aankh se duur na ho

by saaz_haldwanvi on July 28, 2009, 11:52:30 AM
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Aankh se duur na ho dil se utar jayega
Waqt ka kya hai gujarta hai gujar jayega

Itna mayus na ho khilwat-e-gam se apni
Tu kabhi khud ko bhi dekhega to darr jayega

Tum sar-e-rah-e- wafa dekhte reh jaoge
Aur wo gaa ke rafaqat se utar jayega

Jindgi teri ata hai to ye jaane wala
Teri bakhshish teri dehleez pe dhar jayega,

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saaz_haldwanvi
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«Reply #1 on: July 28, 2009, 12:05:25 PM »
Bahot khoob likha hai Saaz ji

bahot ache ashaar,matla aur teesra sher bahot pasand aaye

bahot khoob  Applause Applause Applause
tarif ka shukriya kaash ji
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: July 30, 2009, 11:16:04 AM »
Very nice Sharing Saaz Ji
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saaz_haldwanvi
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«Reply #3 on: August 02, 2009, 08:00:56 AM »
Very nice Sharing Saaz Ji
thanx celmira
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sarfaraz_sagar
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«Reply #4 on: August 02, 2009, 08:46:07 AM »
Bahut achha likha hai aapne.
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saaz_haldwanvi
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«Reply #5 on: August 02, 2009, 06:15:19 PM »
Bahut achha likha hai aapne.
shukriya sagar saheb
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waquif ansari
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«Reply #6 on: June 22, 2010, 10:11:38 AM »
Kya kahne saaz haldwanvi saheb! Kitna achhuta kalam ye aapka hai janab. Zabardast taghazzul se bhari ye ghazal paRh k maza aa gaya. Isi radeef qaafiye meiN meri bhi aik ghazal hai uske chand ashaar yahaN pesh karne ki jasaarat kar raha hooN:

Waqt ke saath kahaN iska acar jaayega
Tees rah jaayegi ye zakhm to bhar jaayega

Hum ko girdaab meiN ikbaar qadam rakhne do
Kisi toofaan ka chehra ho utar jaayega

Usko chehra pas-e-chehra ho mubaarak lekin
Aaina ghaur se dekhega to dar jaayega

(Waquif Ansari)


Aankh se duur na ho dil se utar jayega
Waqt ka kya hai gujarta hai gujar jayega

Itna mayus na ho khilwat-e-gam se apni
Tu kabhi khud ko bhi dekhega to darr jayega

Tum sar-e-rah-e- wafa dekhte reh jaoge
Aur wo gaa ke rafaqat se utar jayega

Jindgi teri ata hai to ye jaane wala
Teri bakhshish teri dehleez pe dhar jayega,

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