Aaj Mera rone ko Jee chah Raha hai

by deepika_divya on April 06, 2009, 10:43:15 AM
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«Reply #120 on: October 17, 2009, 06:33:09 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on October 15, 2009, 07:20:08 PM
Hokar Udaas Kyun Is Qadar Aapne Rone Ki Thaani Hai
Kya Nahi Janti Dil Todna To Duniya Ki Rit Puraani Hai.

Na Kar Yun Lekar Naam ,Koi Shiqw Gila Mehfilon Mein
Tera Tutke Bikharna B To Tere Apno Ki Meharbani Hai.

Dard o Gham Ke Milne Par Bhala Kaisa Ghabrana Sophi!
Aakhir Yeh Bhi To Ik, Insan Ka Hissa e Zindagaani Hai.

Aksar Chaahton Ke Safar Mein Insaan Kho Hi Jaata Hai
behtar He Jitna Jaldi Janle ,Khwaishen To Bas Faani Hai.!


Wah kya baat hai Majid... bahut hi accha likha hai aapne  Applause Applause
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«Reply #121 on: October 30, 2009, 06:28:49 PM »
Quote from: KOYAL46 on October 16, 2009, 02:19:44 PM
Thanks Geet-di.....Achha laga...
Aur likhu...
 
Aaj tujhse milne ko jee chah raha hai di
Tere saath gujre palo ko fir se jee lu di
Rishta ye n-jaane kis janm ka tujhse hai di
Tere saath Teri god mai ser chhupa kar di
Aaj mera rone ko jee chah raha hai di





waah koyal sweety aaj tahe dil se terri tareef karne ko jee chah raha hai...
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #122 on: February 12, 2010, 04:10:03 PM »
Aaj Mera Rone Ko Jee Chah Raha hai
Najaane Yea Dil Kyun Gabra Raha hai
Khos Raha hai APne Aap Ko Yea Dil
Ya Khudko Bewajaah Tadpa Raha Hai

Jaanti Hun yea Sab fareb Hai Bas
Yea Asmaa Bhi dekh Ashq Baha Raha hai
Kyun? Kyun Yea Sab Seh Rahi hun Main
Fir yea Waqt Mujhe Kyun Aazma Raha hai

Aaj Fir Mera rone Ko Jee Chah raha haii
Aaj Fir Mera rone Ko Jee Chah raha haii
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #123 on: February 12, 2010, 04:35:55 PM »
bahut hi khooooooooooooooob sophi ji...i knw aap bhi delhi mein ho aur yahan kuch der pehle jam kar barsaat hui hai..aur iss mausam mein merre dil mein yahi alfaz hai jo apne likh diye hai..bahut bahut shukriya merri soch ko alfazo mein utarne k liye...merra bhi kuch likhne ko ji chah raha hai...
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«Reply #124 on: February 13, 2010, 06:22:34 AM »
Really touched Sophi ji,sirf dard hi nazar aa rahi hai.great creation.Shihab ji,Koyal ji,Geet ji aap sabne bhi kamaal ke likha.excellent
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #125 on: February 13, 2010, 04:51:29 PM »
Sorry kal likhne ka waqt hi nhi mila...

Yadgar ek lamha hai merra paas uska,
us pal mein jiya tha humne har ehsas ko,
vo dooor hai mujhse kisi aur duniya mein..
bhula nhi payi hu aaj bhi merri jaan k us ehsas ko......
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«Reply #126 on: February 14, 2010, 07:56:05 AM »
Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 12, 2010, 04:35:55 PM
bahut hi khooooooooooooooob sophi ji...i knw aap bhi delhi mein ho aur yahan kuch der pehle jam kar barsaat hui hai..aur iss mausam mein merre dil mein yahi alfaz hai jo apne likh diye hai..bahut bahut shukriya merri soch ko alfazo mein utarne k liye...merra bhi kuch likhne ko ji chah raha hai...
Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 13, 2010, 04:51:29 PM
Sorry kal likhne ka waqt hi nhi mila...

Yadgar ek lamha hai merra paas uska,
us pal mein jiya tha humne har ehsas ko,
vo dooor hai mujhse kisi aur duniya mein..
bhula nhi payi hu aaj bhi merri jaan k us ehsas ko......


No need to say Sorry.. And thank you so so so Much

Waah Kya baat hai Geet.. Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #127 on: February 14, 2010, 07:56:30 AM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on February 13, 2010, 06:22:34 AM
Really touched Sophi ji,sirf dard hi nazar aa rahi hai.great creation.Shihab ji,Koyal ji,Geet ji aap sabne bhi kamaal ke likha.excellent

Thankyou sooooooooooo much Madhu ji !
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«Reply #128 on: February 14, 2010, 09:39:47 AM »
Quote from: Sophi on February 12, 2010, 04:10:03 PM
Aaj Mera Rone Ko Jee Chah Raha hai
Najaane Yea Dil Kyun Gabra Raha hai
Khos Raha hai APne Aap Ko Yea Dil
Ya Khudko Bewajaah Tadpa Raha Hai

Jaanti Hun yea Sab fareb Hai Bas
Yea Asmaa Bhi dekh Ashq Baha Raha hai
Kyun? Kyun Yea Sab Seh Rahi hun Main
Fir yea Waqt Mujhe Kyun Aazma Raha hai

Aaj Fir Mera rone Ko Jee Chah raha haii
Aaj Fir Mera rone Ko Jee Chah raha haii


Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 12, 2010, 04:35:55 PM
bahut hi khooooooooooooooob sophi ji...i knw aap bhi delhi mein ho aur yahan kuch der pehle jam kar barsaat hui hai..aur iss mausam mein merre dil mein yahi alfaz hai jo apne likh diye hai..bahut bahut shukriya merri soch ko alfazo mein utarne k liye...merra bhi kuch likhne ko ji chah raha hai...



Bahut Bahut Khoob!!! Apane Waise Hi Itna Khoobsurat Likha Tha Par Jab Geetji Ne Bataya Ke wahan Par Zor Se Baarish Ho Rahi thi,Jab Apane Yeh Likha..Padhkar Main bhi Mehsoos Kar Saka Uss Sama Ko Aur Unn Lafzon ko..

Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #129 on: February 14, 2010, 01:47:41 PM »
Very nice post and thread. Mujhe to bahit achi lagi.....


AAJ  MERA MAN KARTAHA HAI MIL JAYE EK PAL KO
KANDHE PE RAKH SAR MAIN KUCH DER SO JAUN PHIR.
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«Reply #130 on: February 14, 2010, 03:14:50 PM »
aaj paon zameen par nahin padte mere.....
Itni tariff k udti phiru mai....
Shukriya...dhanaywaad...Aabaar....natmastak.....G eet-di


Quote from: brokenbyluv on October 30, 2009, 06:28:49 PM

waah koyal sweety aaj tahe dil se terri tareef karne ko jee chah raha hai...
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«Reply #131 on: February 14, 2010, 03:21:44 PM »
Divya-di aapne pasand kiya meri mehnat safal huyee.....
Aaj mai khushi se jhoom uthoo.... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Aaj Mera rone ko Jee nahi chah Raha hai


Quote from: Sophi on October 17, 2009, 05:59:09 AM
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Koyal.Sabhi bahoot Bahoot ache likhe hai tume .. Bahoot khoob!
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«Reply #132 on: February 14, 2010, 03:25:53 PM »
Thanks Madhu-di......

Quote from: madhuwesh on February 13, 2010, 06:22:34 AM
Really touched Sophi ji,sirf dard hi nazar aa rahi hai.great creation.Shihab ji,Koyal ji,Geet ji aap sabne bhi kamaal ke likha.excellent
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«Reply #133 on: February 14, 2010, 03:29:11 PM »
Quote from: KOYAL46 on February 14, 2010, 03:14:50 PM
aaj paon zameen par nahin padte mere.....
Itni tariff k udti phiru mai....
Shukriya...dhanaywaad...Aabaar....natmastak.....G eet-di



he he he tou udle neel gagan mein..main hu na terri di thaam lungi agar dagmagayi tou...
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«Reply #134 on: February 14, 2010, 03:30:36 PM »
Quote from: Sophi on February 14, 2010, 07:56:05 AM

No need to say Sorry.. And thank you so so so Much

Waah Kya baat hai Geet.. Bahoot Khoob!

ok ji..n thnx alot ki apko pasand aye Merra alfaz...
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