Aakhein nam rah gai

by soudagar on February 08, 2013, 05:42:42 PM
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Mere dil ki baat mere dil mein hee rah gai
pyar k armano ki barat aansuon me beh gai

hum to chale the karne ijhar unse pyar ka
wo nadan apne hi pyar ki qisse kahani keh gai

apni mohbbat se milaaa bade pyar se kha usne
yahi h mere sanam jis pr dilojan se main dah gai

dil tuta jarur tha par ek khushi ka ehsas bhi tha
unke chehre pr khushi dekh akhein thmi rah gai

zahir na hone diya kabhi dil ke jazbaton ko maine
dost ban dua di use chahe aakhon mein nami rah gai
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lovely_charan
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«Reply #1 on: February 08, 2013, 05:57:30 PM »
great post karan ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: February 08, 2013, 06:11:19 PM »
Mere dil ki baat mere dil mein hee rah gai
pyar k armano ki barat aansuon me beh gai

hum to chale the karne ijhar unse pyar ka
wo nadan apne hi pyar ki qisse kahani keh gai

apni mohbbat se milaaa bade pyar se kha usne
yahi h mere sanam jis pr dilojan se main dah gai

dil tuta jarur tha par ek khushi ka ehsas bhi tha
unke chehre pr khushi dekh akhein thmi rah gai

zahir na hone diya kabhi dil ke jazbaton ko maine
dost ban dua di use chahe aakhon mein nami rah gai
Wha wha ji wha
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«Reply #3 on: February 09, 2013, 02:57:02 AM »
waah waah bahut sunder
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«Reply #4 on: February 09, 2013, 03:20:05 AM »
bohut khub saudagar bhai
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«Reply #5 on: February 09, 2013, 06:16:31 AM »
Mere dil ki baat mere dil mein hee rah gai
pyar k armano ki barat aansuon me beh gai

hum to chale the karne ijhar(IZHAAR) unse pyar ka
wo nadan apne hi pyar ki qisse kahani keh gai

apni mohbbat se milaaa bade pyar se kha usne
yahi h mere sanam jis pr dilojan se main dah gai

dil tuta jarur tha par ek khushi ka ehsas bhi tha
unke chehre pr khushi dekh akhein thmi rah gai

zahir na hone diya kabhi dil ke jazbaton ko maine
dost ban dua di use chahe aakhon mein nami rah gai

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«Reply #6 on: February 09, 2013, 06:40:23 AM »
baht khoob Saudagar ji
ye sauda acha raha
dil aapka sacha raha
namm aankhon me chupa aapka
mohabbt ka dard e izhaar raha
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khus rahie
mast rahie
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3 rd aashar ka mtlb smjhaie
ye aashar male ya female kiski feelin hai?
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aqsh
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«Reply #7 on: February 09, 2013, 07:24:09 AM »
kya baat hai. bahut hi khoob aapne likha hai. dheron daad.
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«Reply #8 on: February 09, 2013, 01:42:06 PM »
hum to chale the karne ijhar unse pyar ka wo nadan apne hi pyar ki qisse kahani keh gai

kya baat hai soudagar ji behad lajawaab kalam raha bahoot khoob
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«Reply #9 on: February 11, 2013, 07:05:46 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: August 03, 2013, 08:13:25 PM »
shukriya lovely ji
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«Reply #11 on: August 03, 2013, 08:17:43 PM »

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«Reply #12 on: August 03, 2013, 08:18:52 PM »
kyaa baat...bahut khub..
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«Reply #13 on: August 03, 2013, 10:26:51 PM »
wah bhai wah
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