~~"AAKHIRI TASSALI"~~

by k.shael on March 05, 2009, 08:09:06 AM
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Dil ke har bejaar saans khil uthegi uss
din,Dene aa jayega wo aakhiri baar tasalli
jiss din,

Aankhoon me bhi chamak uthengi uss din,
Deedaar-e-bewafa-yaar ho jaayega aakhiri
Baar jiss din,

Waada raha sab gham bhula denge uss din,
Wo bhool jaane ki ijajat dene aa jayega
aakhri baar jiss din…

Rooh ko meri mil jaayega sakoon uss din,
Wo widaa karne namm aankhon se aakhri baar
aayega jiss din…

Shally.
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«Reply #1 on: March 05, 2009, 08:12:49 AM »
Waah Waah Waah Waah,.

Kamaal Ka Likha Hai Tumne Shally Nice One Yaar,.
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«Reply #2 on: March 05, 2009, 08:15:03 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on March 05, 2009, 08:09:06 AM
Dil ke har bejaar saans khil uthegi uss
din,Dene aa jayega wo aakhiri baar tasalli
jiss din,

Aankhoon me bhi chamak uthengi uss din,
Deedaar-e-bewafa-yaar ho jaayega aakhiri
Baar jiss din,

Waada raha sab gham bhula denge uss din,
Wo bhool jaane ki ijajat dene aa jayega
aakhri baar jiss din…

Rooh ko meri mil jaayega sakoon uss din,
Wo widaa karne namm aankhon se aakhri baar
aayega jiss din…

Shally.




Tera Har Din Uske Baad Sawar Jaayega,.
Jab Ghamon Ka Daur Zindagi Se Teri Guzar Jaayega,.

Tune Jis Kadar Roke Kaati Hai Zindagi "Shally,.
Khushiyon Ka Jab Pal Tere Ghar Aayega, Wo Tehar Jaayega,.

__________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #3 on: March 05, 2009, 08:28:56 AM »
shally bohut acha likha hai aapne
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«Reply #4 on: March 05, 2009, 10:07:37 AM »
Bohat Khoob K.shael......
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«Reply #5 on: March 05, 2009, 10:19:45 AM »
hmm...shally once again touching lines...bahut bahut khoob... Clapping Smiley   Applause God bless u...
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«Reply #6 on: March 05, 2009, 01:32:27 PM »
Very Nice work Shally....nice reply Azeem
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«Reply #7 on: March 05, 2009, 01:37:11 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on March 05, 2009, 01:32:27 PM
Very Nice work Shally....nice reply Azeem

Shukriya Talat Didi,.
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«Reply #8 on: March 06, 2009, 04:17:06 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on March 05, 2009, 08:09:06 AM
Dil ke har bejaar saans khil uthegi uss
din,Dene aa jayega wo aakhiri baar tasalli
jiss din,

Aankhoon me bhi chamak uthengi uss din,
Deedaar-e-bewafa-yaar ho jaayega aakhiri
Baar jiss din,

Waada raha sab gham bhula denge uss din,
Wo bhool jaane ki ijajat dene aa jayega
aakhri baar jiss din…

Rooh ko meri mil jaayega sakoon uss din,
Wo widaa karne namm aankhon se aakhri baar
aayega jiss din…

Shally.


Bahut Khoob, Shally Ji  Applause

Very touching lines!
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«Reply #9 on: March 06, 2009, 04:18:15 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 05, 2009, 08:15:03 AM


Tera Har Din Uske Baad Sawar Jaayega,.
Jab Ghamon Ka Daur Zindagi Se Teri Guzar Jaayega,.

Tune Jis Kadar Roke Kaati Hai Zindagi "Shally,.
Khushiyon Ka Jab Pal Tere Ghar Aayega, Wo Tehar Jaayega,.

__________________________-Jaanasheen-

Very nice reply, Azeem Applause
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«Reply #10 on: March 06, 2009, 04:37:47 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on March 05, 2009, 08:09:06 AM
Dil ke har bejaar saans khil uthegi uss
din,Dene aa jayega wo aakhiri baar tasalli
jiss din,

Aankhoon me bhi chamak uthengi uss din,
Deedaar-e-bewafa-yaar ho jaayega aakhiri
Baar jiss din,

Waada raha sab gham bhula denge uss din,
Wo bhool jaane ki ijajat dene aa jayega
aakhri baar jiss din…

Rooh ko meri mil jaayega sakoon uss din,
Wo widaa karne namm aankhon se aakhri baar
aayega jiss din…

Shally.

Very Nice Shallyji
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«Reply #11 on: March 06, 2009, 04:38:46 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 05, 2009, 08:15:03 AM


Tera Har Din Uske Baad Sawar Jaayega,.
Jab Ghamon Ka Daur Zindagi Se Teri Guzar Jaayega,.

Tune Jis Kadar Roke Kaati Hai Zindagi "Shally,.
Khushiyon Ka Jab Pal Tere Ghar Aayega, Wo Tehar Jaayega,.

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Bahoot Khoob Jaanasheen Sahab
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«Reply #12 on: March 06, 2009, 05:59:36 AM »
Very nice shally ji Applause Applause :clap
Nice one too Azeem ji Thumbs UP
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«Reply #13 on: March 06, 2009, 11:46:44 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 05, 2009, 08:12:49 AM
Waah Waah Waah Waah,.

Kamaal Ka Likha Hai Tumne Shally Nice One Yaar,.





Shukriya Azeem Ji,

Shally..
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«Reply #14 on: March 06, 2009, 11:48:50 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 05, 2009, 08:15:03 AM


Tera Har Din Uske Baad Sawar Jaayega,.
Jab Ghamon Ka Daur Zindagi Se Teri Guzar Jaayega,.

Tune Jis Kadar Roke Kaati Hai Zindagi "Shally,.
Khushiyon Ka Jab Pal Tere Ghar Aayega, Wo Tehar Jaayega,.

__________________________-Jaanasheen-

Bahut khoob likha hai Azeem Ji,

Rokar kaati hai jiss tarah zindagi,
dekhna ek din isi tarah rote hue wida ho jaayenge,

Mere jhakham to na bhare hai barso baad bhi,
Par aacha hai kam se kam ehsaas to mar jaayenge,

Shally.
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