ka,
Kahin Door Chahat Ki Ghazal Dhoondhte Hein.

Kya Kho Diya Hum Ne Aur Kya Pana Hai,
Guzre Waqt Mein Is Sawal Ka Hal Dhoondhte Hein.
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«Reply #3 on: August 18, 2014, 08:08:56 PM »
waah waah bahut khoob kahaa hai,dheron daad.
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«Reply #4 on: August 19, 2014, 12:37:45 AM »
waah waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: August 19, 2014, 04:40:46 AM »
वाह....बहुत ही खूब....

Tere Sath Guzre Wo Masoom Lamhein,
Aa Sath Use Kahin Chal Dhoondhte Hein.

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«Reply #6 on: August 19, 2014, 06:48:42 AM »
वाह वाह वाह....बहुत खूब
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«Reply #7 on: August 19, 2014, 08:52:36 AM »
wah wah
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«Reply #8 on: August 19, 2014, 09:11:19 AM »

Rajnish Jee Aadaab... !

Bahut khoob janab bahut umdaa bade hi umdaa khayaalaat ko kalam baNd kiya hai aapne...

Waqai aik khoob kalaam rahi ... is khoob kalaam par huamri dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

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«Reply #9 on: August 19, 2014, 09:22:28 AM »
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Bahut Khubsurat Likha hai.
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«Reply #10 on: August 19, 2014, 09:23:57 AM »
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bahut khub raajji.....
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«Reply #11 on: August 19, 2014, 03:33:51 PM »
Quote from: Rajnish.raaj on August 18, 2014, 01:43:52 PM
Sukun Ke Ab Do Pal Dhoondhte Hain,
Aaj Mein Bita Kal Dhoondhte Hein.

TootTe Bikharte Chand Tinkon Mein,
Apne Sapnon Ka Mahal Dhoondhte Hein.

Tere Sath Guzre Wo Masoom Lamhein,
Aa Sath Use Kahin Chal Dhoondhte Hein.

Chaya Hai Gubar Jhoot Aur Nafrat Ka,
Kahin Door Chahat Ki Ghazal Dhoondhte Hein.

Kya Kho Diya Hum Ne Aur Kya Pana Hai,
Guzre Waqt Mein Is Sawal Ka Hal Dhoondhte Hein.


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«Reply #12 on: August 20, 2014, 06:29:26 PM »
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bahut khoob Rajnish ji.....!!!
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