Aaj Mera rone ko Jee chah Raha hai

by deepika_divya on April 06, 2009, 10:43:15 AM
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«Reply #30 on: April 10, 2009, 09:11:25 PM »
Quote from: Sophi on April 06, 2009, 10:43:15 AM
AAJ MERA RONE KO JEE CHAH RAHA HAI
NA JAANE YEA VAKT MUJHSE KYA CHAH RAHA HAI

KSI ASMANJAS MEIN FASI HUN MEIN
DIMAaG KUCH AUR DIL KUCH KEHNA CHAH RAHA HAI

BATAK GAI HUN NAJANE KIS RAAH MEIN
MERA SAYA BHI AB MERA PATA CHAH RAHA HAI

DEKH MERE ASHQ BHI AB YE ASMAAN
PAANI BAN AAG KYUN BARSANA CHAH RAHA HAI

bahoot acha likha hai Sophi!!
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #31 on: April 11, 2009, 04:11:17 AM »
Quote from: Mann on April 10, 2009, 04:56:57 PM
Bahut Accha Likha Hai SOPHI.. Really Dil ke dard Ko Bakhoobi Bayaan kiya hai.......... Nice One... Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**

dil se Shukriyan Vicky.
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #32 on: April 11, 2009, 04:15:09 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on April 10, 2009, 08:48:42 PM
Applause Applause Applause Sophi apki her ek kavita is thread main ajj kai baar parri hai,,, her ek kavita, her ek kavita ki ek ek line dil ke dard ko chalkati najar aai...

 kabhi maine yah kavita Yoindia per likhi thi...apki sabhi kavitao ko parr kar wo yaha dobara post karne ja rahi hu.

Jo chah kar bhi nahi likh pa rahi shayad app wo samjh Jaaye..

Dard ki dawa ab to dard hi kare
Zindagi hai kaya, kon parwah kare
Ro liye itna ki ab rona bhi atta nahi
Aor rone ki ab parwah kyun kare

Behlaane se kab dil behlta hai yaha
Phir dard ko behlane ki chinta kyun kare
Dekhati hai tamsha to dekh lene do dunia ko
Is dunia ki ab parwah kyun kare

Bhatak rahi hai ajj pooja
To bhatak hi jaane do
Sidhi hai raah ya hai yah galat
Iski khabar ab kisi ko kaya kare

Rone se nahi sulajhata dard yah jaan chuke
Hasi main na jaane kitni baar khud ko rula chuke
Chalkate hai ansoo hansi main ya ab gum main
Iski pehchan ab pooja kahan kahan kare.......

Dard ki dawa ab to dard hi kare
Zindagi hai kaya, kon parwah kare...............

Bahoot bahoot sukriyan Pooja Di.. apne itne bade alfaaz se aaj mujhe khush kar diya...

bahoot bahoot shukriyan aapka!

Aapki is rachna ne mere iss thread pe char chand laga diye.. bahoot hi sachai se bari rachna pesh ki hai... behad khoob!
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #33 on: April 11, 2009, 04:17:29 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on April 10, 2009, 09:00:42 PM



Apki in do kavitao ka ek he kavita main jawab dene ki koshish ki hai!!

Dil ke dard ko sakoon khud se he atta hai
Yah wo nasha hai, jo waqat anne pe utar jaata hai

Haal-e-dil tera bayaan yah ankhein hai kar rahi
Jo na ayye juban pe, wo ankhon main najar atta hai

Jo de aise dard bhari yaad, us per na aitbaar kar
Is baat per vishwaas, waqat gujar jaane ke baad atta hai

Dil ke agge ho jaata hai, swabhimaan bhi sharmida
Is dard main, insaan kab insaan rah jaata hai

Mita sakta nahi kabhi bhi koi,  kisi ki hasti
Insaan khud he apni hasti mita jaata hai

Mange jo Pavitar hone ka saboot wo khud hai daagdaar
Aise insaano ke liye, Dost kyun tu neer bahata hai

Dil ke dard ko sakoon khud se he atta hai
Dunia main her koi kah do bol.. chala jaata hai…..


Superb! reply Pooja di.. bahoot hi behtareen reply kiyan. hai aapki is kavita se ak acha sa abaas hua hai man ko.
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #34 on: April 11, 2009, 04:19:34 AM »
Quote from: Pankhuri2 on April 10, 2009, 09:11:25 PM
bahoot acha likha hai Sophi!!

Thank you so much pankhuri2 ..
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #35 on: April 13, 2009, 03:38:22 PM »
kitni udas hai zindagi meri tere bina
rondata gaya mujhe woh vakt ka karwaan hai
roke se bhi ab nahi rukte hai aansoon mere
kyun Aaj mere rone ko jee chah raha hai

kese kahun main tumse aapna haal -e -Dil
dil kyun tera naam cheekh cheekh kar pukar raha hai
band kar reh gai hun kyun main do rahao mein
Kyun aaj mera rone ko jee chah raha hai
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #36 on: April 13, 2009, 03:49:20 PM »
WAH SOPHI, BAHUT HI KHOOB DIL KA HAAL BAYAAN KIA HAI
HAR LABZ MEH EK DARD BAYAAN KIA HAI......


JASBIR SINGH
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #37 on: April 13, 2009, 03:55:51 PM »
Thank u so much Jasbir Ji
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danish007
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«Reply #38 on: April 16, 2009, 10:38:09 AM »
subhanallah  bahut  khoob Applause Applause Applause
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #39 on: April 16, 2009, 10:43:08 AM »
Quote from: danish007 on April 16, 2009, 10:38:09 AM
subhanallah  bahut  khoob Applause Applause Applause

Thank u Danish Ji
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #40 on: April 25, 2009, 04:16:48 PM »
Nabss pe haath kar vaid bhi haal bata jata hai
kyun apno ne samja mujhe, kya woh mujhe cha rahe hai

Nilam tho kar diya unhone mujhe sareaam mefil mea
ab kyun woh mujhse bhi mere Zinda hone ki kimat cha rahe hai

Bardast nahi kar pa rahi hun, Mar jaan chahti hun ab
saare khwab tho mit gaye, ab meri akhiri umeed bhi cha rahe hai

Kya karu kisse kahun main apne Dil ki Dasta eh dosto
Kal tho Cheen chuke hai mera ,woh  ab mera aaj bhi chah rahe hai
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #41 on: April 26, 2009, 08:59:41 AM »
Thank U so much Kaash!
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #42 on: April 28, 2009, 02:35:17 PM »
Quote from: Sophi on April 25, 2009, 04:16:48 PM
Nabss pe haath kar vaid bhi haal bata jata hai
kyun apno ne samja mujhe, kya woh mujhe cha rahe hai

Nilam tho kar diya unhone mujhe sareaam mefil mea
ab kyun woh mujhse bhi mere Zinda hone ki kimat cha rahe hai

Bardast nahi kar pa rahi hun, Mar jaan chahti hun ab
saare khwab tho mit gaye, ab meri akhiri umeed bhi cha rahe hai

Kya karu kisse kahun main apne Dil ki Dasta eh dosto
Kal tho Cheen chuke hai mera ,woh  ab mera aaj bhi chah rahe hai



Very good Sophi Ji
achchhi peshkash hai
SARVESH RASTOGI
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #43 on: April 28, 2009, 02:53:34 PM »
Thank u so much sarvesh ji.
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Pooja
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«Reply #44 on: April 28, 2009, 06:17:24 PM »
Quote from: Sophi on April 11, 2009, 04:17:29 AM

Superb! reply Pooja di.. bahoot hi behtareen reply kiyan. hai aapki is kavita se ak acha sa abaas hua hai man ko.


Thanks Sophi!!
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