Aakhir Kab Tak -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

syednaami

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«Reply #15 on: April 30, 2008, 06:29:56 AM »

Sarthika Jee,

Wah wah kya andaz hai aapka, subhanallah aap ka kalaam sun kar phir aapne likhne par majboor kardiya.
Buhat shukriya apni nazm paish karne ka.

S Naami

Quote from: sarthika

Khushi jo bhi mile, usko bhi to apne pass bula le
Dard ho jayege door, jara sa jo tu muskura de

Yeh Misra kamaal ka matlab rakhta. Bravo!


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #16 on: May 01, 2008, 09:41:09 PM »

Bohot umda kalam sab ne pesh kiye.

s.naami ji bohot achchha he.
sarthika ji hamesha ki tarha bohot umda likha he aap ne.

pooja ji aap ka kalam haqiqat ke zyada qareeb he, balke khuli huai haqiqat he, log galat fehmi rakhte hen, magar ham dard ke liye dunya ko nahi chhod te balke zindagi ko jeete bhi hen or apne dad ke bhi wafadaar rehte hen, kam az kam ham use thookar nahi marte, door nahi bhagte, khaas kar jab kisi pyare ka diya huwa gam ho to use pyaar karte hen, dulaar te hen, dhutkaarte nahi.


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syednaami

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #17 on: May 01, 2008, 09:51:31 PM »

Randeri Muhtaram,
Aap aye to yeh nazam mukammal hui. Tashreef aavari ka mashkoor hun.


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Pooja

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #18 on: May 01, 2008, 09:57:47 PM »

Sayyid ji,

Dard milte rahe kitne bhi,
zindagi jeene se rukte nahi
chalati hi rahti hai zindagi,
magar yah koi zindagi to nahi

Syed Muhtaram tongue3

Apka jawab is post mai kab ayega!!!


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #19 on: May 01, 2008, 10:22:58 PM »

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syednaami

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #20 on: May 01, 2008, 10:39:01 PM »

Lajawaab kardiya mian

Har dard ka ek maza hota hai
gar ziyada ho to saza hota hai
Diye ki tarah jalen bhi to kya
Jot se bhi to parwana hi jalta hai


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Pooja

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #21 on: May 01, 2008, 11:29:16 PM »

wah bahoot khoob Sayyed jii and syid(Sami)jii!!!


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Pooja

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #22 on: May 02, 2008, 05:00:18 PM »

Quote from: sarthika on April 30, 2008, 12:05:22 AM

Dard nahi hai kaha, yah tu mujhe batla de
Nai zindagi ke janam se, maran tak ka samjha de

Phir kyun ek toote dil per, itani udaas rahti ho
Hai kon puran sukhi, uska pata mujhko bhi batla de

Khushi jo bhi mile, usko bhi to apne pass bula le
Dard ho jayege door, jara sa jo tu muskura de

Sapno mai bhali hai, khayalo ki yah sari baatein
Per haqiqat ko, in khayalo se milana bhoola de

Dil mai dohra, her ek choti se choti khushi ko
Khamoshio mai apni, thori si gungunahat mila de

Dard ke silsillo main, Khushio ko bhi mila de
Sarthika ki is baat ko, Pooja tu dil se apna le!!!

Dard nahi hai kaha, yah tu mujhe batla de
Nai zindagi ke janam se, maran tak ka samjha de.....

Dard hai her taraf yah samjh mai ayya hai
Per jisne bhi paya, usko sirf apna hi najar ayya hai

Ek hi dil tha jo toot gaya, ab samjh na kuch ayya hai
Kitna bhi chah kar, yah dil uska moh na chor paya hai

Khushi jab bhi mile, aor uski yaad dila gai
Her khushi main, hota agr wo sath, yahi yaad ayya hai

Sapno main khush hokar he kuch sakoon paaya hai
Mere itne se sakoon per bhi kyun tumne sawal uthaya hai

Khushi nahi hoti gawara, zindagi ko gumo se hi sajaya hai
Jab bhi chaha gungunana, tab tab ek wo hi yaad ayya hai

Khushi ke sillsille main, dard khud akar mil jaate hai
Jitna bhi chaha khushi ko, utna hi dard paya hai

Dard hai her taraf yah samjh mai ayya hai
Per jisne bhi paya, usko sirf apna hi najar ayya hai


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #23 on: May 02, 2008, 07:54:45 PM »

Quote from: syednaami on May 01, 2008, 10:39:01 PM

Lajawaab kardiya mian

Har dard ka ek maza hota hai
gar ziyada ho to saza hota hai
Diye ki tarah jalen bhi to kya
Jot se bhi to parwana hi jalta hai

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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #24 on: May 02, 2008, 07:59:29 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on May 02, 2008, 05:00:18 PM

Wah pooja ji Waaaah Applause


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Pooja

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #25 on: May 02, 2008, 08:16:37 PM »

BAHOOT BAHOOT SHUKARIA SAYYID JI


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syednaami

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #26 on: May 02, 2008, 11:06:48 PM »

Superb


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natural

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #27 on: May 03, 2008, 06:52:05 AM »

Nicely written Syednaami, Pooja & Sarthika.. Keep it up.. Usual Smile


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syednaami

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #28 on: May 03, 2008, 05:14:53 PM »

Thanks a lot Mr. Natural.
So nice of you.


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Sonia01

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Re: Aakhir Kab Tak

«Reply #29 on: May 03, 2008, 05:40:23 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on May 02, 2008, 05:00:18 PM

Bahut khoob Pooja didi Applause

Sarthika jee aap ne b behtarin kalam likha hai Applause


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