Aaj Mera rone ko Jee chah Raha hai -Panna 10:Shayri-E-Dard

deepika_divya

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«Reply #135 on: February 14, 2010, 03:32:39 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on February 14, 2010, 09:39:47 AM

Bahut Bahut Khoob!!! Apane Waise Hi Itna Khoobsurat Likha Tha Par Jab Geetji Ne Bataya Ke wahan Par Zor Se Baarish Ho Rahi thi,Jab Apane Yeh Likha..Padhkar Main bhi Mehsoos Kar Saka Uss Sama Ko Aur Unn Lafzon ko..

Bahut Ache

Thank you so Much... Actually Main Apne iss thread pe tabi likhti hun jab mera sach mea Man udas hota hai...

AApka tahe dil se shukriya ke aapne mere bhavo ko samja aur saraha.. Thank u


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deepika_divya

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Re: Aaj Mera rone ko Jee chah Raha hai

«Reply #136 on: February 14, 2010, 03:34:24 PM »

Quote from: vikas2210 on February 14, 2010, 01:47:41 PM

Very nice post and thread. Mujhe to bahit achi lagi.....

AAJ MERA MAN KARTAHA HAI MIL JAYE EK PAL KO
KANDHE PE RAKH SAR MAIN KUCH DER SO JAUN PHIR.

Thank you so so so Much Vikas.. And Kahan ho yaar.. Miss U...

Aur tumne bhi acha likha hai !


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vikas2210

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Re: Aaj Mera rone ko Jee chah Raha hai

«Reply #137 on: February 14, 2010, 03:42:47 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on February 14, 2010, 03:34:24 PM

Thank you so so so Much Vikas.. And Kahan ho yaar.. Miss U...

Aur tumne bhi acha likha hai !

Hi Sophi - Thanks pasand karne ke liye.

aagaya wapis main ab.

Jamao mehfil yaar


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deepika_divya

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Re: Aaj Mera rone ko Jee chah Raha hai

«Reply #138 on: March 02, 2010, 06:36:36 PM »

Aaj Mera Dil bahoot gabra raha hai.. Dar sa mlag raha hai pata nahi kyun.. Bas rone ka man ho raha hai...

Aaj fir mera rone Ko jee Chah raha hai
Na jane yea waqt mujhse kya chah raha hai
Kyun Uljha raha hai yea mujhse iskadar
Kyun yea mera yuhn imthihan liye ja raha hai

Divya


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Talat

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Re: Aaj Mera rone ko Jee chah Raha hai

«Reply #139 on: March 02, 2010, 07:54:04 PM »

Nice one Divs....Hope everything to be fine with you...Just take care dear.....May God bless you....


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deepika_divya

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Re: Aaj Mera rone ko Jee chah Raha hai

«Reply #140 on: March 03, 2010, 05:02:41 AM »

Thanks a lot Di.. Usual Smile

Now I am alright !


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KOYAL46

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Re: Aaj Mera rone ko Jee chah Raha hai

«Reply #141 on: March 03, 2010, 07:35:00 AM »

he he he he he he he....Neel gagan tou Ghar he apna...chal aajaati hu.... angel11

Lo main teri Delhi nagri k uper se ud aayee...
Bahoot nazar gaddayee par tu na nazar aayee....

Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 14, 2010, 03:29:11 PM

he he he tou udle neel gagan mein..main hu na terri di thaam lungi agar dagmagayi tou...


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Aaj Mera rone ko Jee chah Raha hai

«Reply #142 on: March 03, 2010, 08:59:17 AM »

ok mast hai phir tou per yahan zyada na udna ab garmi badh rahi hai terre pankh abhi nazuk hai naa kahiin jal na jaaye...

Tune dhundhta mujhe gali gali,
magar apne sath nhi dekha,
terri di saya ban hamesha terre paas hai,
shayad tune gaur se nhi dekha......


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Aaj Mera rone ko Jee chah Raha hai

«Reply #143 on: March 03, 2010, 09:08:36 AM »

Quote from: Sophi on March 02, 2010, 06:36:36 PM

arre aesa kya ho gaya sophiji jo apka dil ghabrane laga..its gud ki ab aap thik ho..

Zindgi mein agar koi mushkil ho tou hame thaam lena,
kabhi jo raah patharo se bhari ho tou samjhdari se kaam lena,
insaan bhale chhod de khuda hame kabhi tanha nhi chhodta..
agar koi paas na bhi ho tou bus apne khuda ka naam lena......


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deepika_divya

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Re: Aaj Mera rone ko Jee chah Raha hai

«Reply #144 on: April 07, 2011, 06:49:29 PM »

Wow.. Geet.. this One is One of Ur best Creation , I just seen this .. Amazing .. !!!


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deepika_divya

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Re: Aaj Mera rone ko Jee chah Raha hai

«Reply #145 on: February 14, 2012, 05:40:10 PM »

aaj ak baar fir Mera rone ko jee chah raha hai

Kyun Hamara kal Hame jeene Nahi deta
Hasata hai rulata hai par jeene nahi deta
Kyun fir ujaagar kar deta hai un yaado ko
Kyun Dil Unn Yaado woh marne Nahi deta

yaad kar beete saal ki kadwi yaad
Seene Mein dard aaj bhi hota hai
Chupke chupke hi sahi Najane kyun
Dil Mera aaj bhi Din raat rota hai

Nysha


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mkv

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Re: Aaj Mera rone ko Jee chah Raha hai

«Reply #146 on: February 14, 2012, 05:47:50 PM »

Bahut khoob Nysha ji
Applause


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