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«Reply #15 on: November 26, 2010, 04:23:14 AM »
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Kasak ji... jawaab nahi aapka bhi... !!!


kuch is tarha ka haal hai mere bhi dil ka aajkal,
chehre pe mere khilte nahi kabhi muskaan aajkal,

kuch to khoya hai maine shayad in kuch dino me,
yahi wajah hai saath rehke bhi tanha hoon aajkal,

khush hoon soch ke main aane waale pal ke baaare me,
par shayad koi apna sa duur hai mujhse aajkal,

ghira hoon apno ke daayre me, pyaar karte hain sab,
par shayad kisi khaas ki kami khalti hai aajkal,

jaane ye kaisa ehsaas hai kuch paake bhi na paane ka,
bahut tadpaati hai mujhe meri jeeti hui haar aajkal....

bht bht bht shukriya kapil ji aapke reply ka..
har bar ki tarah yehi kahungi k aapke replies k bina post adhura sa hi lagta hai...
thnx again for repling....
bht hi achcha likha hai aapne..lekin aapko saddy hone ko kisne kaha.....
oyeeee aise mausam me to romantic likhna chahiye aisa dukhi dukhi nahin.....
lekin ye bht pyari feelings likhi hain aapne..
waise kuch kuch yehi feeling thi meri bhi jab maine ye post likhi thi...
thnx ji aapne use wrds diye....


aaj bhi kuch kehne se pehle sochti nahin main
dilme jo hota hai use bahar aane se tokti nahin main
shayad yehi wajah hai k har bar ulajh k reh jati hun
lekin itna kuch hone k bawjud bhi najane kyun samjhti nahin main
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«Reply #16 on: November 26, 2010, 04:24:09 AM »
aapki nazren inayat hai Kasak ji..
warna iss na-cheej ki haisiyat hi kya hai
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«Reply #17 on: November 26, 2010, 04:29:52 AM »
ohhhoooo...aisa kya???

itna behtareen likhte hain aap
khudko fir bi nachiz kehte hain aap
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«Reply #18 on: November 26, 2010, 04:52:14 AM »
naji na ....
behtareen kah diya aapne ,
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«Reply #19 on: November 26, 2010, 03:21:10 PM »
bahaut hi badhiya kasak ji ... kya dard o gham e dil ka samaan baandha hai.

jigar moradabadi ka ek sher yaad aaya ....

tabeeyat in dinon begaanaa e gham hotee jaatee hai
merey hissase ki goya har khushi kam hotee jaatee hai
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«Reply #20 on: November 26, 2010, 09:32:43 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

samajhte to hum bhi hai, samajhte hain aap bhi,
duur rehna majboori hai par jaruri hai saath bhi,
mohabbat hai dil me magar kehte nahi aap bhi,
dil me hai ek naam magar khayalon me aap bhi....
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«Reply #21 on: November 27, 2010, 04:00:59 AM »
bahaut hi badhiya kasak ji ... kya dard o gham e dil ka samaan baandha hai.

jigar moradabadi ka ek sher yaad aaya ....

tabeeyat in dinon begaanaa e gham hotee jaatee hai
merey hissase ki goya har khushi kam hotee jaatee hai

bht khubb sher share kiya hai aapne zarra ji......meri koshish ko pasand karne ka bht bht shukriya ji.....
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«Reply #22 on: November 27, 2010, 04:03:51 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

samajhte to hum bhi hai, samajhte hain aap bhi,
duur rehna majboori hai par jaruri hai saath bhi,
mohabbat hai dil me magar kehte nahi aap bhi,
dil me hai ek naam magar khayalon me aap bhi....

andar hi andar ghut rahe hain hum bhi aur aap bhi
ek duje ko yunhi sata rahe hain hum bhi aur ap bhi

aake le lijiye bahon  me humko  aur mita dijiye duriyan
akele akele kyun tadap rahe hain hum bhi aur aap bhi ...
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«Reply #23 on: November 27, 2010, 06:20:40 AM »
purani yaadon ka wo saaya
    fir se sataane laga hai
                aajkal
guzre palo ke ehsaas wo saare
     fir se rulaane lage hain
                 aajkal
  mit chuke wo sapne dil ke      fir se khuwaabon me aane lage
                   aajkal
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«Reply #24 on: November 27, 2010, 08:10:25 AM »
Aajkal aapke kalaam ka kya kahiye kasak-di
Kahin pe hai nazaar kahin aur hai nisshaana
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«Reply #25 on: November 27, 2010, 08:13:45 AM »
ye kya keh gai meri gudiya rani
zara khul k mujhe tu samjhana
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«Reply #26 on: November 27, 2010, 10:30:43 AM »
Ye koi paheli nahi hai pyaari-behna
Bas mujhe tou kaffiya tha yu milana

Kaise kahun k sakhee meine nahi pehchana wo anmol khazaana
Aur khaton k sang usse bhi mita dala bharu kaise ye harzaana
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«Reply #27 on: November 27, 2010, 10:37:46 AM »
uffffffffff ye tune kya kar dala
uss anmol khat ko yun hi jala dala

kaash janti k tere liye bekaar hai wo
kab ka use maine tujhse hota maang dala

 sad5 sad5 sad5
 
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«Reply #28 on: November 27, 2010, 10:57:34 AM »
Kaash mein tab jaanti,waise tou ab bhi nahi jaanti
Aysa kya tha uss khat mai jo meine nahi pehchaana

Yaad aata hai mujhe,likhi thee kuchh college ki baatein
Kisi restaurent me beeti intezaar bhari wo mulaakaatein

Chhoti chhoti baaton me jo hoti thee takraar
Phir bhee pal pal phone par lete they pukaar

Roj roj kisi ka tunaknaa kisi ka ruthnaa
Bas manaana he hota tha milne ka bahaana

Abhi bas...aur yaad aayega tab puchhna
Mujhe aur kise tujhe he tou hai bataana

uffffffffff ye tune kya kar dala
uss anmol khat ko yun hi jala dala

kaash janti k tere liye bekaar hai wo
kab ka use maine tujhse hota maang dala

 sad5 sad5 sad5
 
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«Reply #29 on: November 27, 2010, 10:59:45 AM »
hayeeeeee wahi yadein to mujhe chahiye thi
gujri hui baatein hi to chahiye thi

kaise guzri hain wo pyaar bhari zindagi
uski wo saugaatein hoto mujhe chahiye thi

kash usne mujhe ye pehle bataya hota
maine ye anmol tohfa na yun ganwaya hota...
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