<>*Aajkal*<>

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<>*Aajkal*<>

Khamoshi si chhai hai mere dil-o-dimag me  aajkal
Kahin koi geet gazal nahin ban raha mujhse aajkal

Lehron pe behte hue moti bhi mil jate the kabhi
Lekin khali seep hi mil rahe ret pe mujhe aajkal

Kho gaye hain shabd sare aur khyal bhi gum hain
Ajeeb sa badrang mere man ka mausam hai aajkal

Ashkon ki peeda bhi ab to samjh rahi hun main
Ye aakar chumte nahin mere rukhsaaron ko aajkal

Mehfilon me shor hai nagme  gunj rahe har taraf
Fir bhi kuch kami si khal rahi mujhe tere bin aajkal

Aaine k saamne khade hue bhi ab to zamana hua hai
Khud ki surat pe khilti muskaan bhi bhul gai hun main aajkal

Rishton k samandar me roz naye log naye rishte milte hain
Apnon k bich bhi main paraayee nazar aati hun aajkal...!!!
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«Reply #1 on: November 25, 2010, 05:17:39 PM »
kya baat hai Kasak ji...
bhot Uthal-Puthal bhara nagma pesh kiya aapne..
as usual superb---bas kuch azeeb sa feel bhi hua mujhe:
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«Reply #2 on: November 25, 2010, 05:30:49 PM »
ajeeb sa feel ....kis tarah KB ji....
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«Reply #3 on: November 25, 2010, 05:59:28 PM »
ek azeeb si bechaini feel ho gaya yar:/
bas uss bechaini ke hi alfaaz hain ye sb..
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«Reply #4 on: November 25, 2010, 06:00:56 PM »
hmm matlab mera likhna safal hua..iski feelings kisike dil ko to chhu paiii
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«Reply #5 on: November 25, 2010, 06:04:14 PM »
dik ko to chuuuu hi gai saath ye 2 line bhi yaad dila gai mujhe:--Arz hai-
shikayat hai shikayat hai mujhko dil se shikayat hai,
jo nhi mil sakta kyun uski chahat hai....
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«Reply #6 on: November 25, 2010, 09:13:24 PM »
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Kasak ji... jawaab nahi aapka bhi... !!!


kuch is tarha ka haal hai mere bhi dil ka aajkal,
chehre pe mere khilte nahi kabhi muskaan aajkal,

kuch to khoya hai maine shayad in kuch dino me,
yahi wajah hai saath rehke bhi tanha hoon aajkal,

khush hoon soch ke main aane waale pal ke baaare me,
par shayad koi apna sa duur hai mujhse aajkal,

ghira hoon apno ke daayre me, pyaar karte hain sab,
par shayad kisi khaas ki kami khalti hai aajkal,

jaane ye kaisa ehsaas hai kuch paake bhi na paane ka,
bahut tadpaati hai mujhe meri jeeti hui haar aajkal....
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«Reply #7 on: November 25, 2010, 09:16:12 PM »
bahut achha Kasak ji... !

bas yun hi likhte rehiye aap... hum me ab kaha taakat likhne ki rahi... ab to kalam bhi nahin sambhaali jaati...

Intezar !

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«Reply #8 on: November 25, 2010, 09:17:56 PM »
Hriday ji ... aap bhi bahut badhiya... bas likhte rahiye

lekin ye bataaiye itne din se gaayab kahaaan hai aap... !

naye dost ki talaash mein humko bhool gaye hain kya...

Intezar !
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«Reply #9 on: November 25, 2010, 09:37:33 PM »
Bahut khoob Kasak ji mindblowing creation,Kapil ji aape bhi bahut khoobi se saath nibhaya kasak ji ka,excellent,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: November 25, 2010, 09:39:50 PM »
shukriya bhai... naye dost ki talaash me aapko bhoole nahi hain bas waqt nahi nikaal paa rahe the...!!!

Hriday ji ... aap bhi bahut badhiya... bas likhte rahiye

lekin ye bataaiye itne din se gaayab kahaaan hai aap... !

naye dost ki talaash mein humko bhool gaye hain kya...

Intezar !
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«Reply #11 on: November 25, 2010, 09:40:24 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Bahut khoob Kasak ji mindblowing creation,Kapil ji aape bhi bahut khoobi se saath nibhaya kasak ji ka,excellent,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: November 26, 2010, 04:12:32 AM »
bahut achha Kasak ji... !

bas yun hi likhte rehiye aap... hum me ab kaha taakat likhne ki rahi... ab to kalam bhi nahin sambhaali jaati...

Intezar !



ye kehke humara dil na todo intezar ji....
kuch to kehna hi hai apko amare likhe par..aur aapki kalam me takat nahin ye ho hi nahin sakta...to kuch ispar kahenge aap iska kasak ko intezar rahega....
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«Reply #13 on: November 26, 2010, 04:13:05 AM »
Bahut khoob Kasak ji mindblowing creation,Kapil ji aape bhi bahut khoobi se saath nibhaya kasak ji ka,excellent,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

thnx alot madhu for appreciating my work
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«Reply #14 on: November 26, 2010, 04:13:40 AM »
dik ko to chuuuu hi gai saath ye 2 line bhi yaad dila gai mujhe:--Arz hai-
shikayat hai shikayat hai mujhko dil se shikayat hai,
jo nhi mil sakta kyun uski chahat hai....

bht pyari lines hain KB ji...
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