~~~Aakhri Safar~~~:Shayri-E-Dard

baadal102

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Behne do aaj mari in aankho se aanshu,
Saayad in se kuch tadap kam ho jaaye,

Khatam ho jaane do aaj Baadal ka sab kuch,
Saayad dil ki lagi Aag kuch kam ho jaaye,

Utar jaane do sine main khanjar yaar ka,
Saayad sine ki jalan kuch kam ho jaaye,

Maang lo kuch dua.yen mare liye bhi,
Saayad mera aakhri safar kuch aasan ho jaaye,

Saayad mera aakhri safar kuch aasan ho jaaye........

Yeh post maine apne birthday pe khud ke liye likhi hai.
Happy Birth Day to me. 13th oct.

Baadal tearyeyed


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honeyrose

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Re: ~~~Aakhri Safar~~~

«Reply #1 on: October 12, 2008, 05:25:17 PM »

Quote from: baadal102 on October 12, 2008, 04:11:42 PM

Itna achcha likha hai aapne ...
wish you happy birthday baadal ji...


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syednaami

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Re: ~~~Aakhri Safar~~~

«Reply #2 on: October 12, 2008, 05:36:12 PM »

Baadal miyan,
Bahut badhiya kya khoob likha hai khud ke liye, Wah. Applause


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angel4u

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Re: ~~~Aakhri Safar~~~

«Reply #3 on: October 13, 2008, 02:59:25 AM »

Ver very nice...
and happy birthday to you dear...


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baadal102

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Re: ~~~Aakhri Safar~~~

«Reply #4 on: October 13, 2008, 04:44:00 AM »

thanx a lot
honey ji
naami ji
& cute angel ji

Baadal


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: ~~~Aakhri Safar~~~

«Reply #5 on: October 13, 2008, 06:41:25 AM »

bohut khoob baadal ji

tadap dil ki bhujane k liye
na duur aur jaa mujhe aajmane k liye

tere hi khaton ko padh-padhkar zinda hoon mein
na bhula mujhe kisi begaane k liye

kaisi dua hai kaisa hai safar baadal
na badal yu tu bhi zamane k liye

ut.thte the jo dusron ki duaon k liye haath
fir aaj kyu haath khali hai apne hi liye


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baadal102

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Re: ~~~Aakhri Safar~~~

«Reply #6 on: October 13, 2008, 07:16:56 AM »

Bahut aacha likha hai aap ne bhawna ji

Jamane ki di hue har sogat kabool ki hum.ne,
Khud ko raakh ker ke bhi har baat nibhayi hum.ne,

Har ilzaam seh seh ke raat ro ke gujaari hum.ne,
Dard sine ka chupa ke hontho pe khushi di hum.ne,

Nahi badle the hum or na hi ki hai koi aajmaish,
Dua.ye maangi hai sirf saath rehne ko hum.ne,

Diya hai sab kuch BAADAL ne sab ko hamesha,
Issiliye apne haath khali rakhe hai hum.ne..............

Baadal


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: ~~~Aakhri Safar~~~

«Reply #7 on: October 13, 2008, 07:29:09 AM »

bohut acha likha hai baadal ji Applause

na luta khud ko is tarah sabke liye
k kuch na reh jaaye kahin tere apne liye

duaon se kab kuch mila hai kisi ko baadal
har koi jeeta hai bas yahan apne hi liye

safar zindgi ka na kam hota hai na aasaan
tu khud ko faulaad bana apne hi liye

na barsaa dei tu khud ko tu banke baarish
kuch to rakh ab tu hosla apne bhi liye


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Re: ~~~Aakhri Safar~~~

«Reply #8 on: October 14, 2008, 04:52:22 AM »

Quote from: baadal102 on October 12, 2008, 04:11:42 PM

Bahut Bahut Khoob Badalji..

Equally Good Bhawnaji..


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: ~~~Aakhri Safar~~~

«Reply #9 on: October 14, 2008, 05:22:47 AM »

thnk u khwaish ji


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baadal102

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Re: ~~~Aakhri Safar~~~

«Reply #10 on: October 14, 2008, 06:35:44 AM »

thanx a lot khwaish ji

Baadal


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k.shael

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Re: ~~~Aakhri Safar~~~

«Reply #11 on: October 14, 2008, 06:36:54 AM »

BAHUT KHOOB BAADAL JI,
SORRY BAHUT LATE REPLY
KIYA ISS BAAR...
BY. K.SHAEL


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baadal102

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Re: ~~~Aakhri Safar~~~

«Reply #12 on: October 14, 2008, 07:01:24 AM »

thanx a lot shael ji
are iss main sorry wali kya baat hue.
its ok

Baadal


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Pooja

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Re: ~~~Aakhri Safar~~~

«Reply #13 on: October 16, 2008, 04:13:07 PM »

good work Baadal ji and Bhawna


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baadal102

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Re: ~~~Aakhri Safar~~~

«Reply #14 on: October 17, 2008, 06:41:49 AM »

thanx a lot pooja ji
welcome

Baadal


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