Aaj Mera rone ko Jee chah Raha hai

by deepika_divya on April 06, 2009, 10:43:15 AM
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Pooja
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«Reply #45 on: April 28, 2009, 06:18:07 PM »
Quote from: Sophi on April 13, 2009, 03:38:22 PM
kitni udas hai zindagi meri tere bina
rondata gaya mujhe woh vakt ka karwaan hai
roke se bhi ab nahi rukte hai aansoon mere
kyun Aaj mere rone ko jee chah raha hai

kese kahun main tumse aapna haal -e -Dil
dil kyun tera naam cheekh cheekh kar pukar raha hai
band kar reh gai hun kyun main do rahao mein
Kyun aaj mera rone ko jee chah raha hai

Good work!!
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«Reply #46 on: April 28, 2009, 06:18:36 PM »
Quote from: Sophi on April 25, 2009, 04:16:48 PM
Nabss pe haath kar vaid bhi haal bata jata hai
kyun apno ne samja mujhe, kya woh mujhe cha rahe hai

Nilam tho kar diya unhone mujhe sareaam mefil mea
ab kyun woh mujhse bhi mere Zinda hone ki kimat cha rahe hai

Bardast nahi kar pa rahi hun, Mar jaan chahti hun ab
saare khwab tho mit gaye, ab meri akhiri umeed bhi cha rahe hai

Kya karu kisse kahun main apne Dil ki Dasta eh dosto
Kal tho Cheen chuke hai mera ,woh  ab mera aaj bhi chah rahe hai




bahoot khoob!!
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«Reply #47 on: April 29, 2009, 08:22:47 AM »
SOPHI Dear..... Har Sher har kavita Lajawab Hai.. Dard Bhare Yeh Alfaaz Dil Ko chhoo Gaye.. Bahut Khooooooooob..!!

Pooja Ji aapne bhi Bahut Khoob Likha Hai.. !!


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #48 on: April 29, 2009, 08:28:38 AM »
Bohat Achche Sophi, Mashallah Bohat Achcha Laga Pardhke,.
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«Reply #49 on: May 08, 2009, 04:27:47 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on April 28, 2009, 06:18:36 PM

bahoot khoob!!

Thank u Pooja di
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«Reply #50 on: May 08, 2009, 04:28:27 PM »
Quote from: Mann on April 29, 2009, 08:22:47 AM
SOPHI Dear..... Har Sher har kavita Lajawab Hai.. Dard Bhare Yeh Alfaaz Dil Ko chhoo Gaye.. Bahut Khooooooooob..!!

Pooja Ji aapne bhi Bahut Khoob Likha Hai.. !!


**~** Mann **~**

Thank u so much Vikas!
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«Reply #51 on: May 08, 2009, 04:29:33 PM »
Quote from: Azeem on April 29, 2009, 08:28:38 AM
Bohat Achche Sophi, Mashallah Bohat Achcha Laga Pardhke,.

Thank U so much Azeem!
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #52 on: May 08, 2009, 04:35:46 PM »
Kyun ho raha hai nirantar man udaas
kyun Peeda se Man mera aaj bara ja raha hai
sab k hote hue bhi sab khali sa lage
Kyun aaj mera Rone ko jee chah raha hai

Kasti sajati main apne haatho se dost
Aaj kyun ussme bhi baani bara ja raha hai
Tim tima ka Deepak mujhe kuch ishara kare
Kyun aaj mera rone ko jee chah raha hai
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«Reply #53 on: May 08, 2009, 07:38:23 PM »
Quote from: Mann on April 29, 2009, 08:22:47 AM
SOPHI Dear..... Har Sher har kavita Lajawab Hai.. Dard Bhare Yeh Alfaaz Dil Ko chhoo Gaye.. Bahut Khooooooooob..!!

Pooja Ji aapne bhi Bahut Khoob Likha Hai.. !!


**~** Mann **~**

shukaria Mann ji!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #54 on: May 08, 2009, 07:39:28 PM »
Nice work Sophi... jayada dard main na likha karo!! Khumar-e-ishaq main jayada achi lagti ho Usual Smile
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«Reply #55 on: May 08, 2009, 07:48:51 PM »
Yahi to Main Bhi Samjhaata hoon isko.. Par yeh Sophi Maanti Hi Nahi Hai Pooja Ji.. tongue3 tongue3


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #56 on: May 08, 2009, 09:37:19 PM »
Quote from: Sophi on May 08, 2009, 04:35:46 PM
Kyun ho raha hai nirantar man udaas
kyun Peeda se Man mera aaj bara ja raha hai
sab k hote hue bhi sab khali sa lage
Kyun aaj mera Rone ko jee chah raha hai

Kasti sajati main apne haatho se dost
Aaj kyun ussme bhi baani bara ja raha hai
Tim tima ka Deepak mujhe kuch ishara kare
Kyun aaj mera rone ko jee chah raha hai

Bahut Khoob Sophi Ji

Dard bhari meri duniya.n mein
Rakkha hai kya rone ke siwaa

Sukh to do din mein dhalta hai
Dukh to apna jeewan saathi hai

Dard -e-dil ko manaye kaise aaj
Rone ko bas jee chah raha hai aaj
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«Reply #57 on: May 09, 2009, 04:45:47 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on May 08, 2009, 07:39:28 PM
Nice work Sophi... jayada dard main na likha karo!! Khumar-e-ishaq main jayada achi lagti ho Usual Smile

Thank u Pooja Di.. Main Koshish karungi Ishq mea likhne ki Winking
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #58 on: May 09, 2009, 04:47:45 AM »
Quote from: Mann on May 08, 2009, 07:48:51 PM
Yahi to Main Bhi Samjhaata hoon isko.. Par yeh Sophi Maanti Hi Nahi Hai Pooja Ji.. tongue3 tongue3


**~** Mann **~**

IshQ mea Likhna tho ashiko ka kaam hai
Hum tho kambakt is IshQ ne maaara hai tongue3
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #59 on: May 09, 2009, 04:48:54 AM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 08, 2009, 09:37:19 PM
Bahut Khoob Sophi Ji

Dard bhari meri duniya.n mein
Rakkha hai kya rone ke siwaa

Sukh to do din mein dhalta hai
Dukh to apna jeewan saathi hai

Dard -e-dil ko manaye kaise aaj
Rone ko bas jee chah raha hai aaj



Thank U Rajesh Ji

Wah kya khoob Likha hai aapne. Gud one
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