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Kayi arsa hua unhe seene se lagaaye
Ek umra gujri na hum unhe yaad aaye
Kiski jaanib hua hai sajda mera yaaro
Kiske liye duaa mein hai haath uthaaye
Saari tohmate li usne apne sar dekho aaj
muskurata raha wo dil me kayi raaz dabaaye
Beh gaya mai uski aankh se ik katra ban kar
Tanhai mein jaakar jab usne aansu bahaaye
Hasrat kuch baki reh gayi baad marne ke bhi
Bas ek baar kabhi wo meri kabra par to aaye
Dekh le aakar ki main ab bhi saans leta hoon
Jab ke zamaane huye aaj yaha mujhko dafnaaye
Kisi roshni ki chahat nahin hai mujhe phir bhi‘Intezar’
Lahad par aakar meri yaad me wo ek shamma to jalaaye… !
Shukriya
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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«Reply #1 on: January 25, 2011, 08:15:13 PM » |
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«Reply #2 on: January 25, 2011, 08:41:15 PM » |
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Kya bolen.. Wah wah wah wah.. Dil choo jate ho Intezar bhai.. Khoob yaar..  Khush rahiye..! |
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«Reply #3 on: January 25, 2011, 10:59:01 PM » |
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«Reply #4 on: January 26, 2011, 07:30:19 AM » |
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Kayi arsa hua unhe seene se lagaaye
Ek umra gujri na hum unhe yaad aaye
Kiski jaanib hua hai sajda mera yaaro
Kiske liye duaa mein hai haath uthaaye
Saari tohmate li usne apne sar dekho aaj
muskurata raha wo dil me kayi raaz dabaaye
Beh gaya mai uski aankh se ik katra ban kar
Tanhai mein jaakar jab usne aansu bahaaye
Hasrat kuch baki reh gayi baad marne ke bhi
Bas ek baar kabhi wo meri kabra par to aaye
Dekh le aakar ki main ab bhi saans leta hoon
Jab ke zamaane huye aaj yaha mujhko dafnaaye
Kisi roshni ki chahat nahin hai mujhe phir bhi‘Intezar’
Lahad par aakar meri yaad me wo ek shamma to jalaaye… !
Shukriya
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Very Nice Poetry ..... Intezar Ji ! |
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«Reply #5 on: January 26, 2011, 08:12:52 AM » |
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Very Nice lines Intezaar ji. 
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«Reply #6 on: January 26, 2011, 12:20:17 PM » |
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bht bht khoob intezar ji.....
simply superb....
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«Reply #7 on: January 26, 2011, 12:43:11 PM » |
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bahot khoob intjaar ji.....
apko padna bahot aacha ehsaas deta he......keep it up
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«Reply #8 on: January 26, 2011, 01:17:49 PM » |
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bahut khoob intezar ji..
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«Reply #9 on: January 26, 2011, 04:39:52 PM » |
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Kasak ji tahe dil se shukriya aapka... Intezar ! |
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«Reply #10 on: January 26, 2011, 04:41:23 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai... mere lafz aap ke dil tak pahunch jaate hain shukriya aapka... Intezar ! Kya bolen.. Wah wah wah wah.. Dil choo jate ho Intezar bhai.. Khoob yaar.. Khush rahiye..! |
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«Reply #11 on: January 26, 2011, 04:42:41 PM » |
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madhuwesh ji aapka har baar,, baar baar bahut bahut shukriya... Intezar ! |
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«Reply #12 on: January 26, 2011, 04:43:59 PM » |
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Dil se bahut bahut shukriya Anshumali ji aapka... Intezar ! Very Nice Poetry ..... Intezar Ji !
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«Reply #13 on: January 26, 2011, 04:47:10 PM » |
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tamanna ji aap ne pasand kiya... aapka bahut bahut shukriya... Intezar ! Very Nice lines Intezaar ji. |
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«Reply #14 on: January 26, 2011, 04:49:15 PM » |
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manzil-e-ishq ji bahut bahut shukriya aapka... Intezar ! bht bht khoob intezar ji.....
simply superb....
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