Aajmaish

by jannatjahan on April 13, 2009, 01:40:27 PM
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Unke inkaar ko bhi hum ikraar samajhte rahe
wakif the mohabbat se hamari, phir bhi wo hume aajmate rahe,

apni chahat ke liye takaja hume sahi na laga
puri umra wo humse bheekh mohabbat ki mangwate rahe,

gire rahe yun hi unki mohabbat ki raahon me
aur wo hume thokerein pe thokerein marte rahe

socha kabhi to badlenge mijaj Dusman-e-jaan ke
har roj naya nastar wo seene me chubhote rahe,

khwab me hi sahi sang unke banati thi gharaunda
dehleej par kadam rakhne se pehle har baar neend se hume wo uthate rahe,

meri hasratein kabhi labon ko na chu payee
aur wo apni har jidd humse manwate rahe

Jannat ko phir bhi unke mohabbat kejannat ki ummeed thi
har baar meri mohabbat wo apni aajmaish ki aag me jalate rahe
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«Reply #1 on: April 13, 2009, 01:44:12 PM »
Waah Shwetha JI, Kya Khoob Yaar, Bohat Achche LIkha Hai, Aapne Nice One,.

BOhat Achche,.
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«Reply #2 on: April 13, 2009, 01:52:28 PM »

Har Aazmaaish Ke Baad, Bahaaron Ka Mausam Hota Hai,.
Bahaarein Tere Aangan Mein Aaye Hum Duaa Karte Hain,.

Ab Dekhle Raat Tu Ghamon Ki, Aye Mere Dost,.
Sitaare Khushi Ke Tere Daaman Mein Aaye Hum Duaa Karte Hain,.

______________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #3 on: April 13, 2009, 02:04:29 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on April 13, 2009, 01:52:28 PM

Har Aazmaaish Ke Baad, Bahaaron Ka Mausam Hota Hai,.
Bahaarein Tere Aangan Mein Aaye Hum Duaa Karte Hain,.

Ab Dekhle Raat Tu Ghamon Ki, Aye Mere Dost,.
Sitaare Khushi Ke Tere Daaman Mein Aaye Hum Duaa Karte Hain,.

______________________________________-Jaanasheen-




Kash is dua me wo asar ho jaye
ki har raat khusiyon ki raat bankar aaye,
wo jo karte hain aajmaish meri mohabbat ki,
unhe bhi is nachiz se pyar ho jaye

Thanks dear azeem
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«Reply #4 on: April 13, 2009, 02:32:43 PM »
Quote from: jannatjahan on April 13, 2009, 01:40:27 PM
Unke inkaar ko bhi hum ikraar samajhte rahe
wakif the mohabbat se hamari, phir bhi wo hume aajmate rahe,

apni chahat ke liye takaja hume sahi na laga
puri umra wo humse bheekh mohabbat ki mangwate rahe,

gire rahe yun hi unki mohabbat ki raahon me
aur wo hume thokerein pe thokerein marte rahe

socha kabhi to badlenge mijaj Dusman-e-jaan ke
har roj naya nastar wo seene me chubhote rahe,

khwab me hi sahi sang unke banati thi gharaunda
dehleej par kadam rakhne se pehle har baar neend se hume wo uthate rahe,

meri hasratein kabhi labon ko na chu payee
aur wo apni har jidd humse manwate rahe

Jannat ko phir bhi unke mohabbat kejannat ki ummeed thi
har baar meri mohabbat wo apni aajmaish ki aag me jalate rahe

Bahoot khoob Shweta ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: April 13, 2009, 02:37:06 PM »
Quote from: jannatjahan on April 13, 2009, 02:04:29 PM
Kash is dua me wo asar ho jaye
ki har raat khusiyon ki raat bankar aaye,
wo jo karte hain aajmaish meri mohabbat ki,
unhe bhi is nachiz se pyar ho jaye

Thanks dear azeem

Shukroya Shweta JI,./
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«Reply #6 on: April 13, 2009, 02:41:27 PM »
Bahoot Acha Azeem ji Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: April 13, 2009, 02:45:20 PM »
Quote from: salma786 on April 13, 2009, 02:41:27 PM
Bahoot Acha Azeem ji Clapping Smiley

THank U,.
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«Reply #8 on: April 13, 2009, 03:14:38 PM »
wAH BAHOOT KHOOB SHWETA. ( FINALY I GOT UR NAME) Usual Smile

vERY NICE WRITTEN JANASHEEN.
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«Reply #9 on: April 13, 2009, 03:17:09 PM »
wah wah jannat, wah bahut hi khoob. Hamey yakeen hai, yeh kissa bahutoh sey sath gujara hoga ya gujar raha hai, aap ney badey pyare andaaz meh yeh likha hai ... dil koh chooo gayi aap ki yeh poem ... wah bahut khoob ....

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«Reply #10 on: April 14, 2009, 04:25:53 AM »
Kya bata hain badi diljali peshkash ki hain JJ.. bohat khoob..
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«Reply #11 on: April 14, 2009, 07:35:16 AM »
Shukriya Sophi Ji,.
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«Reply #12 on: April 14, 2009, 07:42:43 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on April 13, 2009, 01:52:28 PM

Har Aazmaaish Ke Baad, Bahaaron Ka Mausam Hota Hai,.
Bahaarein Tere Aangan Mein Aaye Hum Duaa Karte Hain,.

Ab Dekhle Raat Tu Ghamon Ki, Aye Mere Dost,.
Sitaare Khushi Ke Tere Daaman Mein Aaye Hum Duaa Karte Hain,.

______________________________________-Jaanasheen-





Kitni pyaari dua di hain Chote.... subhan_allah..
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«Reply #13 on: April 14, 2009, 08:18:57 AM »

 aapki nazm achchi hai , sirf yeh guzaarish hai aap urdu key alfaaz ko bhi
  agar english main likain to j  aur z main farq rakhain iss sey aap ki gazal aur nazam  auur bhi khili khili lagey gi.

 main lagatar aap ki tehreer padhtaa hoon. aaj ye kahney ki jurrat kar rahaa hoon. agar bura lagaa to mujhey maaf kar dain . really aap ki nazam bahaut sunder hoti hai
   
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«Reply #14 on: April 14, 2009, 09:09:00 AM »
Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on April 14, 2009, 08:18:57 AM
aapki nazm achchi hai , sirf yeh guzaarish hai aap urdu key alfaaz ko bhi
  agar english main likain to j  aur z main farq rakhain iss sey aap ki gazal aur nazam  auur bhi khili khili lagey gi.

 main lagatar aap ki tehreer padhtaa hoon. aaj ye kahney ki jurrat kar rahaa hoon. agar bura lagaa to mujhey maaf kar dain . really aap ki nazam bahaut sunder hoti hai
  

Bohat khoob Islah ki hain KA very good.....
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