aankh khuli tuta hai sapna

by jeet jainam on February 24, 2014, 02:50:22 AM
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der o diwaar par likha hai dard apna,
dekha uska khuwaab jo na tha apna,

kat ti nahi zindagi tare bin,
suna ho gaya har raah apna,

ajnabi bankar aaye ,apna banakar chore gaye,
bhool gaya hu seher o garaaam apna,

katil e nazar ne jo mera kiya hai hasher,
tuta hua dil leker chala hu apna,

tanhai e alam sambhale na gaye,
kalam se dard likhne laga hu apna,

tod gaye sare woh mare bharam,
aankh khuli to tuta tha sapna,


             jj saini
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«Reply #1 on: February 24, 2014, 08:52:57 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 24, 2014, 08:58:50 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: February 24, 2014, 09:14:06 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: February 24, 2014, 10:38:48 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: February 24, 2014, 02:35:43 PM »
tanhai e alam sambhale na gaye,
kalam se dard likhne laga hu apna

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«Reply #10 on: February 24, 2014, 06:03:05 PM »
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«Reply #14 on: February 26, 2014, 11:13:11 PM »
thanku miraj sir ji
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