aakhri baar mai mahfil me aaya hu"Raahi"

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«Reply #15 on: August 28, 2010, 07:21:52 PM »
hmmm... ab mera number aayaa kuch likhne ka....

maine aapki poem padhi fir likhne waala tha... "bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... bahut hi pyaari kavita hai...!!!" 
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aur wahin khatam ho jaataa... fir maine aapke poem me comments padhe aur aapke responses bhi padhe... achcha lagaa aapne jo bhi response diya hai... bahut achcha laga... main aapki taraf se sabko ye kehna chahunga....


hum is shauk se nahi likhte ki koi padhe aur wah wah kahe,
hum to is shauk se likhte hain ki apna dard kam kar saken,

jahaan me log aur honge jo shayari numaaish ke liye karte hain,
hum apne shabdon ki numaaish nahi dil ki baat kahaa karte hain,

aake padhna meri ghazal, na ho pasand to waapas chale jaana,
kehna ho jo bhi meri ghazal ke baare me dil se tum keh jaana,

humko na hunar hai likhne ka, na kabhi sikha hai ki kaise likha karte hain,
hum to wo ghayal hain, jo apne dil ke zakhmon ko shabdon me bayaan karte hain...
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«Reply #16 on: August 28, 2010, 07:25:37 PM »
Quote from: klaskar on August 28, 2010, 07:21:52 PM
hmmm... ab mera number aayaa kuch likhne ka....

maine aapki poem padhi fir likhne waala tha... "bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... bahut hi pyaari kavita hai...!!!" 
 Applause Applause Applause

aur wahin khatam ho jaataa... fir maine aapke poem me comments padhe aur aapke responses bhi padhe... achcha lagaa aapne jo bhi response diya hai... bahut achcha laga... main aapki taraf se sabko ye kehna chahunga....


hum is shauk se nahi likhte ki koi padhe aur wah wah kahe,
hum to is shauk se likhte hain ki apna dard kam kar saken,

jahaan me log aur honge jo shayari numaaish ke liye karte hain,
hum apne shabdon ki numaaish nahi dil ki baat kahaa karte hain,

aake padhna meri ghazal, na ho pasand to waapas chale jaana,
kehna ho jo bhi meri ghazal ke baare me dil se tum keh jaana,

humko na hunar hai likhne ka, na kabhi sikha hai ki kaise likha karte hain,
hum to wo ghayal hain, jo apne dil ke zakhmon ko shabdon me bayaan karte hain...



uffffffffffffff........kya bacha kehne ko ab mere pas kapil ji.......
laajawabbbb ji .......
behad khubsurat alfaaz aur dil ki sachchi baat.......
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«Reply #17 on: August 28, 2010, 07:29:37 PM »
 Thankyou ! 

Thank you so much hai ji... bas flow me likhta gaya ... achcha lagaa jaanke ki aapko pasand aayaa...!!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 28, 2010, 07:25:37 PM
uffffffffffffff........kya bacha kehne ko ab mere pas kapil ji.......
laajawabbbb ji .......
behad khubsurat alfaaz aur dil ki sachchi baat.......
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«Reply #18 on: August 28, 2010, 07:38:36 PM »
raahi ji likhi to bahut hi achhi hai  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:par ye kahin fit nahin honi chahiye.ek yoindia shayar ne aisa hi kuch likha tha aur really dobara wo yoindia pe nahin aaya .aap aisa nahin karna.
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«Reply #19 on: August 28, 2010, 07:42:03 PM »
Bilkul sahi kahaa Suresh ji ne... hum Rahi ji jaise ek achche kavi aur ek achche dost ko humse dur nahi jaane dena chahte... Rahi ji kahin nahi jaa rahe hain....!!!

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on August 28, 2010, 07:38:36 PM
raahi ji likhi to bahut hi achhi hai  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:par ye kahin fit nahin honi chahiye.ek yoindia shayar ne aisa hi kuch likha tha aur really dobara wo yoindia pe nahin aaya .aap aisa nahin karna.
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«Reply #20 on: August 30, 2010, 05:44:19 AM »
Quote from: klaskar on August 28, 2010, 07:42:03 PM
Bilkul sahi kahaa Suresh ji ne... hum Rahi ji jaise ek achche kavi aur ek achche dost ko humse dur nahi jaane dena chahte... Rahi ji kahin nahi jaa rahe hain....!!!
Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on August 28, 2010, 07:38:36 PM
raahi ji likhi to bahut hi achhi hai  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:par ye kahin fit nahin honi chahiye.ek yoindia shayar ne aisa hi kuch likha tha aur really dobara wo yoindia pe nahin aaya .aap aisa nahin karna.


ji aap dono ki baton se mai sahmat hu aur han suresh ji mai kabhi aap logon ka sath nahi chhodonga

par ek baat ye b hai ke mai abhi kuch dino ke liye nahi aaonga so dnt worry

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aap sab ka chhota sa Mitra

"Raahi" *love* #The King of Way#


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«Reply #21 on: August 30, 2010, 05:47:29 AM »
Quote from: klaskar on August 28, 2010, 07:21:52 PM
hmmm... ab mera number aayaa kuch likhne ka....

maine aapki poem padhi fir likhne waala tha... "bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... bahut hi pyaari kavita hai...!!!" 
 Applause Applause Applause

aur wahin khatam ho jaataa... fir maine aapke poem me comments padhe aur aapke responses bhi padhe... achcha lagaa aapne jo bhi response diya hai... bahut achcha laga... main aapki taraf se sabko ye kehna chahunga....


hum is shauk se nahi likhte ki koi padhe aur wah wah kahe,
hum to is shauk se likhte hain ki apna dard kam kar saken,

jahaan me log aur honge jo shayari numaaish ke liye karte hain,
hum apne shabdon ki numaaish nahi dil ki baat kahaa karte hain,

aake padhna meri ghazal, na ho pasand to waapas chale jaana,
kehna ho jo bhi meri ghazal ke baare me dil se tum keh jaana,

humko na hunar hai likhne ka, na kabhi sikha hai ki kaise likha karte hain,
hum to wo ghayal hain, jo apne dil ke zakhmon ko shabdon me bayaan karte hain...



kapil ji shayad aap ki ye post mere ab tak sari gajals me mili aap ki sabse achi post hai

mai hamesha aapki is post ko sambhal kar rakhunga
apne vishesh diry me jise mai apne sine se laga kar sota hu
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«Reply #22 on: August 31, 2010, 01:33:12 AM »
Quote from: Rahi2001 on August 27, 2010, 09:53:23 AM
ek aakhri baar mai mahfil me aaya hu
bhigi hui aankhon se shabdon ko sajaya hu
kabhi na lout ke aaonga ab yahan par mai
maaf karna mere apnon mai sab ko sataya hu

nahi ab koi "Raahi" yahan aayega
nahi ab koi kisi ko apna banayega
nahi hogi kabhi ruswa yahan riston ki diwaren
nahi jalega dil kisi ka jaise mai jalaya hu
maaf karna ...................

sahi hai koi kisi ka itna hamsafar nahi hota
manjil sabki alag hai koi sathi-e-dagar nahi hota
nahi milta hai kisi ko jahan me dil se jitne wala
mai har pal is jamane ko bahut aajmaya hu
maaf karna....................

bahut rota hai dil mera jab kabhi tot jata hai
bade armaan hai isme jo piche chhut jata hai
kabhi miljaogy mujhko to mai sab kuch bataonga
abhi to bas mai dil ko roona sikhaya hu
maaf karna ...................




Good one Rahi Ji
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«Reply #23 on: August 31, 2010, 06:41:08 AM »
Quote from: Rahi2001 on August 28, 2010, 10:33:48 AM

bhai mai aaj tak kisi kavi sammelan ya mushayre me nahi gaya hu aur na hi kavita ki barikiyon se parichit hu mai wahi likhta hu jo mere dil me hota hai aur sab ko bata deta hu

dard me rota hu jab mere shabd bhi ro dete hai
khushi me hansta hu jab mere shabd bhi hans lete hai
koi nahi mera inshabdon ke siwa
main sansen leta hu to mere sath ye bhi ji lete hai

bhai mai teri kisi baat ko kabhi anyatha nahi longa tu apni har baat nishfirka hokar bol sakta aur fir mai kyon bura manon mujhe yahan sikhne ko mil raha hai mai koi commpition me to nahi khada hu jahan nombers milty hai

mai sirf apne dil ki bat sunana chahta hu jise sun kar koi daad de ya dant de mujhe koi farak nahi padta

ok

aur han ab se har baat ek bade bhai ki tarah se boldena

aur rahi baat meri lang. ki to asal me mai aisa hi hu
ek baar fata hua dudh sudhar jayega par mai kabhi nahi sudhar sakta
kya karon dil ka gulaam hu na aur dil itni aasani se gamon ko bhulne nahi deta



oyeeee ruk kitna bolega itna to sunny deol bhi nahi bolta~

hahaha nice impressive reply~
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«Reply #24 on: August 31, 2010, 06:53:41 AM »
Quote from: klaskar on August 28, 2010, 07:21:52 PM
hmmm... ab mera number aayaa kuch likhne ka....

maine aapki poem padhi fir likhne waala tha... "bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... bahut hi pyaari kavita hai...!!!"  
 Applause Applause Applause

aur wahin khatam ho jaataa... fir maine aapke poem me comments padhe aur aapke responses bhi padhe... achcha lagaa aapne jo bhi response diya hai... bahut achcha laga... main aapki taraf se sabko ye kehna chahunga....


hum is shauk se nahi likhte ki koi padhe aur wah wah kahe,
hum to is shauk se likhte hain ki apna dard kam kar saken,

jahaan me log aur honge jo shayari numaaish ke liye karte hain,
hum apne shabdon ki numaaish nahi dil ki baat kahaa karte hain,

aake padhna meri ghazal, na ho pasand to waapas chale jaana,
kehna ho jo bhi meri ghazal ke baare me dil se tum keh jaana,

humko na hunar hai likhne ka, na kabhi sikha hai ki kaise likha karte hain,
hum to wo ghayal hain, jo apne dil ke zakhmon ko shabdon me bayaan karte hain...



wah ji wahhhh..kuchh hamare andaz me..


yunhi jab tanhai me khuda se mulaqat hoti he
dil e shabda nikalte he kisi shayari ki nayi barsaat hoti he,

likhte nahi ham kisi inaam ki chahat me-e-dost
dard he ek syaahi ka badal panne par to bas barsaat hoti he,

shayari kya he likhne kehene sunne ka naam nahi
haal-e-dil ki koi tabeer nahi dil se dil ki baat hoti he,

mujhe fark nahi padta pathathar bhi mare zamana agar
dil ki keheta hu "Abhi" or dil ki baat to khuda ki baat hoti he~
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«Reply #25 on: August 31, 2010, 07:04:11 AM »
Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on August 31, 2010, 06:53:41 AM
wah ji wahhhh..kuchh hamare andaz me..


yunhi jab tanhai me khuda se mulaqat hoti he
dil e shabda nikalte he kisi shayari ki nayi barsaat hoti he,

likhte nahi ham kisi inaam ki chahat me-e-dost
dard he ek syaahi ka badal panne par to bas barsaat hoti he,

shayari kya he likhne kehene sunne ka naam nahi
haal-e-dil ki koi tabeer nahi dil se dil ki baat hoti he,

mujhe fark nahi padta pathathar bhi mare zamana agar
dil ki keheta hu "Abhi" or dil ki baat to khuda ki baat hoti he~

mastam abhi bht mast......its just wowwwww.......

kehne ko to humne bhi kahi thi dil ki hi baatein
par tumne suni aur muhh fer kar chal diye fir ek baar.........
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«Reply #26 on: August 31, 2010, 07:13:48 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya Rahi ji....!!!

Quote from: Rahi2001 on August 30, 2010, 05:47:29 AM
kapil ji shayad aap ki ye post mere ab tak sari gajals me mili aap ki sabse achi post hai

mai hamesha aapki is post ko sambhal kar rakhunga
apne vishesh diry me jise mai apne sine se laga kar sota hu
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«Reply #27 on: August 31, 2010, 07:14:20 AM »
shukriya Abhi ji... aur aapne bhi bahut hi khoob likha hai....!!!!

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on August 31, 2010, 06:53:41 AM
wah ji wahhhh..kuchh hamare andaz me..


yunhi jab tanhai me khuda se mulaqat hoti he
dil e shabda nikalte he kisi shayari ki nayi barsaat hoti he,

likhte nahi ham kisi inaam ki chahat me-e-dost
dard he ek syaahi ka badal panne par to bas barsaat hoti he,

shayari kya he likhne kehene sunne ka naam nahi
haal-e-dil ki koi tabeer nahi dil se dil ki baat hoti he,

mujhe fark nahi padta pathathar bhi mare zamana agar
dil ki keheta hu "Abhi" or dil ki baat to khuda ki baat hoti he~
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