Aajmaish -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

jannatjahan

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«Reply #15 on: April 15, 2009, 02:02:36 AM »

Quote from: salma786 on April 13, 2009, 02:32:43 PM

Bahoot khoob Shweta ji Clapping Smiley

Thanks Dear salma[/]


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jannatjahan

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Re: Aajmaish

«Reply #16 on: April 15, 2009, 02:05:33 AM »

Quote from: Sophi on April 13, 2009, 03:14:38 PM

wAH BAHOOT KHOOB SHWETA. ( FINALY I GOT UR NAME) Usual Smile

vERY NICE WRITTEN JANASHEEN.

Thanks Dear sophi


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jannatjahan

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Re: Aajmaish

«Reply #17 on: April 15, 2009, 02:09:47 AM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on April 13, 2009, 03:17:09 PM

wah wah jannat, wah bahut hi khoob. Hamey yakeen hai, yeh kissa bahutoh sey sath gujara hoga ya gujar raha hai, aap ney badey pyare andaaz meh yeh likha hai ... dil koh chooo gayi aap ki yeh poem ... wah bahut khoob ....

jasbir singh

Thanks Jasbir ji

Aapne sahi andaja lagaya ye kissa sabhi ke sath gujar raha ho ya na ho, par aapki is JJ ke sath jarur gujar raha hai


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jannatjahan

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Re: Aajmaish

«Reply #18 on: April 15, 2009, 02:13:59 AM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 14, 2009, 04:25:53 AM

Kya bata hain badi diljali peshkash ki hain JJ.. bohat khoob..

Thanks Dear

Jiska dil jal raha ho wo pyar bhare nazm kahan se laye dear......samjha karo na...waise aapne ye nahi kaha ye acha tha ya nahi


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Re: Aajmaish

«Reply #19 on: April 15, 2009, 02:35:48 AM »

Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on April 14, 2009, 08:18:57 AM

aapki nazm achchi hai , sirf yeh guzaarish hai aap urdu key alfaaz ko bhi
agar english main likain to j aur z main farq rakhain iss sey aap ki gazal aur nazam auur bhi khili khili lagey gi.

main lagatar aap ki tehreer padhtaa hoon. aaj ye kahney ki jurrat kar rahaa hoon. agar bura lagaa to mujhey maaf kar dain . really aap ki nazam bahaut sunder hoti hai

Hey Thanks KA
Apne jo salah di hai mai aage us par amal karne ki kosis karungi

Aap meri tehrirein padhte hai ye mere liye khusi ki baat hai...khusiyaan doguni hoti hai jab aapko ye pasand aati hai.....shukriya

warna kisi kisi ko to hamari tehrirein achi lagti hi nahi..abhi nayee hun paanv jamane me waqt to lagega hi na.....


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