Aakhir Kab Tak:Shayri-E-Dard

syednaami

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Tum dard chhupa kar rakhoge, -
Yeh silsila aakhir kab tak. -

Tum kitne khat likh kar phaadoge, -
Yeh haalat rahegi aakhir kab tak. -

Tum izhaar ko raaz banaaoge, -
Yeh zubaan pe shikan aakhir kab tak. -

Tum khud ko anjaa'n bataaoge, -
Yeh la'ilmee aakhir kab tak. -

Tum tasavvur men gul khilaaoge, -
Yeh sapnon ka mahal aakhir kab tak. -

Tum kab tak dil ko bahlaaoge, -
Yeh Na,maaqooli aakhir kab tak. -

Tum dil ki baat kab bayaan kar paaoge, -
Yeh khaamoshi ka aalam aakhir kab tak. -

Tum aise jeevan kab tak biataaoge, -
Yeh haalat-e-zaar aakhir kab tak. -

(Syed Naami)


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Pooja

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #1 on: April 28, 2008, 09:17:26 PM »

wah kaya baat hai... bahoot khoon syed ji!! Good creation!!


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syednaami

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #2 on: April 28, 2008, 10:07:20 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on April 28, 2008, 09:17:26 PM

wah kaya baat hai... bahoot khoon syed ji!! Good creation!!

So nice of you Pooja ji, Thanks for reading and encouraging.


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Pooja

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #3 on: April 28, 2008, 10:17:59 PM »

Time ki kami hai, mgar jalad hi kuch likhne ki bhi koshish hogi!!!


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syednaami

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #4 on: April 28, 2008, 10:35:16 PM »

Jaise aap ko mozoon lage, magar sukoon se likhye, ek saans men nahin.
Buhat Shukriya


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Pooja

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #5 on: April 28, 2008, 11:02:20 PM »

Syed ji main koi lekhika to hu nahi ki soch soch kar likhu. Ek dum mai kuch man mai atta hai.. isse pahle gayab ho ek he saans mai likhne ki koshish hoti hai...

Shayad apko pasand aa jaaye:

Dard ka silsilla to saanso ke sung hi jayega
Dard ke bina ab chain bhi kaha ayega

Kitne hi khat likhe khayal mai aor dil main chupa liye
Shabdo ka yah dard, bas mere he ander rah jayega

Izhaar kar ke bhi hoga kaya, yah dil janta hai
Kam se kam ek umeend ka toota diya to rah jayerga

Dard itna hai ki ab to khud se khud anjaan ban gai hu
Aise main kaha kisi ke sung koi rishta rah jayega

Sapno ke mehal ki bhi ajj hu main raani
Chalo kisi tarah to yah toota dil behal jayega

Dil to bayan karta hai her pal, her saans ke sath
Khamoshi ka yah haal, umar bhar POOJA ka sath nibhayega

Dard ka silsilla to saanso ke sung hi jayega
Dard ke bina ab chain bhi kaha ayega…………………………..


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syednaami

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #6 on: April 28, 2008, 11:20:51 PM »

Muhtarma, ab mujhe lagta hai ki aap insaan ho hi nahin, ya to koi shayari ka processor dimaagh ke bhitar fix hai.
Commendable....
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Khair, aap dard ke rahi bano, to hum Dard ki dawa.

Shukriya

(S Naami)


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Pooja

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #7 on: April 28, 2008, 11:24:54 PM »

bade hardware typed comments mille hai... samjh kar bhi samjh mai nahi ayye icon_scratch

kaya app sidhe sidhe saral bhasha main nahi likh sakte BangHead

chaliye apki dawa wali kavita ka intzar rahega !!

Thankyou !


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syednaami

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #8 on: April 29, 2008, 08:34:16 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on April 28, 2008, 11:24:54 PM

bade hardware typed comments mille hai... samjh kar bhi samjh mai nahi ayye icon_scratch

kaya app sidhe sidhe saral bhasha main nahi likh sakte BangHead

chaliye apki dawa wali kavita ka intzar rahega !!

Thankyou !

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Kitne hi khat likhe khayal mai aor dil main chupa liye
Shabdo ka yah dard, bas mere he ander rah jayega

Yeh line buhat bhari padi, the hidden secret, trying to crack.

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Dil to bayan karta hai her pal, her saans ke sath
Khamoshi ka yah haal, umar bhar POOJA ka sath nibhayega

oopar diye shayr ko iss tarah likhen to.... don't mind please, please.
Dilse likha hai apne aur humne bhi

Dil to bayan karta hai her pal, her saans ke sath
Naami ka yah haal, umar bhar POOJA ka sath nibhayega


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Pooja

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #9 on: April 29, 2008, 01:50:35 PM »

Dil to dil hai behal hi jayega
Akhir kab tak koi kisi ka sath nibhayega

Ajj bhi aaina hai yah dil, ussi ek shakas ka
Akhir kab tak koi uska aks mujh mein dekh payega

Gungunata hai mujh main wo, jo mujhe bhool gaya
Akhir kab tak wo mere iss ahsaas se anjaan rah payega

Kahin bahoot door Pooja chali aai hai apne he in khayalo main
Akhir kab tak.. koi aise, kisi ke sath chal payega

Dil to dil hai behal hi jayega
Akhir kab tak koi kisi ka sath nibhayega!!!


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syednaami

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #10 on: April 29, 2008, 02:45:53 PM »

Pooja saahiba,
Jawab ko ek naye thread men piroya hai.

Naye title ke saath.

Yahan click karen

(Syed Naami)


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Pooja

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #11 on: April 29, 2008, 02:47:44 PM »

yaha bhi kuch farma dete to yaha bhi agge likhne ka moka mil jaata!!

waise shahid ka meaning kaya hai.//


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syednaami

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #12 on: April 29, 2008, 06:52:51 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on April 29, 2008, 02:47:44 PM

yaha bhi kuch farma dete to yaha bhi agge likhne ka moka mil jaata!!

waise shahid ka meaning kaya hai.//

Zaroor likhta par thoda subject change hai to naya bana diya.

SHAAHID = Eye witness, witness person, Gavaah, gavaahi denevala

Usage = Adaalat men Ek hi Shahid paish kia gaya.


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Pooja

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #13 on: April 29, 2008, 11:05:27 PM »

Yah bhi to apka he shuru kiya hua subject hai!!!


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sarthika

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #14 on: April 30, 2008, 12:05:22 AM »

Dard nahi hai kaha, yah tu mujhe batla de
Nai zindagi ke janam se, maran tak ka samjha de

Phir kyun ek toote dil per, itani udaas rahti ho
Hai kon puran sukhi, uska pata mujhko bhi batla de

Khushi jo bhi mile, usko bhi to apne pass bula le
Dard ho jayege door, jara sa jo tu muskura de

Sapno mai bhali hai, khayalo ki yah sari baatein
Per haqiqat ko, in khayalo se milana bhoola de

Dil mai dohra, her ek choti se choti khushi ko
Khamoshio mai apni, thori si gungunahat mila de

Dard ke silsillo main, Khushio ko bhi mila de
Sarthika ki is baat ko, Pooja tu dil se apna le!!!

Dard nahi hai kaha, yah tu mujhe batla de
Nai zindagi ke janam se, maran tak ka samjha de.....


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