Aangan me teri hain......( Ghayel )

by sajid_ghayel on April 26, 2009, 03:37:47 PM
Pages: [1]
Print
Author  (Read 1233 times)
sajid_ghayel
Guest
Purani kisi thread me yeh kalam mil gaya tha nayee post banakar pesh kar raha hu....

Door hum nahi, humse ho jate hain sab
Satana rulana apno ko, yeh aadat meri hain

Baat sirf meri ana ki hoti, to khud ko mana lete
Deewar kaise woh giraoo, jo aangan me teri hain

Gila na tha koi, talluk to tumhi ne toda tha
Na tumhe manne ki aadat, na manane ki haisiyat meri hain

Aaj tu kahe to khudh ko jala du, agarche roshni ho zindagi me teri
Ghayel to hain parwana, jalna kismat meri hain

-Sajid Ghayel-
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
SAB POOCHTE HAIN...........(GHAYEL) by sajid_ghayel in Shairy-e-Dost (Friendship Poetry) « 1 2  All »
Teri Wafa Mili........(Ghayel) by sajid_ghayel in Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai « 1 2  All »
Ghayel samajhta hain......(Ghayel) by sajid_ghayel in Shayri for Dard -e- Judai « 1 2 ... 7 8 »
Rulata q hain......(Ghayel) by sajid_ghayel in Shayri-E-Dard
----- /// Tasveer Teri Banaate Hain Mitaate Hain /// ----- by ~Hriday~ in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq « 1 2  All »
Roja
Guest
«Reply #1 on: April 26, 2009, 04:22:45 PM »
Bahut accha likha hai aapne. Usual Smile
Logged
Talat
Guest
«Reply #2 on: April 26, 2009, 05:06:09 PM »
Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji  icon_thumleft
Logged
poppoetry
Guest
«Reply #3 on: April 26, 2009, 06:48:13 PM »
bahut behtrin sajid ji.

tanhayion ne tod di hm dono ki ana
aaina baat krne pr mjbur ho gya (NM)
Logged
dead heart
Guest
«Reply #4 on: April 26, 2009, 07:21:30 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 26, 2009, 03:37:47 PM
Purani kisi thread me yeh kalam mil gaya tha nayee post banakar pesh kar raha hu....

Door hum nahi, humse ho jate hain sab
Satana rulana apno ko, yeh aadat meri hain

Baat sirf meri ana ki hoti, to khud ko mana lete
Deewar kaise woh giraoo, jo aangan me teri hain

Gila na tha koi, talluk to tumhi ne toda tha
Na tumhe manne ki aadat, na manane ki haisiyat meri hain

Aaj tu kahe to khudh ko jala du, agarche roshni ho zindagi me teri
Ghayel to hain parwana, jalna kismat meri hain

-Sajid Ghayel-

Bahaut khoob Sajid Saheb... Applause
Logged
madhuwesh
Guest
«Reply #5 on: April 26, 2009, 11:01:10 PM »
wow very nice.mindblowing.
Logged
Pooja
Guest
«Reply #6 on: April 27, 2009, 01:22:11 AM »
wah wah kaya baat hai.... wah sajid... her ek line kamaal ki buni hai apne... Good work
Logged
saaz_haldwanvi
Guest
«Reply #7 on: April 27, 2009, 03:24:42 AM »
 Applause "saaz haldwanvi"
Logged
khamosh_aawaaz
Guest
«Reply #8 on: April 27, 2009, 05:29:05 AM »
 

bahaut achchey.....................SG
Logged
jannatjahan
Guest
«Reply #9 on: April 27, 2009, 10:40:59 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Dear Applause Applause Applause
Logged
sajid_ghayel
Guest
«Reply #10 on: April 27, 2009, 03:59:03 PM »
Quote from: Roja on April 26, 2009, 04:22:45 PM
Bahut accha likha hai aapne. Usual Smile

Bohat bohat shukriyaaaa Roja...
Logged
sajid_ghayel
Guest
«Reply #11 on: April 29, 2009, 10:26:22 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on April 26, 2009, 05:06:09 PM
Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji  icon_thumleft

Thank You Talat.........
Logged
sajid_ghayel
Guest
«Reply #12 on: May 07, 2009, 07:00:19 AM »
Quote from: @kaash on April 26, 2009, 05:40:52 PM
Very nice Sajid bhai

Shukriyaa Kaash..
Logged
sajid_ghayel
Guest
«Reply #13 on: June 12, 2009, 09:28:44 AM »
Quote from: poppoetry on April 26, 2009, 06:48:13 PM
bahut behtrin sajid ji.

tanhayion ne tod di hm dono ki ana
aaina baat krne pr mjbur ho gya (NM)

Thank You PP for your comment and sharing beautiful sher...
Logged
chitralsony
Guest
«Reply #14 on: June 12, 2009, 09:38:31 AM »
behtareen as ever ghayal ji
Logged
Pages: [1]
Print
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Shayri-E-Dard > Topic: Aangan me teri hain......( Ghayel )
Jump to:  


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 08, 2024, 03:57:21 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
woh muj se mere khamoshi ...
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]
HUME KAHAN ,,,,, SAAHILL
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:08 AM]
savaaloN ke hal kya javaa...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]
Kal halki halki barish th...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]
कवि और कविता
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]
parhezz ,,,, saahill
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]
mere lafzh kabhi,,,, saah...
by saahill
[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]
Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Hifazat - a thriller love...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:55:06 AM]
INTEQAM - A sequel to "Hi...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 06:58:58 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.108 seconds with 23 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8505 Real Poets and poetry admirer