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«Reply #75 on: May 11, 2009, 02:10:16 AM » |
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«Reply #76 on: May 11, 2009, 04:22:29 AM » |
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wah wah kya khoob likha hai Roja.. kya baat hai.
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #77 on: May 20, 2009, 04:50:51 AM » |
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Aaj Mera Rone ko Jee Chah Raha Hai
Isaan ,Insaan ka Dusman Hota Ja Raha Hai
Batt Jaate Hai LOG DO Guto mea jaane Kyun
Khuda Mera Mujhpe Sawal Utata Ja raha hai
Aaj Mera Rone Ko Jee Chah Raha Hai
Daram Jadke ka karna Kyun banaya ja raha hai
Khoon Tho ak jaisa Dhodta hai Hum sab k rago mea
Insaan Kyun ak dusre Ko guhaagar batata ja raha hai
AaJ Mera Rone Ko Jee Chah Raha Hai
Kalam bhi Mera Aaj AshQ Chalka raha hai
Sahi Galat k faisala karne ka chah mea
Insaan Khuda apna mazaak udaata ja raha hai
Aaj sahi mayno mea mera Rone ko jee chah raha hai ....
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Sager4u
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«Reply #78 on: May 20, 2009, 05:04:48 AM » |
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Manaki shikhane wale bahul mil jayege,lekin aapsa guru kahan se launga,ho sakta hai main bhi accha likh saku,phir bhi aapko kabhi na bhulaunga.
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #79 on: May 22, 2009, 01:49:51 PM » |
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Thanks Sager Ji...
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Roja
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«Reply #80 on: May 22, 2009, 02:06:20 PM » |
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Aaj Mera Rone ko Jee Chah Raha Hai
Isaan ,Insaan ka Dusman Hota Ja Raha Hai
Batt Jaate Hai LOG DO Guto mea jaane Kyun
Khuda Mera Mujhpe Sawal Utata Ja raha hai
Aaj Mera Rone Ko Jee Chah Raha Hai
Daram Jadke ka karna Kyun banaya ja raha hai
Khoon Tho ak jaisa Dhodta hai Hum sab k rago mea
Insaan Kyun ak dusre Ko guhaagar batata ja raha hai
AaJ Mera Rone Ko Jee Chah Raha Hai
Kalam bhi Mera Aaj AshQ Chalka raha hai
Sahi Galat k faisala karne ka chah mea
Insaan Khuda apna mazaak udaata ja raha hai
Aaj sahi mayno mea mera Rone ko jee chah raha hai ....
Wah bahut accha likha hai divya... but itna udasi? |
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #81 on: May 22, 2009, 02:19:52 PM » |
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Wah bahut accha likha hai divya... but itna udasi?
Thanks Dear..... Bas Aaj kal Man Udaas hai... Par Jaldi teek ho jaungi.....  |
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #82 on: July 01, 2009, 07:28:56 AM » |
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Aaj Mera Rone ko Jee Chah Raha Hai
Isaan ,Insaan ka Dusman Hota Ja Raha Hai
Batt Jaate Hai LOG DO Guto mea jaane Kyun
Khuda Mera Mujhpe Sawal Utata Ja raha hai
Aaj Mera Rone Ko Jee Chah Raha Hai
Daram Jadke ka karna Kyun banaya ja raha hai
Khoon Tho ak jaisa Dhodta hai Hum sab k rago mea
Insaan Kyun ak dusre Ko guhaagar batata ja raha hai
AaJ Mera Rone Ko Jee Chah Raha Hai
Kalam bhi Mera Aaj AshQ Chalka raha hai
Sahi Galat k faisala karne ka chah mea
Insaan Khuda apna mazaak udaata ja raha hai
Aaj sahi mayno mea mera Rone ko jee chah raha hai ....
Wah Kya Baat hai Sophi.. Dard Bhare Jazzbaaton ko Bakhoobi Kaagaz Par utaara Hai Dear.. Bahut Khooooob.. 
**~** Mann **~** |
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #83 on: July 01, 2009, 08:07:17 AM » |
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Aaj Mera Rone ko Jee Chah Raha Hai
Isaan ,Insaan ka Dusman Hota Ja Raha Hai
Batt Jaate Hai LOG DO Guto mea jaane Kyun
Khuda Mera Mujhpe Sawal Utata Ja raha hai
Aaj Mera Rone Ko Jee Chah Raha Hai
Daram Jadke ka karna Kyun banaya ja raha hai
Khoon Tho ak jaisa Dhodta hai Hum sab k rago mea
Insaan Kyun ak dusre Ko guhaagar batata ja raha hai
AaJ Mera Rone Ko Jee Chah Raha Hai
Kalam bhi Mera Aaj AshQ Chalka raha hai
Sahi Galat k faisala karne ka chah mea
Insaan Khuda apna mazaak udaata ja raha hai
Aaj sahi mayno mea mera Rone ko jee chah raha hai ....
Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Sophi Ji |
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«Reply #84 on: July 01, 2009, 04:31:20 PM » |
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Aaj Mera Rone ko Jee Chah Raha Hai
Isaan ,Insaan ka Dusman Hota Ja Raha Hai
Batt Jaate Hai LOG DO Guto mea jaane Kyun
Khuda Mera Mujhpe Sawal Utata Ja raha hai
Aaj Mera Rone Ko Jee Chah Raha Hai
Daram Jadke ka karna Kyun banaya ja raha hai
Khoon Tho ak jaisa Dhodta hai Hum sab k rago mea
Insaan Kyun ak dusre Ko guhaagar batata ja raha hai
AaJ Mera Rone Ko Jee Chah Raha Hai
Kalam bhi Mera Aaj AshQ Chalka raha hai
Sahi Galat k faisala karne ka chah mea
Insaan Khuda apna mazaak udaata ja raha hai
Aaj sahi mayno mea mera Rone ko jee chah raha hai ....
sophi ji bahut touching poem likhi hai dil mein ghar kar gayi. bahut bahut acha likha hai nira |
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«Reply #85 on: July 01, 2009, 06:33:12 PM » |
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Brilliant Sophi Ji
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #86 on: August 09, 2009, 02:52:53 PM » |
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Wah Kya Baat hai Sophi.. Dard Bhare Jazzbaaton ko Bakhoobi Kaagaz Par utaara Hai Dear.. Bahut Khooooob..
**~** Mann **~** Thank you so much Vicky for appreciating my work... |
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #87 on: August 09, 2009, 02:53:37 PM » |
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Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Sophi Ji
Thank you so Much Rajesh ji |
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #88 on: August 09, 2009, 02:54:15 PM » |
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sophi ji
bahut touching poem likhi hai
dil mein ghar kar gayi.
bahut bahut acha likha hai
nira
Thank you soooooo Much Nira Didi |
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«Reply #89 on: August 09, 2009, 02:55:27 PM » |
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Brilliant Sophi Ji
Thanks a lot Ravi ji |
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on eTI community..
