####Aaj Mujhe Rokne Waala Koi Bhi Nahi #####

by waheed_rose2004 on July 03, 2005, 06:29:18 PM
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aisa  kya  baat dil mein  thi jo  maine  kabhi bhulaya  nahi
mere  seene aaj  mein  dard ke  siwa  kuch   bhi nahi
main  usko chata raha umar  ek  pal ke choda bhi nahi
jab "Waheed"  chala to  rokne  waala  koi  bhi nahi

maine khawabon mein ek taveer dekhi jiske haqeekat mein dekha bhi  nahi
sadiyon  tak safar  karta raha, khud se  kabhi poocha tak  nahi
aaj  aise  mod  per hum  khade  hain kuch  bhi  mere paas  nahi
jindagi  ki  chaah  bhi nahi aur maut  bhi  aati  nahi .......... :oops:  :oops:
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«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2005, 06:40:02 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
aisa  kya  baat dil mein  thi jo  maine  kabhi bhulaya  nahi
mere  seene aaj  mein  dard ke  siwa  kuch   bhi nahi
main  usko chata raha umar  ek  pal ke choda bhi nahi
jab "Waheed"  chala to  rokne  waala  koi  bhi nahi

maine khawabon mein ek taveer dekhi jiske haqeekat mein dekha bhi  nahi
sadiyon  tak safar  karta raha, khud se  kabhi poocha tak  nahi
aaj  aise  mod  per hum  khade  hain kuch  bhi  mere paas  nahi
jindagi  ki  chaah  bhi nahi aur maut  bhi  aati  nahi .......... :oops:  :oops:



Bahut badiya waheed sahab
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romeo_must_die
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«Reply #2 on: July 03, 2005, 07:22:58 PM »
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gud waheed !! keep it up ...

TERI JAFA KA DARD BARA THA MAIN NAY SEHNA SEEKH LIYA....,
TERI JUDAI K BAAD MAIN NAY TANHA REHNA SEEKH LIYA ...
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«Reply #3 on: July 03, 2005, 07:31:17 PM »
Aaj Mujhay Rokne Wala Koi Bhi Nahin
Is Dashte Tanha Meinn Humsafar Koi Bhi Nahin
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«Reply #4 on: July 03, 2005, 08:41:16 PM »
bohot achhe waheed...full of emotions...nice oen!!!                                      ..  :D
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«Reply #5 on: July 03, 2005, 08:44:25 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
aisa  kya  baat dil mein  thi jo  maine  kabhi bhulaya  nahi
mere  seene aaj  mein  dard ke  siwa  kuch   bhi nahi
main  usko chata raha umar  ek  pal ke choda bhi nahi
jab "Waheed"  chala to  rokne  waala  koi  bhi nahi

maine khawabon mein ek taveer dekhi jiske haqeekat mein dekha bhi  nahi
sadiyon  tak safar  karta raha, khud se  kabhi poocha tak  nahi
aaj  aise  mod  per hum  khade  hain kuch  bhi  mere paas  nahi
jindagi  ki  chaah  bhi nahi aur maut  bhi  aati  nahi .......... :oops:  :oops:


aapne to sach mein mere haalat par nazm likh daali.....very beautifull Waheed...

na soch rah-e-mohabbat mein tu hi akela chala ja raha hai
peeche mudkar dekh kafila aa raha hai
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«Reply #6 on: July 04, 2005, 01:17:02 AM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
aisa  kya  baat dil mein  thi jo  maine  kabhi bhulaya  nahi
mere  seene aaj  mein  dard ke  siwa  kuch   bhi nahi
main  usko chata raha umar  ek  pal ke choda bhi nahi
jab "Waheed"  chala to  rokne  waala  koi  bhi nahi

maine khawabon mein ek taveer dekhi jiske haqeekat mein dekha bhi  nahi
sadiyon  tak safar  karta raha, khud se  kabhi poocha tak  nahi
aaj  aise  mod  per hum  khade  hain kuch  bhi  mere paas  nahi
jindagi  ki  chaah  bhi nahi aur maut  bhi  aati  nahi .......... :oops:  :oops:
marvellouss............... bahut acche waheed bhai...........
you r grea8888888888
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«Reply #7 on: July 04, 2005, 06:02:17 AM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
aisa  kya  baat dil mein  thi jo  maine  kabhi bhulaya  nahi
mere  seene aaj  mein  dard ke  siwa  kuch   bhi nahi
main  usko chata raha umar  ek  pal ke choda bhi nahi
jab "Waheed"  chala to  rokne  waala  koi  bhi nahi

maine khawabon mein ek taveer dekhi jiske haqeekat mein dekha bhi  nahi
sadiyon  tak safar  karta raha, khud se  kabhi poocha tak  nahi
aaj  aise  mod  per hum  khade  hain kuch  bhi  mere paas  nahi
jindagi  ki  chaah  bhi nahi aur maut  bhi  aati  nahi .......... :oops:  :oops:


wah wah wah kya khoob likha hai ra...........NICE
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«Reply #8 on: July 04, 2005, 09:26:11 AM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
aisa  kya  baat dil mein  thi jo  maine  kabhi bhulaya  nahi
mere  seene aaj  mein  dard ke  siwa  kuch   bhi nahi
main  usko chata raha umar  ek  pal ke choda bhi nahi
jab "Waheed"  chala to  rokne  waala  koi  bhi nahi

maine khawabon mein ek taveer dekhi jiske haqeekat mein dekha bhi  nahi
sadiyon  tak safar  karta raha, khud se  kabhi poocha tak  nahi
aaj  aise  mod  per hum  khade  hain kuch  bhi  mere paas  nahi
jindagi  ki  chaah  bhi nahi aur maut  bhi  aati  nahi .......... :oops:  :oops:


Hmm Waheed very nice..... Usual Smile

Ajab junun-e-musafat me ghar se nikla tha
khabar nahi hai ke suraj kidhar se nikla tha
Yeh kaun phir se unhi raasto me chhor gaya
abhi abhi to azaab-e-safar se nikla tha
yeh ab jo aag bana shehar shehar phaila hai
yehi dhuwa mere deewar-o-darr se nikla tha....nm....
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«Reply #9 on: July 04, 2005, 11:07:53 AM »
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aisa  kya  baat dil mein  thi jo  maine  kabhi bhulaya  nahi
mere  seene aaj  mein  dard ke  siwa  kuch   bhi nahi
main  usko chata raha umar  ek  pal ke choda bhi nahi
jab "Waheed"  chala to  rokne  waala  koi  bhi nahi

maine khawabon mein ek taveer dekhi jiske haqeekat mein dekha bhi  nahi
sadiyon  tak safar  karta raha, khud se  kabhi poocha tak  nahi
aaj  aise  mod  per hum  khade  hain kuch  bhi  mere paas  nahi
jindagi  ki  chaah  bhi nahi aur maut  bhi  aati  nahi .......... :oops:  :oops:


aapne to sach mein mere haalat par nazm likh daali.....very beautifull Waheed...

na soch rah-e-mohabbat mein tu hi akela chala ja raha hai
peeche mudkar dekh kafila aa raha hai


thanxxxxxx  Nikki.............  Romeo.....Rohit......Sanya  mm.......... Isha......Sabha.........

also  very  nice written.........Saba.........Nikki.........Romeo. ..............

bahot  accha aap sab  ne  likha.............
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«Reply #10 on: July 04, 2005, 11:51:01 AM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
aisa  kya  baat dil mein  thi jo  maine  kabhi bhulaya  nahi
mere  seene aaj  mein  dard ke  siwa  kuch   bhi nahi
main  usko chata raha umar  ek  pal ke choda bhi nahi
jab "Waheed"  chala to  rokne  waala  koi  bhi nahi

maine khawabon mein ek taveer dekhi jiske haqeekat mein dekha bhi  nahi
sadiyon  tak safar  karta raha, khud se  kabhi poocha tak  nahi
aaj  aise  mod  per hum  khade  hain kuch  bhi  mere paas  nahi
jindagi  ki  chaah  bhi nahi aur maut  bhi  aati  nahi .......... :oops:  :oops:

kamaal ka likhte hain aap Waheed....
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«Reply #11 on: July 04, 2005, 11:57:24 AM »
veryyyyyyyyyy nice waheed.................................
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«Reply #12 on: July 04, 2005, 01:16:20 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
aisa  kya  baat dil mein  thi jo  maine  kabhi bhulaya  nahi
mere  seene aaj  mein  dard ke  siwa  kuch   bhi nahi
main  usko chata raha umar  ek  pal ke choda bhi nahi
jab "Waheed"  chala to  rokne  waala  koi  bhi nahi

maine khawabon mein ek taveer dekhi jiske haqeekat mein dekha bhi  nahi
sadiyon  tak safar  karta raha, khud se  kabhi poocha tak  nahi
aaj  aise  mod  per hum  khade  hain kuch  bhi  mere paas  nahi
jindagi  ki  chaah  bhi nahi aur maut  bhi  aati  nahi .......... :oops:  :oops:


very nice Waheed..................gud one............
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«Reply #13 on: July 04, 2005, 01:39:06 PM »
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aisa  kya  baat dil mein  thi jo  maine  kabhi bhulaya  nahi
mere  seene aaj  mein  dard ke  siwa  kuch   bhi nahi
main  usko chata raha umar  ek  pal ke choda bhi nahi
jab "Waheed"  chala to  rokne  waala  koi  bhi nahi

maine khawabon mein ek taveer dekhi jiske haqeekat mein dekha bhi  nahi
sadiyon  tak safar  karta raha, khud se  kabhi poocha tak  nahi
aaj  aise  mod  per hum  khade  hain kuch  bhi  mere paas  nahi
jindagi  ki  chaah  bhi nahi aur maut  bhi  aati  nahi .......... :oops:  :oops:

kamaal ka likhte hain aap Waheed....


thanxxxxxxxxx   alot  Aryan...................
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«Reply #14 on: July 04, 2005, 05:02:34 PM »
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aisa  kya  baat dil mein  thi jo  maine  kabhi bhulaya  nahi
mere  seene aaj  mein  dard ke  siwa  kuch   bhi nahi
main  usko chata raha umar  ek  pal ke choda bhi nahi
jab "Waheed"  chala to  rokne  waala  koi  bhi nahi

maine khawabon mein ek taveer dekhi jiske haqeekat mein dekha bhi  nahi
sadiyon  tak safar  karta raha, khud se  kabhi poocha tak  nahi
aaj  aise  mod  per hum  khade  hain kuch  bhi  mere paas  nahi
jindagi  ki  chaah  bhi nahi aur maut  bhi  aati  nahi .......... :oops:  :oops:


Brilliant Waheed :thumb:
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